Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: 1357raksha
lovely nd something different teaser...
waiting to what coming next nd after reading ur reply for my comment it increased more... to knw what will happen next...
update soon ...

he he

will update soon raksha😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Geetbaala
Unres 😳
Sorry..I was struck in my work so do it late.
It's nice start Payu.. Conversation of Mother and Son was good... Jalal was serious about his training and was made his mind to join his ancestral business.
Woah! Jo is something different here... Tom girl like... What a first meeting... She bumped in him and his cellphone was trashed by her and didn't apologize too... Poor him...got annoyed and with anger he stopped her...but couldn't resist her closeness towards him and sealed her lips with his...ha ha.
Eager to read the next part..
They meet again after four days?
And she goes to him with anger and hold his collar?
And who is this Robby...?
Is he her boyfriend?
Hmm..Poor Jalal will be jealous and goes mad seeing her with other man...even though they don't know eachother.. But still she may succeed in making him jealous.
Update next part soon.

No need to say sorry Geet😊

Thanks dear😊 n yeah this jo is really very different from my other stories😆

he he glad u liked the first chapter and their kiss😉

yes they will meet again in next chapter😊

You will get to know about roby in coming chapters😆

do u really think jalal will be jealous??

will update soon dearie😛

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: kajalparijat
Teaser is quite interesting dear...n who's that Roby???
Plz update the chapter soon

Roby is a real hero i think😆 everybody wants to know about him since I updated the prologue of this story😆

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: natashathakur
Nice tzr n update sn n thnxx for pm

I didn't pm to anyone dear😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: 155pari
Amazing teaser payal... But who's the lady in the second one... Is she jo??? Cant wait to read further... Update soon... And thanx for the scrap offcourse...😃

Yes she's Jo namu😊

you're welcome dear!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja
Teaser is very nice update the chapter soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm update ur other stories nest chapter also pm me don't be late please

Ok dear😛