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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr


Then u must start writing Akka😊
Of course,Jahnu di's scene would be mind blowing and we all are waiting for that.Till then pls keep posting such things😉

I have many imaginations on our BOB nd BOSS but have no time to write. I 'll try bindu, but after my exam. Now I only want to enjoy jahnu's story with my studies. I just love her story nd writing skill 👏 😳 I am a big fan of her 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi



wow , wonderful dream... 😃

thank u mansi 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
can u guys tell me what is this BOB...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

can u guys tell me what is this BOB...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

can u guys tell me what is this BOB...

arre BOB is jo, jalal calls her as Boss of the Boss nd in short term BOB in da last chapter 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sonnet87

[arre BOB is jo, jalal calls her as Boss of the Boss nd in short term BOB in da last chapter 😉


oh...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woah! What a fascinating dream you had Sunitha!😛☺️ Every PBDians desperately waiting for a passionate moment between JA and JO but our devil writer testing our patience 😡😡 So we tend to dream😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sonnet87

guys this is my dream, which I had at da same night after reading jahnu's last update, where jo is send to jalal's house. But I have added little bit of my own imagination😳



when jo enters into da house with jalal still holding each others hands affectionately, she sees da whole house in one look with awe nd admiration. She hears da sounds of utensils from da kitchen. Then, she realises their entwined hands. To avoid any embarrassment before mani nd da elderly woman she tries unclasp her hands. But, jalal who is still gazing at her lovingly senses her attempt, but instead of losing da hold he tightens giving a mischievous smile. jo with questioning eyes looks at him. jalal asks " jo, don't u want a tour round da house ?" jo with shy look on her face praises "u have a magnificent house jalal." With a grin he leans near her ears nd in husky voice says"thank u jo, but u have to say these words after seeing our house... I ...I mean my house completely, come."
By saying so jalal takes jo around da house showing first da guest room, in which she is going to stay, then other guest rooms, balcony, other parts of da house nd finally they come before his room. Jalal "this is my room" telling he asks her to step inside. But jo hesitates to go nd feels nostalgic feelings in her heart. On seeing her hesitation jalal pulls her inside. jo looks at him in bewilderment, but on seeing love filled soft eyes of jalal she calms her erratic heart beats nd turns her back to jalal looking around da large room. She observes a king sized plush bed in da middle, bedside lamps, open attached study room with lots of books on da shelves neatly arranged. To ask about da books, she suddenly turns towards jalal but clashes to his chest nd both fall on da bed. In eagerness to ask what kind of books he has, she fails to see how close jalal is standing just behind her in his own world fantasizing cosy moments with his love in da very same room in near future. Both r lying on their sides facing each other. jalal is holding her with his hands around her waist nd jo's one hand on his chest other on his shoulder with a tight grip on his shirt. With their eyes r locked nd faces inches apart jalal's desires reach da peak to feel her lips on his. After looks like eternity , jalal as a hypnotized man in love slowly moves on top of jo moving one hand behind her head another still on her waist tightly cradling her his embrace. As his lips move near hers jo in anticipation closes her eyes nd feels goosebumps throughout her body sensing his breath on her face. In a flash of second jalal's lips touch hers . She moves both her hands behind his head to grip his hair to show her reaction. On feeling her response Jalal begins to deepen da kiss passionately. jo with a moan tries to take da equal part in their first kiss, but suddenly she hears mani's voice calling jalal to inform dat dinner is ready. She opens her eyes in shock, with that I also opened my eyes
from my sleep🤣




That's it guys, just my silly dream which I had written many days before. But thought not to post it. sorry if there is any mistake as this is my first post on da forum 😉


omg sunitha wat a dream ufff just want to see dis happening in pbd...but dnt knw wen will d author give us dis gift... 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi diiis kaise hooo sb ???
update kb milega koi to bta do naaa
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

hi diiis kaise hooo sb ???

update kb milega koi to bta do naaa

Hii Ashu..where were u??
Update kab milega😕ye tho sirf devil writer batha sakti hai😡😆

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