FF - Our Undying Love Part 15 on Page 56 - Page 13

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Hi Mouni.. just came across your story.. an interesting plot, a crisp narration and effectual language.. your work is promising dear.. looking forward to read more..😳

OMG. Thanks so much for such priceless words. Means alot coming from the author of a master work. 😳

Awesome dear

Hey lovely updates

Kahi aisa to nahi ye car jalal ki hai aur drive avani kar rahi hai taki jalal aur jodha mein dusamani ho jaye aur jalal jodha ko pareshan kare😡

Originally posted by: hely

nice chappy
finally jalal knows the truth dt jodha was not wrong 😳
and their convo was sweet jalal realized n asked for forgivness wow😛
update soon it was short chappy
i wonder what will avni dohope she doesnt create problem for jodha

Short? It was longest till now. 😆

Originally posted by: swriter

Kahi aisa to nahi ye car jalal ki hai aur drive avani kar rahi hai taki jalal aur jodha mein dusamani ho jaye aur jalal jodha ko pareshan kare😡

ho sakta h Aur nahi bhi

Originally posted by: swriter

Kahi aisa to nahi ye car jalal ki hai aur drive avani kar rahi hai taki jalal aur jodha mein dusamani ho jaye aur jalal jodha ko pareshan kare😡

🤣 You're so cute.

Lets wait for next update. 😉

Originally posted by: nhbr

Wow..wow..wow..amazing update Mouni.
Started my day with ur update.
Thankfully there are no revenge plans from Jalal's side.He is quite sensible man.
U made our Jo feel so embarrassed 😳.This reminded me of an update from NJAPA.of course its diff scene there.
Update ASAP.

Wow you started your day with this? I am glad it was worth the read. Thanks alot. 🤗

Oh yes. I do remember. When Jo's friends unknowingly took the parcel away with them and Jo was rescued by Jalal. 😳

Thanks everyone. I am loving the replies. ❤️ 🤗