Akdha ff **//Ek vivaah aisa bhi //** THREAD 1( closed )

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

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Thank u so much guys for ur likes and comments .
I know ur not happy with the twist but I just wanted to create a situation where jalal will be forced to marry Jo.
And moreover it be fun seeing Jo and her pregnancy hormones torturing jalal.

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

awesome chappy's di

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

a b read kr k bta hu kesa h ...

saara chapter word to word read kr liya...

prrr m not happy...

ye aapne kya kiya...😔

suspence me chod diya ...😕

ab mera kya hoga mu j neend kese aayigi ????😭😭😭

but as a writer u r amazing👏

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Ambidextrous

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

awesome update di

gabbar 😆

poor jo surya died

happy now jalal will marry her

and jo pregnant truly we are shocked

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Nice chapter continue soon pm me make it fast thanks for pm

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Akka splendid update👏

really loved it

jo and jalal's convo wss vry cute frnds meeting each othr aftet some days😊

Lovely name for jo by my hero 'gabbar'😆

U described it vry well

Bharmal's emotions were well described akka

and yeah Jo's pregnency😭

u already know abt my condition

anyways wonderful update akka

completly loved it

plz continue soonish

thnks 4 d pm😊

Love u so much akka🤗

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Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

What the hell???Jo is pregnant😲😲😲😲

Idem twist Akka??

I think this is what Jo wanted to share with Jalal.

Jo-Ja talk was amazing😃

You described everything well👏

Update soon as can't wait to read further

Thnx for the pm😊

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
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Awesome twist avika

I started reading the chappy with a big gsmile on my face😛

At the end of the update u shocked me 🤢

What will happen now?

F irst of all groom died on top of it Dr declared Jo was carrying😕

fFirst part was soo nice 😊😊 to read😛

Bharmal n Humayun friendship JJ friendship well sweetly described❤️

Love ur Jalal avi .. banda never crossed his limits with his girl friends😉 how sweet😳

Jodha was mediator btw his girls n him😆 Loved it yaar😳

H e came from abroad for his bff s big day lovely😊

U wrote the shock treatment to ur readers too good😕

Eagerly waiting for next update

Seriously U Maintaining the twist n suspense content very well dearie👏

thanks for pm bangaram😃

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Awesome and same time shocking chapter avi.
What "pregnant" for that jalal will marry jodha?
And if she is pregnant then surya is father of this child.
i don't know but i feel nothing like that which u told in last of chapter 😉
Plz update soon i m eagerly waiting for next chapter