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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

update fast neetu! y r u taking soo long n pm me too

Sorry m Updating now dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

yr u make us wait for so long


Sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geeta.M


Raat ho gayi Neetu..
Update de do.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: geeta.M


Raat ho gayi Neetu..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

Update today😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Raat ho gayi Neetu..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute


Updating didu 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
...Chapter - 41...

She gasped at the sudden hug... "jo, don't stop me tonight... Let me make you mine in all sense... Let me remove my insecurities... Be mine completely..." he whispered in her ear...

. She stood numb there hearing her husband's demand... She hurriedly kept the washed dishes at their place and turned in an attempt to made the passionate husband understand her point of view, unknowingly making the biggest mistake...

Her breath hitched in her throat when she felt his proximity... He was standing dangerously close to her just centimetres apart, his hot and irregular breath fanning over her face and his lips almost touching her if she uttered a single syllable...

Her near profile is so enticing to the passionate husband and the innocence in those chocolate brown orbs making her more desirable and irresistible... Her plump lips are inviting him...

He neared his lips on her making her to move back but shoot!!! The slab of kitchen prevented her from disturbing their closeness...

He smirked at her innocent attempts and reached to her shoulder bestowing her with feathery light kisses making her hiss in pleasure...

Her hands on their own cord went to his vest for support... Shivers raced down her spine feeling his cold lips on her warm skin, she tried to escape from her husband's passion but today he was not in a position to leave her...

She pushed him a little but he again pulled her harshly caging her between his arms... Her front hit his chest hard which drove him to another level of pleasure...

His deep black bluish eyes got dark in lust and passion while her chocolate brown orbs widened seeing his darkened eyes...

His one hand automatically invaded inside her tee making invisible patterns on her milky waist making the thrilled wife to bit her lower lip to suppress the moan that threatens to come out any time whereas the other hand just holding her tightly...

"jalal..." this came out as a whisper... "hmmm..." he just hummed and tucked the hair strands behind her ear... His passion laced dark eyes were piercing her soul...
"jalal lets talk first..." she trailed off as she felt herself hanging in air... He just swept off her feet and started to his bedroom while intently gazing at her...

She tried to protest to come out of his hold resulting him to tighten his grip...

Finally she gave up and sighed... He reached out of the room and opened it by slightly pushing it...

Jalal entered inside and literally throw her on bed... His senses were totally down tonight and his insecurities are making it impossible for him to make his senses work...

She sat on bed sliding backward "jalal please... Just listen me once..." but the stubborn man just ignored her plead... And came on her top...

Her fears hit the roof, when he started to decrease the gap between them... She tightly closed her eyes anticipating the next move of her husband...

Her closed eyes made him felt dejected... Anger rushed through his veins, the feeling of rejection washed his ego... He tightly clutched her shoulders making her wince in utter pain...

"what the hell!!! what do you think of yourself haan?? Don't you dare to reject me again!!!" with this he attacked her neck placing hickeys on her soft skin... Pain became unbearable for her and tears escaped her eyes wetting the pillow...

His hand felt something wet when he tries to cup her face and then he noticed the salty droplets falling from her closed eyes... His heart clenched in pain, watching its owner in gloomy state...

Why can't he just listen' her??? Why he is getting so insecure??? Where she'll go leaving him behind??? Why don't he understands the fact that their relationship needs sometime???
Her thought process got broken when she feels him calling her...

She slowly opened her eyes and looked deep in his teary eyes...

The pained look on his handsome face was enough for jodha to know his inner turmoil...

The moment he realised her pain, tears rushed through his eyes...
He slowly gave her a soothing peck on her lips and called her lovingly in his natural husky voice...

"jaan... Open your eyes..." a shiver ran throughout her body hearing the word "jaan" from his husky voice... He can feel her shiver under his body...

Though she is telling that she doesn't want him but the way her body is reacting to his touch is just adding fuel to his desires...
But the pain that is reflecting on her features, prohibited the husband to move further...

Both were in a broken condition... Jodha without breaking any eye contact made Jalal sit on bed and she herself came on his top, sitting in his lap...
She slowly wounded her arms around his torso resulting him to wrap his arms around her petite form tightly...

After sometime she felt her shoulder getting wet due to tears, his tears... He is sobbing silently in her embrace...
She kept rubbing his back to calm him down with moist eyes... They found solace in each other's embrace...

"Jodha..." his shaky and hoarse voice reached her ears... She tightly clutched him and shifted a little closer to him...
"huh???" she snuggled more into his chest...

" you will not leave me naa??" his grip tightens on her ... " nope Jalal never... I even can't think of it..." She replied confidently but in a low voice...

After sometime he realized that she had slept... He smiled and carefully laid her down, covered her properly... Then he himself slipped inside, took her in his embrace and slept peacefully...

*****
Morning rays created disturbances in the couple's sleep... Jodha opened her eyes and found herself in her husband's arms...
She looked up and found him sleeping soundly with his mouth a little opened...

She smiled at the cutest act of her husband and giggles softly... She pushed his lowered jaw slowly up so as to close his mouth but again it got open... She again done the same thing but again he opened his mouth...

"even in his sleep he will not leave his stubbornness..." She chuckled lightly and got up without disturbing him...
*****
Sudden buzzing of his alarm, wakes the sleepy man... Jalal stretched his hands to shoo away his laziness...
And looked around, only to find his beautiful wife applying kohl in her doe shaped eyes... She was already to go her work place...

She gasped when a pair of arms wrapped around her waist... Soon she saw her husband appears from behind smiling sheepishly... She too reprocriated and smiled at him...
He pecked her cheek and murmurs a good morning to his beautiful wife... Jodha blushed a little, and mouthed a good morning shyly...
*****
Jalal came out of the room, all ready to go to his office only to find his wife arranging breakfast for them... She noticed him and smile a little, he too smiles and sat on his chair...
Both enjoyed their breakfast with some lively discussion about Jodha's job... Jodha told him about her first day at radio station and the fun she had done there...

Jalal just listened everything patiently... He never had time to talk people or rather he had no one, to share his sorrow or happiness... None share their sorrow or happiness with him...
But now he has his wife, his better half, with whom he will share every damn single thing..

His life has came on a right track... He is happy with her... His every aspect of life has changed of course for good...
His thought process came to an halt by her voice
"ok Jalal m going bye..." She said while wiping her face with tissue... She headed to the main door but his voice stopped her...

"Jodha... Vo I will drop you..." he replied instantly and picked his car keys...
"umm Jalal no need for this... I will manage..." she told him and again turned towards door...

"no... You are not going with that arth anywhere..." he spoke annoyingly...
"what the... You believe me right??" she said while cupping his face... Jalal nodded cutely like an obedient child and pulled her in a tight hug...
"be safe jaan..." She smiled and wrapped her arms around him...
*****
A month has passed in jiffy... Jodha got comfortably fit in her new lifestyle while Jalal resumed his office work...
Both were happy with their life, their mornings starts with a cute good morning kiss and ends on passionate good night kiss...

Though Jodha had not submitted herself but Jalal believe that soon they will become two bodies and one soul...
His obsession has increased to another level... While her feelings for him got stronger and stronger day by day...
*****
He reached near the radio station to pick her up like daily but today she was not there, he tried calling her but her phone is switched off...
He asked one of her colleague, and asked about her whereabouts...
She looks amused and replied that Jodha had left earlier today... Jalal mind got clouded with questions and worry about his wife...

Previously also she had gone to home earlier but had informed him beforehand...

But today neither she called him nor she messaged him... He got angry at her carelessness, and drove to their house...
He tried calling her on his way to house but her phone is switched off... This increases his anger and worry...
He reached home and literally ran towards the door... He rings the door bell anticipating his beloved wife will open the door and will apologize for her mistake...
But after many rings when she doesn't open the door... He took out his spare keys and barged inside the house shouting her name...
"Jodha..." he shouted again while loosening his tie... But again no response made him furious... He immediately went upstairs and opened his room...
What he saw there shook out him to the core..!!
*****
Okay so here the chapter ends... Firstly sorry for late update... Guys revenge is coming to an end now... Thank you so much for being so supporting...
Okay so as the story is heading to its end... I want a suggestion... I had planned to give a tragic ending, so what you guys think??? Please leave your precious reviews...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update neetu... Please update soon.. I cant wait to read the nextt... Pleeeaaassseee update sooonnn... As you wish but dont disconnect jodha and jalals love story... Im really njoying it...
Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute



Thank you so much darling🤗
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