akdha os~ Her crazy boy ~last part updated pg31(13/10/2015)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Plz give next part of this story buddy plz update soon savi

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Originally posted by: swriter
Plz give next part of this story buddy plz update soon savi

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Savindi Abhisheka

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oh devil di both pagloo's r asking for update plz update soon

patiatns mavii..I'll update asap ok.. 😃

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patiatns mavii..I'll update asap ok.. 😃

ni jaldi do sari stories ka update

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Originally posted by: Mavaddat
ni jaldi do sari stories ka update

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Hey dearies..🤗 i know I'm very late for the update but was busy with lots of works in past days..today I'll give the teaser for the last part of this OS.and I'll update the full chapter with in two or three days.. Her shaking legs made its way to his room of the hospital.there are nothing other than a sorrow in her life at this moment.she is live in a fire praying for his life in every passing scecond.Opening the door from her shaky hand she slowly entered to the room closing the door behind her.she don't have any strength to see him in that condition.also she don't have much time to see him before the operation.she could see his almost dying,weak figure through the tears in a blured vision.bitting her lawer lip to controll her sob she slowly went near his bed.his eyes were closed and only his breaths showed him alive.the boy who made everyone laugh with his crazyness today laying on a bed fighting for his life.she covered her mouth with her palms while choking, when she unable to control her sobs anymore.her slight sobs and wheeps slowly ecaped from her throat through her shaky palms making his tired eyes slowly open.her teary eyes and his half opened eyes met with each other while their hearts burning alive.her heart is burning seeing her love,her crazy boy,her jalal fighting for his life while his heart burning wandering that wether he will see her or this is the last moment he spent with her.but whatever happened,his heart is always with her.there was an innocent,weak smile playing on his pale lips making her heart melting like a ice cube.god,if she could go to past,she can erase all the sarrows he felt in the past.but the fate is more crural than anything.she never thought that there are only a loneliness,a pain behind his smile,behind his crazyness.she'll do everything to save his life.her jalal is her life after all. gathering some strength he tried to move his hand to hold her but there weren't much energy in his body.seeing his sligtly shaky hand trying to hold her she immediately hold his hand with an affection and immence love,unwanting him to feel any helplessly while caressing his hair from the other hand.her warm touch gave an energy to his weak body.his eyes fell on her crimson wet cheeks,nose and lips increasing the desireof his heart for touch them,to feel with his lips.still he could feel the softness of her cheek on his lips reminding the beautiful incident which happened at the dinning table. Her love filled teary eyes met with him.there are soo many things in their eyes.her vision blured with hot fresh tears hearing his whisper,tearing her heart to pices. "a.angry wi.th mee?"its ecaped as a whisper;shakingly but the LOVE is clearly visible in it.she couldn't speek anything.placing her foreheard againts their intertwined hands biting hardly her lawer lip she closed her eyes tightly whlie stroaking his hairs from other hand.her fresh tears steaming down a long their hands.the hot tears of her felt like an acids on his dry skin.slowly moving his fingers somehow he could wip the tears on her face.closing her eyes more tightly she squeezed his hand while he wipping her tears.pressing her lips on his palm she bent toward him hugging his hand near her heart.she let her tears to fall from her eyes closing them tightly. "Never.."she whispered shaking her head looking in to his eyes.she could see he parting his lips to say something but before she stopped him placing her fingers on his lips nodding her head to say No. She slowly leaned her forehead on his while her hot tears falling on him. "How c.can i..angry withh my jalal..hmm"her shaky voice escaped from her throat between her chokes while she caressing his cheeks lovingly placing their intertwined hands on his chest.she could see his innocent smile after hearing her words.she affetionately caressed his lips from her thumb smiling with him through her tears. soo sorry for the mistakes