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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Awesome update mouni ..

Luckily Jo escaped from car chase once..
Should any one kill that avani..
Curious to know what happens next.


Thanks Shruthi 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nhbr

Superb update Mouni.👏

I felt all that was happening right in front of my eyes.Thank God Jodha smartly escaped a terrible accident.But I know the problem hasn't ended yet.
Hope Jo would reach home safely .
Avni is to be punished severely for her mindless deeds😡
Thanx for the pm.😃
Are we going to get one more update today?😉

Thank you Bindu 😊
Wow, if you could see it in front of your eyes, its a big achievement for me 😳
Keep reading to know more 😉 😆
I hope I don't disappoint you and other readers with next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Ek Aur chapter milega Kya aaj?


Sooo sweet. 😆
I am really overwhelmed to realise the interest in readers. 😃


hely : oh my god jodha was about to meet an accident this avni is really psycho n sadist😡
how mean n cheap she is😡
her true color should reveal in front of both jodha n jalal
hope her plan would be fail otherwise noone can save jodha
update soon

Awww. 🤗 I just hope I am able to justify everything in the coming updates. 😭 😆

1357raksha : superb awesome chapter dear omg jodha was saved at d end point... but what about that car what d truth behind it...??? waiting for next update... update it asap... nd thank u for pm... sorry for late reply. ...

Thanks Raksha. 😃

Taklema : awesome dear.that driver must be avni,right?
update soon😊

Thanks dear. 😊

mamtasingla : nice update
hope jalal and jodha k beech koi misunderstanding na ho jaye,us avani ki wajah se😡😡😡
update soon
thanks for pm

Thanks Mamta. My story is going to be MU-free as much as I can try, unlike serial 😆

Abi23 : awesome update
omg my poor jodha
update the next chapter soon
eagerly waiting for it

Thank you 😊

erning_w : It's aweome update dear..
poor Jo.. hope Jalal there to save her.. 😊
and thanx for pm

Thanks so much. 😊 Keep reading 😛

PS : I am restricted on posts for some hours. Unable to post a new part. Will post it as soon as the restrictions go off. 😭
Edited by Mouni. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear
some one wants to harm jodha i think its avani i hope she find out soon
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank You everyone. I'll update soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 9

"Got saved huh? You doomed witch", Avani recklessly cursed Jodha's fate while banging hard on the steering wheel "But not anymore, you big time messed up with a wrong person. And you are so going to regret it.", her lips curled into an evil smile.

As the slap sound re-echoed in her ears and the visuals of Jodha getting awarded played in front of her eyes, Avani callously accelerated the car, verbally abusing the lady riding in front.

"And here you go.", applying mighty force, she hit her car hard with Jodha's scooty in full speed and the collision was so massively damaging, Jodha didn't realise when she and her scooty slipped and rolled over the road for a long distance.

"May your soul rest in peace", Avani evilly wished aloud, and drove back a little distance to complete the final blow.

Injured hard on her lower back, Jodha crawled on the road semiconsciously, unable to decode even an iota of the mishap that had just ensued.

The deep scratches on her hands, the gash on forehead and serious lower back injury pained but what pained the most to the now motionless lady was the brutal mentality of the person following her. "It is deliberate", she had made out that much, before the cruel collision took place.

Before she could gather herself even a bit, she found herself getting nearly buried in the hard concrete road as the car drove over her abdomen mercilessly.

"Another hit and run case added to the list. Haha. About which no one cares", the successful evil lady laughed and kept looking back at nearly lifeless form of Jodha.

The speed of the car was still quite high but the lady driving it was so immersed in her victory looking back at her unmoving victim that she totally stopped taking notice of what was coming right in her way.

The speedy vehicle crashed right into a nearby tree and Avani's vision immediately blurred with a strong blow on her forehead. Within a next few seconds, she was rendered unconscious.

2:30 am

"I don't think I owe an explanation to anyone...", more than the words of her that resounded in his ears, the movement of her lips played in front of his eyes. He didn't realise when a serene smile made its way on his lips while he kept admiring the guts and confidence of Jodha.

"Thinking too much about her haan Jalal?", an inner soul-voice asked.

"No. Just admiring her confidence and the personality she carries around.", Jalal slyly replied.

"Wow. Love at first sight or something? You seem too much impressed", the voice talked back.

Jalal laughed out loud listening to his own thoughts. "No no", he genuinely clarified. "I am just glad I talked out things with her and didn't misunderstand her.", he said.

"Hmmm, but why does it matter to you?"

"God. You talk a lot", he slapped his forehead punishing it for troubling him "It concerns my friend and hence I went to her to get the correct idea about everything."

"Okay. Just last question, any personal feelings for her?"

"Just shut up. Probably I may not even meet her again. So just stop imagining unnecessary stuff.", Jalal snapped back.

Before the self-conversation could proceed further, Jalal turned his side on the bed and closed his eyes to let the sleep take over him. He didn't want to over think and decided to relax himself.

Just a few minutes had passed by when his cell-phone rang aloud, instantly breaking his partial sleep.

Getting up from the bed and taking hold of his phone, he looked at the name of caller.

"Bhaijaan, where are you?", Bakshi's voice reverberated from other side, as soon as Jalal picked up the phone.

The nervousness in his sister's voice right away alerted him. "What happened Bakshi? Why did you call? Why are you sounding so worried? Aren't you at home?", he moved towards the bedroom door, unlocked it and came out of the room to check over Bakshi's room.

"Bhaijaan.. just listen to me. I had to rush to hospital as an emergency case had just come up.", she fretfully said but before she could continue, Jalal spoke in between "What???"

"But that's fine bhaijaan. I am dealing with it. But the main issue I wanted to talk about is, I found Avani admitted in our hospital", she said worriedly.

Jalal's eyes broadened in shock as the disturbing words sank in.


This is the first time I am really tensed about the response. If you readers get disappointed with the update, please do let me know.😊 I'll stop the torture right away. It's just that I cannot amend what I have already planned.

So please let me know if you're not happy with it. Honest reviews welcomed 🤗 😊

Edited by Mouni. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Updated 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!!! Mouni..didn't expect such a terrific accident😭
With Avni's accident, its proved again that God is not blind..our punishments are very well planned by him.Avni got an apt and prompt punishment.
But I'm seriously worried for Jodha.Hope she would be fine soon as someone has bothered to admit in the hospital.
Jalal's part was lovely..but only the first part was running in my mind.
will Jalal be able to find out the truth and when??
Pls don't change what u have planned.
Thnx for d pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nhbr

OMG!!! Mouni..didn't expect such a terrific accident😭

With Avni's accident, its proved again that God is not blind..our punishments are very well planned by him.Avni got an apt and prompt punishment.
But I'm seriously worried for Jodha.Hope she would be fine soon as someone has bothered to admit in the hospital.
Jalal's part was lovely..but only the first part was running in my mind.
will Jalal be able to find out the truth and when??
Pls don't change what u have planned.
Thnx for d pm.

I am sorry for the accident 😭
So truly said Bindu, Avani got her punishment too. But ofcourse, the full punishment is not yet over.
I am glad you liked Jalal's part.
Thanks so much for the continuous support. It's so uplifting. 🤗
I hope the story maintains your interest in it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Argg this avni I hate vo kahate h na dusru ke liye Jo gada khodta h vo vahi gade m kir jaata exactly that happened with her .
but is my Jodha okay . She was the one who got more injuries . I think avni and Jodha must be in one hospital only .
Lovely that part where jallu was doing debate with his mind and heart.
I pray jallu would come to know about Jodha's accident.
Mouni now what to tell about ur story it's awesome yaar
peeej dusra update kab milega can't wait Yaar

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