Shots- Together We Shine : Update 3-10-15; part 2, page 4

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Radhakrish19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: avika444
Aww jodha and jalal's bonding is so nice
Poor girl she has to spend another 30 minutes outside but thanks to jalal he made it easy.
Lovely shot dear
Liked it to the core
Continue soon
Thanks for pm:-) :-)

Yeah, they have a solid friendship. Jo and Maths don't gel well. Poor girl. You are right, Jalal was there for her. It's a small gesture but many small gestures are at the foundation of strong relationship. Thank you for the nice comment. 😃

Originally posted by: meeramiss18
Lovely update dear
loved jo ja 's bonding
poor jo hav to stand for more than 20 mins
but their banter was vry cute
plz update nxt part soon dear
thnk u so much for the pm

Thank you for your kind words. Yup, poor Jo...always caught staring outside the window in Math class. Jodha and Jalal are best of friends and their bond will help them sail through rough times. 😊

Edited by Radhakrish19 - 9 years ago

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Radhakrish19

@Radhakrish19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja
Nice friendship bonding chapter update nest chapter soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm

Thank you😊. Yup, the part was dedicated to establish their friendship and comfort level with each other. will let you know about the next update.

Originally posted by: erning_w
Nice update
Love JoJa's bonding
This story remembering me 12 years ago when i get my punishment like Jo did 😆
Please continue soon
And thank's for the pm

I have got my share of my punishments too. 😆 A school student can't escape punishment. Thank you for kind comment.😊

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
Love their cute friendship ... Update next part soon

I am glad you like it. Will try and update soon.😊

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Radhakrish19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: lovespari
super updt dear..
loved it.
luv ja jo bonding...its lovely.
poor jo hv expcting punishmnt fr sum time but it gt a shck aftr knwing 30mints more but thanks to ja who mk it was easy...love ther talk n ja teasing..
lovly updt dear...waiting fr nxt prt.
updt soon n thanks fr pm..

Thank you. Jalal loves to tease her but she will have her chance too. One of them will always take the responsibility of holding the one who falters. In my opinion, that's what love and friendship is all about.😊

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Unressed...
Superb chapter...
Behind that continuous pestering of Jalal there lies a genuine care .. He doesn't want her to be lonely...take the punishment to heart... Wow!! they share an amazing bond...
Looking forward to read more.. Plz try to give long updates.. loving this story..

Yes. Their feelings are genuine and care. At a tender age, they will forge bonds that will last a lifetime.

I will make sure the next update is a long one. Thank you for the review.😊

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
lovely update nd bond jodha jalal share to... shot nd sweet update dear... so nice of jalal came to spend time with jodha so that she will nt take punishment to heart... update next part soon nd thanks for pm...

Yes, it was indeed nice on Jalal's part. It's great when someone cares about your feeling and emotions, they are such a pair. I am glad that the update was worth your time. Thank you.😊

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Radhakrish19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
Update next part plzzz

Update will be up on Sunday. My exam is on Saturday, that's why won't be able to give an early update. 😊

Originally posted by: lovespari
Update dear...waiting

Please wait till Sunday. It will be a longer update. 😊

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Radhakrish19

Update will be up on Sunday. My exam is on Saturday, that's why won't be able to give an early update. 😊

Please wait till Sunday. It will be a longer update. 😊

ok ... Will wait