Akdha ff **//Ek vivaah aisa bhi //** THREAD 1( closed )

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#311

unressed on pg 41 avika

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Avika Akka🤗🤗

I liked ur note more than update😉😆

But seriously it was thought provoking Akka😊

I love Jalal even more for his decision of marrying Jodha which is definitely not a simple one.Not everyone could accept something like this..kudos to you👏👏

His parents are great as well⭐️

I can't say who is wrong and who is right..its just the game of destiny and we can never change the things what God has decided.

This would be interesting to see how their relationship progresses.

Thanx for the pm and update ASAP.

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#313

really a wonderful chappy
sorry for late commenting as I have mention what had happen in my family
so I didn't come online regularly
but very nice chapter dear
Jo carrying suri child that part z really pathetic :(
but JA want to marry her I like this part n thanks fa pm
update soon dear

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Ambidextrous

@Ambidextrous

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Awesome update avika di loved it

poor jodha fate played a cruel game

urgh surya

ya everyone can't be like jalal

all ready to accept jodha

loved the theme di and the note too,talking about one of the social

evils

too good.

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deepa111

@deepa111

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#315

superb part avi.
felt sad for jo bt happy that ja came forward n accept jo.
hope their frndship will turn in a lovely blossoming love.
atlast destiny plays her role n bring jo ja together.
love the story line.
u really choose a great issue n set a gud example .
update nxt part soon...

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Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Hi Avika,

Nice story. Just read all parts at one go.
Gosh aisa bhi hota hai! and its true it can happen.
I like the take of your stance. When men can have prior and post affairs and move on life, so can women.
I hope Jo Ja can move on and realise real feelings towards each other.

Good going Avika.👏
Update next chappy soon

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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

Unresed my post in pg 43 😃

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.
awesome chappy's di
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks for commenting swara 😊

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
a b read kr k bta hu kesa h ...
saara chapter word to word read kr liya...
prrr m not happy...
ye aapne kya kiya...😔
suspence me chod diya ...😕
ab mera kya hoga mu j neend kese aayigi ????😭😭😭
but as a writer u r amazing👏

Thanks for ur lovely comment ashu 😊