Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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Sushma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: mamtasingla
guys i agree with prii that there is something more in jodha's character so wait for the next updates😃

who knows it might turn his dream... always hope for the best only girls... we will wait n see what will happen in future????

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Sushma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Lets see who else want me to continue this story here😆

didu me tooo...

add me in your cheer leaders list... whatever you write we will welcome your works whole heartedly...😊🤗...

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vjctpt378

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Omggg now jo is in danger who wil save her... pls update soon dear. ..thanks 4 pm... n extraordinary writing especially the emotions of jo n jl u described nycely

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vjctpt378

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

N continue the story dear... its different 4m other ff n I really like sum change in this not like same other stories .. n I knw sum thng der wid jo character. .as in prologue jo character different wer she craves 4 jl n get tears also... so I dnt think jo is dat bad n sumth which is not known is hidden in jo... but pls update ASAP. ..

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Sonali

@sonali96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#365

Awesome update dear

so here jo is totally in reverse role

she kissed him infront of evryone...grt

it will be interesting to see how jo falls for jalal

update soon dear

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

omg... jo is out of imagination .. u exchanged jj personalities...interesting chapi dear.. jj kiss was hot...continue soon & do pm

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shikha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

dii iy was awedome...but i dont why but roby jo ko sath kr mujhe aach nhi lag raha ...imean i want u to continue but im feeljng strange...uodate soon

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#368

Me too want u to continue yar ... I didnt mean that u stop ur story ... 😭 Its just we r not used of this type of jodha ..

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shikha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#369

hehehe jodha mena sab kuch rahne do bass na uska curving wala...aur dusro ko espcially roby ko kiss karne wala ka kuch karoo...ireally want jodha to give him tight tight slap...aree jalal to vsha sr bhaag hi gya...yr plzz roby jo i sr mat kr dena...nhi to mein apko bohut torture krogi jause mavii dii ko kia🤣

Edited by shikha26rockss - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: Abi23
Nice update payal di
Be honest I didn't like Jo character in this story
She is smoking ,drinking ,having physical relationship with many men and what not
But I have faith in you that you have some twist and change her character
Update the next chapter as soon as possible

Thankyou abi😃

Glad u have faith on me😆 Thanks dear😊