Akdha ff **//Ek vivaah aisa bhi //** THREAD 1( closed ) - Page 34

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

nice update avi
jodha is pregnant and surya dead
loved akdha part, both r chuddy buddies type😆
update soon
thnkx fr pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

what the hell...

jo is pregnant
that means she had physical relationship with surya...
i think thats the only thing which jo was about to tell ja...

will ja b able to accept other man child whole heartedly

update sooon

Originally posted by: haya_gorgeous

oh my god.. jo is pregnant.. bt kaise?? khi ye jalal ka to kaam nhi h ya phir doc se galti hui ho..
ya phir koyi game ho jalal ka..
m so eager to read nxt part..
update soon nd thnks for pm

Originally posted by: shgu

Superb update
Pls continue soon
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

story is nice and idea is good too. frankly didnt like the pregnancy part becoz u showed Jodha to be a simple girl, see if you can change that. Jalal can marry her becoz of society blaming etc and no baraat thing.

Originally posted by: Abi23

u really shocked me with ur update avika

nice update

love jj bonding

u explained bharmal mental stage very well

but didn't like the pregnancy of jo becoz of this jo feels guilty for making jalal father for surya's child and jalal feel forced in this relationship

anyways i am sure that u twist it in a good and interesting way

waiting for the next update update soon

Originally posted by: Abi23

u really shocked me with ur update avika

nice update

love jj bonding

u explained bharmal mental stage very well

but didn't like the pregnancy of jo becoz of this jo feels guilty for making jalal father for surya's child and jalal feel forced in this relationship

anyways i am sure that u twist it in a good and interesting way

waiting for the next update update soon

Originally posted by: 155pari

Awesome update avika... Its a huge shocker!!! I mean Jodha's pregnancy!!! There must be a secret behind it.. Or may be some trap... Eagerly waiting for the next update... Update soon... Thanx for the pm...

Originally posted by: lovespari

its superb fabulous dii 👏 jst amazing n
equally shocking also...
loved jo n ja meeting n ther talk tht was awesome
luv the name which ja gav to jo " gabbar" 😆
ohh..thy r bst frnd frevr always share evrythng.
u introduce ja vry well luv ur lines " banda bliv in serious reltn n nvr cross his lkshmn rekha" 😉 😆 lik it dii.
ooh..ja wnt to knw evrythng abut jo n surya n jo is also wnt to shr tht y she is going to shr him abut tht also but poor jo bfr tht evrthng happn 😒
u hav describe jos fthr emtion vry well dii.
but dii wht hav u done in the end jo's pregnant 😲 😲 u hav surpriesd me dii ...actully u shocked me 😲 i nvr evr think tht u will cam up with this twist its totally unexpcting...but ur amazing dii u manage this twist vry well. ur awesone writr dii u shuld hav strt writting long bck ...but its ok although late but atlst u strtd i m happy u strt keep going dii ur awesome 👏 ❤️
but i m really worried fr jo n ja relation although u said tht it will fun but m afrd did ja excpt jo happily n her chid whole heartly 😒 but i also knw u will mnge evrthng vry well 😉😃
loved the chap n luv u also ❤️ fr this amazing story 😳
eagrly waiting fr nxt chap n othr twist n turn if it has... 😆😆
updt soon...thanks fr pm dii 🤗 🤗