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wow dear jalal is so loving n caring hubby now he is protective too.
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Superb and emotional chapter Ndi
He's the best
And what the surprise??
It's the twins going home or the hottest couple (MM) will get married?? 😆
Update soon Ndi
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as all was cute chapter ndi ...
finally jodha nd d twice r out of danger. ...
jalal is so caring hubby...
I love d part to much when jodha see d kids for d 1st time... nd also jalal wish came true. ..
rahim was so cute nd lovely. ...
sujamal was very caring brother. ...
nd hamid cute mother nd grandmother. ...
update next part soon nd thanks for pm...
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Chapter 58

On satuday morning jalal just finish shower and breakfast and he is waiting outside while nurse bathed jodha, he read news on his tablet where media pulish official statement from mughals representative bout jodha and twins condition and the names of mughals heirs, people feel happy because jodha and twins save and healthy, and they can't wait for the first appereances of jalal along with jodha and twins, he wait jodha so they can visit hassan and hussain, jodha and twins are already make strong bond and jalal smile everytime he remember jodha breastfeeding twins, that's the most beautiful things he see ever.

Nurses come out and let jalal know that they are finish and jalal can come inside and said that jodha having his breakfast now then they leave, jalal enter the room and see jodha look very beautiful and fresh, she wear blue maternity dress and her hair style in ponytail, she look a jalal an smile.

" you look very beautiful my wife . . . " praise jalal while sitting on chair

Jodha blushing " you too look very handsome without beard . . . . "

" so you don't like me with beard ? " he ask

" for now i like you with clean shave . . but you look hotter with beard " tease jodha

Jalal smile with naughty " well sweety . . . i will let my beard grow one day so you will keep feel hot for your smoking hot husband " he wink shameless to her, Jodha laugh and for jalal her laugh is like beautiful music in his ears " i'm soo very happy now, my wife and my twins healthy and strong day by day . . . can't wait to take home all of you "

" me too can't wait to go home . . . i'm missing my home " reply jodha and jalal reach he hands and kiss it gentle, they look into each other eyes and know that everything will be ok because they have each other.

Moti finish shower and step ot from bathroom and she spot mirza standing in front of window, he look lost in his own mind, the last two weeks was like midnight for them, the worst day in their life when they waiting jodha to regained her conscious, they all try their best to give support for jalal and visiting hassan hussain and jodha regulary, moti feel really scare when that sick atifa shot mirza, she wished she shot her back, moto just cover her body with towel come to mira.

" baby . . . " she call him, mirza turn his head and looking at the woman who become very impotant in his life, they were supporting each other in the last two weeks, and what happened lately make him realize that he love her soo much and he like her presence in his life, and what happened to jalal and jodha make mirza realize he must appreciate the most precious thing in his life, when atifa shot him he thought that was his last moment and the only thing in his mind is this woman, he know they don't want to rush but his mind change, he want her in his life, he want to be with her every minutes, every seconds and he don't want to miss time to be with her and these lately it become hard for him to let her go home each time, he want to hold her when he is goin to sleep and sleep with peacefully in her arms.

" good morning baby " reply mirza

" what are you thinking ? you look soo serious " ask moti, she look really beautiful and hot with wet hair and her naked body only cover by towel

" i'm thinking bout future " he said

" meaning ? " she ask with confuse

" come " mirza take her hands and take her to bed and make her sit on side of bed, then he kneel in front of her, he take her hands and kiss them and he can smeel freshness and flower her skin " i've been thinking . . since what happened in the last two weeks make me realize that i want to appreciate and love the people who very important to me, do you know when atifa shot me what is the last thing in my mind ? "

" no . . . tell me " reply moti

" that time i think if i died i want to see your face for the last time, i want to said i love you for the last time and i want to said that i wont let you find another man . . and then looking what happened to jodha bhaijan and bhaijan made me want to be with you every day, every hours,every minutes and every seconds, i want to cherish every precious moment with you and i don't want to sending you home everyday then i must sleep alone, you are very important for me moti and i want us always together in happy and sadness " moti very touching with every words he said, she caress his face with love

" me too feel the same way like you do, when atifa shot you i don't want to think how my life without you and i wish i can shield you from that bullet, i'm willing to take that bullet for you as long as you are save, because i don't want to face a life without you " mirza try to hold back his tears because he never think someone will love him like they way she love him

" no baby . . i'm the one who should protect you, you are my woman and i wont let any harm come to you, you are my everything . . no i understand how bhaijan feeling when he found out about jodha bhabijan bitter past, because i will anyone who hurt you, i will go against the world if i had to just to protect you " mirza look moti into the eyes because the next what he want to say will change their fate forever " i know we agree not to rushing anything between us but now i don't want to be parted from you again baby . . so . . moti will you marry me ? be my baby forever ? be my hottie wife forever ? . . we will create our own smoking hot world together " moti tears fall on her cheeks, she never though he will propose her not like this, with her almost naked

" ooo goshhh . . . are you serious baby ? " she ask

Mirza nod with confident " serious like hell baby " he reply and moti just looking at him still can't believe this is happening, make mirza nervous with her silence " damn hottie answer it . . and i wont take no for an answer " he threat but hell he feel really nervous

Moti chuckled " of course baby . . i will marry you . . where will i find such hot and sexy man like you " tease moti, of course she will marry this great man, her man

Mirza hug her tight " ooohh baby . . i'm very happy and i promise you that we will become the smoking hot couple ever . . . " he said and tears fall on his cheeks but he wipe it out, he want to smile and laugh because this amazing woman will become his wife and he will have all the tim in the world to spend with her.

" i love you soo much mirza . . never though you will be the one for me, you are one great man and i'm very lucky that God send you to me " she said with low tone

" i love you too moti . . . the first time i saw you i knew that i will kneel in front of you but never though that you will become the most important for me, you make me a better man , you never ask or demand anything from our relationship, literally you never demand anything from me, you are different from any other girl i've dated before but that is what make you special, and that is what make me want to give everything for you " mirza release her and looking at her with soften eyes.

" you are very special for me too mirza . . because you make me feel that i'm special, you make me feel i'm the most beautiful woman and you make me perfect " mirza smile , he really undersand now the meaning of love, it's not bout finding the perfect but finding imperfect person who with her you will feel perfect.

" so we announce to our family that we are goin to marry ? " he ask

" up to you baby . . . . " reply moti and then mirza wink with naughty to moti, he look at her half naked body, and only with one move he grap the towel and rip it off show moti beautiful naked body appears in front of him, moti cover her breasts with her hands " baby what are you doin ? " she ask in surprise when mirza start to strip.

" it's time to seal my proposed " he reply with happy

" but baby . . it's time to go to hospital . . we will be late if we are doin this now " protest moti but mirza hunger for her can't compromise, he want her now with hard, fast and hot

" don't worry baby . . they will forgive us being late if they know the reason " reply mirza, the push moti back so she is laying on bed now then he climb out the bed and laying above her " now let us seal our fate baby . . i want you now moti baby, now with fast an wild " he whispers with his desire, his legs open her legs and put himself between her legs, he kiss her lips hard and rough, he force moti mouth to open then thust his tongue inside, his hands hold he breasts and kneaded them hard and moti moans with his tongue inside her, then his manhood find the wetness of her womanhood and with hard he thrust his manhood with one strong thrust, moti cant scream because her mouth cover by his, mirza hips move very fast and each time he thrust deeper and faster, and just like moti prediction they come late to hospital because once they do it for a long time and they are just leave house two hours later, mirza still smile like a wolf who just had his dessert when he enter car while moti blussing with what they are just do now.

Jodha and jalal holding the twins in their arms, jodha carry hussain and caressing his head with gentle, while jalal carry hassan and take him move around room while kissing him with very gentle, the twins just finish breastfeeding but they still wake up and seems really enjoying attention from their parents.

" you and hussain are the most handsome men in ammijan life . . . . " praise jodha with love and soften voice

Jalal raise one his eyebrow and give jodha dislike look " ooohh really . . . so they are the most handsom in your life now " he pouted

Jodha chuckled " ooohh my bad . . . you, hassan and hussain are the most handsome men in ammijan life and ammijan love you all a lot " jodha corrected and jalal smug with satisfaction, then he sit beside jodha and kiss her lips slowly, he watch the twins

" they are very handsome just like their abbujan " jodha laugh listening his praise himself

" hahaha . . yes . . and they will very naughty too like their abbujan " tease jodha

" oohhh now we can team up to tease their ammijan " reply jalal, hussain start to cry again

" he still feel hungry it seem " guess jalal, jodha then feed hussain, hussain suckled with hungrily

" you're right that my little prince still hungry . . . " reply jodha and then hassan start to cry again too

Jalal chuckled looking at hassan like his brother feel hungry " now i'm curious if hassan cry because hungry too or he want attention from his ammijan " said jalal

" possible he is hungry too " reply jodha, then when hussain stop suckled, jodha handed him to jalal and take hassan from jalal, but he stop crying the moment jodha carry him

" hah . . . he is jealous little man . . . now he is my cunning contender to take attention the woman of our life " tease jalal " but this woman love us all and will give all the same attention . . i love you all especially their ammijan, the most beautiful, kind, nice and brave woman and hassan hussain will proud to their ammijan " jodha smile with pride listening his praise for her

Jodha caress hussain and hassan head " your abbujan is the great man and will always protect you and make sure that you all will always happy . . ammijan hope you become like abbujan "

Jalal smile " no . . you two must become better man than abbujan " he correct jodha and she nod " abbujan love you two and your ammijan, the three of you are the most important person in abbujan life " jodha rest her head on his shoulder while looking at their twins.

At 11am jodha jalal friends and family come, they all watching the twins sleep in their box.

" my God bhaijan . . . they are miniature of you " said mirza with amaze looking at the twins

" wow bhaijan . . jodha bhaijan they are soo tiny but very handsome " reply bakhsi, she too always feel amaze looking at them

" yes . . they all handsome just like their abbujan " reply jodha

" and like their bhaijan " rahim protest, he climb to bed and sit on jodha's lap

Jodha hug him and kiss his cheeks " of course rahim . . their bhaijan is very handsome too "

" choti ammijan . . when you will come home ? i miss you soo much " he ask with sadly

" choti ammijan will go to home in the day after tomorrow . . ammijan missing you too " said jodha and rahim nod

" do you know choti ammijan that i can swim now " rahim proudly announce

" oooh really rahim ? " ask jalal , rahim look at jalal and nod with exciting

" yes chacajaan teach me to swim " answer rahim " do you want to see me swimming choti ammijan ? " he ask with hopefully

" of course rahim . . when choti ammijan come home you can show me " reply jodha

" that would be great choti ammijan " said rahim

Moti come to jodha and hug her " i'm happy that you are safe and now you look strong and healthy . . hassan hussain too look healthy each day . . . i'm very scare when you were in come but i believe God will help my baby and i thank to God for keep protect you " moti still can't forget how she feel when jodha being kidnapped then in coma

" even death wont have gut to near me when you and jalal around . . . " tease jodha and moti laugh

" ooh baby . . i'm happy for you " reply moti but jodha notice something different in her best friend, she don't know why but moti look more happier than usual

Selima sit on chair beside bed and she take jodha's hand and hold it " jodha . . i really sorry for leaving you alone that time, eventhough it was for our best but still i feel gulty . . " abdul looking at selima, he know she still feel guilty for leaving jodha there alone until jodha and sharifuddin in accident and then she slip into coma, abdul know selima need to hear from jodha mouth that she is not supposed to feel that way

Jodha looking at selima with her doe eyes " selima didi . . if you are the one who pregnant what would you do in that condition ? " ask jodha

Selima think first " i will ask you to runaway when you had chance . . . "

" then how come you feel guilty bout this ? " cut jodha " to ask you leave is my decision because that is the right thing to do that time . . it's better to have one escape rather than two of us being captive, we must know when we defense and when we attack . . so don't do this to yourself . . . don't feel guilty about what happened . . " abdul , jalal and others feel relieve with jodha words becaue they know that is very true

Abdul come stand behind selima and put his hands on her shoulders " see honey even jodha said the same so stop feel guilty . . leave everything because now that bas***d behind the bars, you two take away what most important to him . . freedom "

Selima touch abdul hand and hold it " ok jodha . . i will listen to your words . . i'm happy that you are fine along with hassan hussain " reply selima and jodha smile to her with happy and understanding.

" jodha . . . you are the most brave woman i ever met . . being pregnant but yet you can give a hell of fight to those bad guy . . you are truly lioness . . you are younger than me but from you i learn soo many things and that makes me want to be a better woman and bettern mother, you're protecting your kids like mama lion . . . you roar and show how sharp your claws to everyone who dare to mess with you and your kids " said amrita and jodha smile with amusement

" it's a huge compliment amrita didi . . i'm sure you and bhaijan will become amazing and great parents " reply jodha, she feel shy with her compliment

" bhaijan reallt proud you jodha . . my little princess are strong woman and i believe in future people will think twice before messing with you " jodha smile to her brother bhaijan " and that is why i can leave india in peace and relax " he announce

" you and amrita leaving ? " ask hamida

" yes aunty . . there so much important things need my attention " he reply

" ooh . . i can understand that . . hope we will meet again soon " said hamida

" yes of course we will meet again aunty . . and i will bring bobby with me if that okey " he said , bobby and bakhsi along with others feel surprise " we will close deal for his program and my top executive want to meet him since they want bobby to develop some program for my shipping company " sujamal explain the reason he want to take bobby

" ooohhh . . sujamal bhaijan thank you for . . . . "

" hey bakhsi . . no need said thank you . . just like your bhaijan me too don't see relatives when it come to business , it's pure bobby's talent and his team . . " cut sujamal then he look at bobby " prepare your self bobby because you will become hot news in business world . . and you will become a millionaire soon . . . your progam will use by all my shipping company and you will know the amount you will receive when you sign the deal " he add and bobby's heart almost jump out with happy because now the door to his future with bakhsi start to open

" yes bakhsi . . . in business world there is no such thing like brothers, sisters or even parents . . better to separate personal and business when do business " reply abdul

" true . . and my man go the taste how it's feels like being newbie in business world, eventhough you are jalaluddin muhammad akbar brother doesn't mean people will go easy on you, it's the opposite . . people will act hard ass to you and the jalaluddin wont help you even if you are drown, you must survive by your own so people will recognize for who you are not who is your bhaijan, and that is when you are gain people honor and trust " add mirza, he feel the same when he still a newbie, eventhough he work with jalal but he choose his own project, jalal only give his advice but he never involve in everything his done and so does abdul.

Bobby look at jalal and he feel very emotional " thank you bhaijan for believe in me, for give me a chance, for teaching me everything you know and help me gain my confident, when i asked your help to mentored me you without think twice take days off from you busy schedule to teach me . . not every people will do what you do for me and i will always gratefull to you for whatever you've done for me "

Jalal come to bobby and standing in front of him " you are the man my little sister very love and that's mean you already my brother, and as you know i would never teach or give opportunity to people that i think wont success but i believe in you because i've seen confidence and hard willing in your eyes . . you ready to do anything for your and bakhsi future and i really like people who willing to do hard works for their future " bakhsi feel very gratute to her brother and God that she have such amazing brother " so you go with sujamal and reach your future and happiness with your own hands " add jalal

Bobby nod while he try soo hard not to chocked by his own tears " ok bhaijan . . i will work harder from now on . . i will make bakhsi, you and all in this family proud " said bobby

" ooohh child . . i already feel proud of you " reply hamida and bobby nod and smile

Mirza then come to the center on room and look at his family, he take moti's hands and make her stand beside him " ok now . . enough with this bunny romeo . . i want to announce something " he declare and make every eyes looking at them

Jodha looking moti who look blushing and nervous and she guess what they want to announce " ooohh what is it mirza ? " ask jodha, moti looking at her best friend and she know that jodha know what mirza goin to announce, she don't know how jodha can guess but she see jodha looking at her with smile and she said congratulation in silent and moti just nod and smile with happy

" i want to announce that this morning i propose moti . . i ask her to marry me and she is agree . . we are goin to marry " declare mirza, it need one two second for everyone to realize that this is real, the flamboyant playboy finally tied the knot

" oohh man . . are you serious ? " ask bobby disbelief

" of course man . . . " reply mirza and he look at bobby with amusement " see man even i move faster than you . . . i already proposed the woman i love while you and bakhsi still learning to touchy touchy " tease mirza

" bhaijannn " protest bakhsi

" oohh my God mirza moti is it really true ? " ask jalal

" yes bhaijan . . . it's true " reply mirza

Jodha look at moti with serious " do you really ready to spend your time with this naughty man ? " he ask

Moti look back at jalal straight into his eyes " i'm ready . . . and beside he is not naughty when he is with me . . he is very nice and obedient " tease moti

" hah . . obedient my ass " reply abdul, amrita, bakhsi and selima come to moti and hug her with love, then hamida come towards mirza and moti, she take both and hands and unite them.

Hamida look at the mirza and moti " me and juhi know the moment we notice you two throw hot stare to each other that you wil end up together, my naughty playboy son never chase a nice woman . . so moti must be very special for him " moti and mirza look very surprise listening to hamida

" aunty and mother know bout us ? " moti ask disbelief

Hamida smile " yes we know . . . a mother always know " reply hamida " and i glad that my son mirza finally find someone he want to spend his life with " said hamida and mirza give her a how you know look and hamida give mirza a wink make him laugh

" yes ammijan i'm happy that finally i find the woman i love . . . . "

" ouwww . . . . . . " jalal,abdul,sujamal and bobby react in the same time

" we hear it right aren't we ? he said the words love ? " ask bobby pretending clean his ears

" oh my God . . . . i bet hell now in frozen because the naughty evil fall into love " tease jalal

" oooh geez jalal we must ready from ladies who will commit suicide the moment we drop mirza plan to marry moti to their face " abdul tease mirza too

" oooh poor you moti must face his naughty and dirty mind for the rest of your life " bobby joint the club to tease mirza

Mirza laugh listening the guys who keep teasing him but since he in happy mood he just grin " hah . . very funny guys . . yo man . . be ready man because it's you and bakhsi who will the last to get marry . . you've hear bout the last one . . . it's pure torture " he tease bobby back and then both guys smile

Jodha looking at moti with big smile on her face, moti run to her and hug her " congratulation sister " said jodha

Moti hug her tightly " thank you baby . . who can guess that evethough we married but we will live very close " she said and jodha nod and smile

" your mother know bout this moti ? " ask hamida

" no ammijan . . i will talk to her tonight " answer mirza

Hamida nod " good . . and moti . . i want your mother live with me after you two marry . . i need company in my big house and your mother definitely great companion and like you young people . . i want to have my best friends too " said hamida

Moti very surprise with hamida idea " oohhh aunty . . . . . "

" what aunty moti . . . you are now my daughter . . it's amazing God bless me with amazing daughters " said hamida and moti smile, then they all celebrate mirza and moti proposed and jalal sit beside jodha and hold her hands, this is really a rainbow after the storm, after jodha selima kidnapped, jodha in come now jodha save, twins become healthy and strong, and now moti mirza proposal, for jalal and jodha life couldn't better than this and more happier than this, jalal feel bless with everything, and he thank God for all this happiness.


The End ( For This Chapter 😆 . . sorry guys can't help to tease . . . i'm in naughty mood now )



Happy Reading . . .

Next chapter will enter a new villain 😆 God bless all your soul for bearing all my psyco villain 😉

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So I guessed is right na.. the hottest couple will get married soon.. 😆
Oh Ndi.. villain again.. who is he/she? Pratap/Benz 😆
Thank you for the update dear
And thanks a lot for the pm 😊
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very very interesting and half is mirza's page very naughty boy when he is propost their is also naughty really amamzing and verh emotional chap dear thank you for giving wounderful chap and early update. yaar who is that villi in this story scared us thank you buddy for giving wounderful and loving bond.
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awesome update dear one request dear plzz give more akdha part i'm big fan of your akdha thanks for the pm dear.

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