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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapters
Story going superb
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Originally posted by: lovespari

Welcome 😊 by the way dear whn will u updt nxt chap 😉 😃

Most probably next Saturday or Sunday...😊
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Nice chapters
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yes sure dear... And thankyou...😊
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Originally posted by: 155pari


Most probably next Saturday or Sunday...😊


😲 aftr 5 6 days means one weeekk.. dnt u think namita its too long n u also said na tht u updt 2tims in a week thn wht happen dear. 😔
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😲 aftr 5 6 days means one weeekk.. dnt u think namita its too long n u also said na tht u updt 2tims in a week thn wht happen dear. 😔

right now i m having a bit stress due to studies dear... But ill update it every Saturday without fail...😃
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I can't wait for saturday i want update now plz update soon namita
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I can't wait for saturday i want update now plz update soon namita

But update is not yet ready dear...😭
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right now i m having a bit stress due to studies dear... But ill update it every Saturday without fail...😃

its ok dear 😊 ... i udrstnd dear study comes frst. will wait fr updt .updt soon 😃
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Originally posted by: lovespari

its ok dear 😊 ... i udrstnd dear study comes frst. will wait fr updt .updt soon 😃

Thankyou for understanding my VIDAMBANA dear,,,,😆Ill update on Saturday...😊
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Chapter 8

TWO DAYS LATER-JODHA'S BIRTHDAY @8:00 am
Everyday they went to different places to enjoy themselves. Both had secretly started falling for each other. They loved each others company and felt very comfortable with each other, teased each other but wanted to have fun together, shared their sorrows and joys. They had become really good friends in a very short span.

Jodha was in a deep slumber unknown to the surprise coming her way. The door bell rang amd maina opened the door. There was a long queue of people waiting to come in. Maina was shocked to see so many people waiting at their doorstep. The first one was Aarav. Everyone one by one entered in. Even hamida was surprised. Aarav asked maina about jodha. " beta, she is sleeping." Replied maina." Are aunty, how can she sleep. We'll go and wake her up." Said Aarav. Before they could staet their sweet but devilish work, maina asked aarav "beta, surya hasn't come?" "No aunty. Vo actually use jaroori kaam aa gaya, so he had to fly to Ahmedabad urgently." And again started to walk to Jodha's room. Before he goes in, the doorbell again rang. Maina was pissed off now. She again opened the door and was elated to see her son, DIL and her 2 year old grandson. As soon as their meeting ceremony finished, all of them headed into Jodha's room. It was Jodha's brother's and her friends' plan for her birthday. They all headed to her room.
All went in to wake up the birthday girl. Then aarav picked up the water jug and poured the water on her face. Jodha panicked as the water fell on her face and started screaming "aaa, barish barish barish barish". Outside maina and hamida were laughing like mads listening to her drama. Her brother closed her mouth to stop her from screaming. Jalal was in deep sleep. He heard the scream but avoided it. Jodha half opened her eyes to see who was the devil to disturb her sleep and she was astonished to see soo many people in her bedroom. She again screamed and stood up on her bed.. Jalal again heard the scream and put the pillow on his ears to avoid noise. Jodha hugged her brother, SIL and little cutie pie. Aarav, rukaiya, moti, and many of her unit members had come to celebrate this special day.
Raj(her brother): Jodha go and brush, fast... And come out as soon as you finish.
Five minutes later, jodha came out after freshening up. She was dazed to see the arrangement. On the dinning table there were 4 cakes kept, all of her favorite flavor. And on the other side there was a heap of something covered with a velvet cloth.
Rukaiya uttered"are what are you seeing Jodha. Come and cut the cake fast... Its all yours..." Jodha didn't wait for even a minute. She rushed to cut the cakes. All started singing the happy birthday song. Now Jalal totally irritated with the loud noise. He went out to check what was exactly happening. As soon as he opened the door he was astonished to see a huge crowd blocking his path and singing happy birthday song. And there was a lot of hustle bustle there. After it was over, Noor(one of Jodha's cast members) chirped in " happy birthday Edy(pet name given to jodha by her cast members) and smashed a huge piece of cake on her face. One by one everyone came and wished her. Rukaiya sent her in her bedroom and adi and Aarav carried all the gifts in. They played "The Budday Song" of kill dil. Jalal hadn't seen the birthday person yet. To see the person he to went in the bedroom. Jodha was clicking pictures with her friends with the caked face. Jalal was frantically searching 'Edy'. When Jalal was about to reach to her, she went in to clean her face. He didn't find Edy so he went out. Jodha came back and now it was the time to give her the gifts. They replayed all the favorite songs of Jodha. Jodha climbed on the bed and searched for Jalal but didn't find him. So she excused herself and went out to search for him.
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There he was standing with the 2 ladies of the house. Jodha called him and he looked up to her.. "Are jodha you here?"
"I was searching for you in the room but you are here. Come in."said jo
"What will I do there in between the strangers.?you enjoy"
Jodha was in no mood to listen to his arguments. She held his hand and pulled him in. Hamida and maina giggled. They could see the spark of a beautiful relationship igniting between the two youngsters who were unaware about THEIR future.
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Both of them went in. All the faces turned to Jodha as she was missing from her own party. Silence prevailed in the room for a minute till Rukaiya started hosting her bestie's party.
Rukaiya( folding her fingers to make a mike): Attention all my friends. As you all know we have gathered her to celebrate our cute,but, no more little Edy's birthday. But before we resume our next ceremony, I would like to call our sweet Edy on the newly made bed stage and say something about the surprise given to her this morning.
Precap: not decided...
Hope you like it... Please do like and comment... Sorry for the mistakes...


Edited by 155pari - 10 years ago

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