Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: swriter
First of all catty i did not want to hurt you. If you hurt then i am really sorry babu and its also not mean that i have no faith on you. I love your all stories buddy. But in this story jodha's character is not acceptable. Ager jodha ki jagah jalal bhi hota to main yahi kahati. Only want some changes in jodha's character.
Hey buddy don't discontinue this story because many readers love it.
I always love you catty

I know dear and U didn't😃

Don't say sorry plz as it's very fine😊

Thankyou janki.. In this story jo's character is like that only😆 She is a beautiful, sexy,carefree and errant woman😊

I don't think so.. there are only few people who want me to continue this story with my own storyline😊

and Me too love u dearie..

If u don't want to read this story then believe me there are no issues from my side as everyone has different taste and thinking😃

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

who knows it might turn his dream... always hope for the best only girls... we will wait n see what will happen in future????

A man can dream😆

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

didu me tooo...
add me in your cheer leaders list... whatever you write we will welcome your works whole heartedly...😊🤗...

aww thanks a lot dearie🤗

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: vjctpt378
Omggg now jo is in danger who wil save her... pls update soon dear. ..thanks 4 pm... n extraordinary writing especially the emotions of jo n jl u described nycely

who said she is in danger??😆

Thanks a lot dear for liking my writing.. means a lot😃

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: vjctpt378
N continue the story dear... its different 4m other ff n I really like sum change in this not like same other stories .. n I knw sum thng der wid jo character. .as in prologue jo character different wer she craves 4 jl n get tears also... so I dnt think jo is dat bad n sumth which is not known is hidden in jo... but pls update ASAP. ..

Thanks for understanding😆

will try to update soon!!

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: sonali96
Awesome update dear
so here jo is totally in reverse role
she kissed him infront of evryone...grt
it will be interesting to see how jo falls for jalal
update soon dear

Thanks sonali😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
omg... jo is out of imagination .. u exchanged jj personalities...interesting chapi dear.. jj kiss was hot...continue soon & do pm

he he😆

Thanks Rani😃

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss
dii iy was awedome...but i dont why but roby jo ko sath kr mujhe aach nhi lag raha ...imean i want u to continue but im feeljng strange...uodate soon

Thanks dear😊 Yeah i know readers would find this a little strange😆

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha
Me too want u to continue yar ... I didnt mean that u stop ur story ... 😭 Its just we r not used of this type of jodha ..

I know dear.. and why this emoji😆

It's just that I don't get much likes and positive comments on this story so I am thinking to post this story on some other site and not on IF.

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss
hehehe jodha mena sab kuch rahne do bass na uska curving wala...aur dusro ko espcially roby ko kiss karne wala ka kuch karoo...ireally want jodha to give him tight tight slap...aree jalal to vsha sr bhaag hi gya...yr plzz roby jo i sr mat kr dena...nhi to mein apko bohut torture krogi jause mavii dii ko kia🤣

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