Akdha OS-From the start

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Hey frnds, this Is my first attempt to write a os actually n ofcourse I could've nvr worte if my sweety aka savindi di didn't ask me to n also if my pretty doll aka meera sis didn't encourage me when I said my idea to her ( actually akka I forgot all the other ideas fa writing but I'm sure, if I enter bio class or physics class I'll get a lot of ideas as... u knw y J ) n I dedicate it em ! love ya girls ! n of course love ishi , my zayn aka riya , neetu di , dollie aka payal di , deekshu , biriyani aka sona di , avi akka , sudha akka , mehek di , aisha , butter aka anu , tigress aka arunima di , angel aka akanksha di , my Chinese special aka Sammy di , harshu akka , and the list goes on ... I got this idea when I was in english class J so enough of my bak bak so here it goes

WHEN A SHIP SANK :

When the liner had finally vanished over the horizon , she was absolutely alone in stormy night sea . First she thought she had to swim one way , then another . It was not even midnight yet , and she had no hope at all of finding her way in that terrible night time ocean . she began to feel afraid . waves of fear rolled through her , starting from her head to feet , attacking her heart and then passing through her neck to her head . waves broke over her and water went into her snorkel ( I heard that snorkel is kept in all the life boats as giving a chance to live... idk if it's true or not but yeah I wrote it ) she thought she would never survive in such weather condition . she felt her solitude more keenly . The sky was grey at first , then blue -violet shades appeared . In a few minutes , the colours become brighter , with dark red strips cutting across the sky ! The rising sun came up over the ocean . she was surrounded by large waves . The clouds turned pink and swept across the sky in all directions . It was a windy day . There was no visible land. She grew more alarmed . Had he made mistakes in her calculations ? of course no ! she thought " I guess the current had carried me a long a way off the course during the night " .

An hour passed by maybe two . " beach !" she could not deny shouting it in pleasure but wait it was far away like atleat it would take a whole day to reach there ..."before reaching there the current would carry me long away " she said herself with a sigh .

The sun looked out for the last time , as if saying goodbye to her , and hid itself away again . At first the clouds became deep red and then their edges turned bright orange . A little afterwards , the clouds turned lilac and dark violet . Darkness fell swiftly . Her second lonely night in the ocean began . she felt dizzy and was feeling like she'll faint very soon . Evening was approaching . The ocean around her was full of life ; large fishes often out of the water and big birds flew right above her head . That's it , that was the last thing she saw before she went unconscious . she didn't eat fa nearly 3 days ! I knw I knw she was stuck in this fa 2 days but she didn't eat the day before he was stuck in this too as she was angry with her so called sister . ( she has a family too guys ) She was weak already and she struggled a lot being stuck in this stormy nights all alone ! She was travelling to Australia from England through sea ways. As her parents was in Australia and she went to England for her studies ( u knw ri8 im not a legend so don't ask why should she go to England when she can study in Australia... didn't think of college name but maybe queen's college London goes well ? )

SOMEWHERE ELSE : (NEXT MORN)

( I like this song .. no idea of why I added this song )

Pink fa girl's n blue fa boy's



Tu hai lajwaab, tere jalwe hazaar
Mera bhi pata hai, main na maanu kabhi haar
Teri meri duniya mein be-hisaab pyaar

Main hoon ek Angel aur Devil mera yaar

Tere jaisa duniya mein koi bhi nahi

Jise dhoondti nazar lage tu hi hai wahi

Pariyon ki rani hoon main sabse haseen
Par tere bina kick mujhe milti nahin
Tere bina kick mujhe milti nahin
Tere bina kick mujhe milti nahin
Tere bina, tere bina...

Je mainu yaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu pyaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu yaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu pyaar na mile, je mainu yaar na mile
Je mainu pyaar na mile te mar jaawaan

Har shaam baby, tere hi naam baby
Aa tujhe pyaar karoon main, sar-e-aam baby
Hai intezaam baby, kar aitraam baby
Iraade naik mere, na koi ganda kaam baby
Ishq, pyaar, aur waar khule aam karoon
Main hoon mutasib tujhse dil ye tere naam karoon
Aaja meri baahon mein, lemme love you baby
Kahin tu mujhse ye na keh de

Je mainu yaar na mile, mile.. mile...
Te mar jaawaan
Je mainu pyaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu yaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu pyaar na mile, je mainu yaar na mile
Je mainu pyaar na mile te mar jaawaan

Mohabbat bhi karke dekhi
Kya paaya woh kaise bataaun
Dil ka aisa aalam tha ke
Dard-e-dil kisko sunaaun
Haan main hoon tera gunehegaar
Mat dohrana tum ab ki baar

Je mainu yaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu pyaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu yaar na mile te mar jaawaan
Je mainu pyaar na mile, je mainu yaar na mile
Je mainu pyaar na mile te mar jaawaan

Main mar jaawaan, main mar jaawaan
Main mar jaawaan



no ,no, there was a party going on . All the girls were as usual behind the great JM ( abbey I thought mostly JK is used but no connection with his name but see JM goes well with his name @presence of mind) He was a soft hearted man and also loves his family a lot . His family loves him a lot that start from his childhood he was never forced to do anything ( shadi v... I mean not forcing to marry any grl ) . He is a guy who is wishing that he meets HIS GRIL soon ( wish that was me ! ) who don't love his money but him ! who would wish to have his child not the one who curses his child about loosing her BEAUTY . Even tough he was a wealthy man he always felt like he was in a condition that was bad than that of a beggar as he never met his true love yet , the girls whom he saw were beautiful but were only after his money .

He would've enjoyed the party if all the beautiful witches in the party were not behind him . He wasn't at all enjoying the party but was regretting coming over there . So he went for a walk in the beach itself ( party was going on in a beach ) . That was when he saw a girl in the sea shore . He went near her and saw her in unconscious state but when he turned her face ... He was awestruck like it felt to him that she was the most beautiful girl in the whole universe... Her fair complexion and also somewhere in heart he felt like she was HIS GIRL . Suddenly something hit him that she was unconscious and he want to wake her up first . He took her to his private Mansion and he put her in a comfortable position in HIS bed . He brought a glass of water and sprinkled a little water in her face . She opens her doe like beautiful eyes slowly and Jalal was the first thing she saw when she opened her eyes . Jo was actually in Jalal's arms all the while . They were lost in looking deep into each other's eyes when suddenly Jo realized that she was in a unknown place and also with a unknown person ! She felt uncomfortable already and adding to that was jalal's continuous gaze over her . Jalal understood that she was feeling uncomfortable . " Hey , I saw you lying unconscious on the sea shore so brought you over here and ... yep have this water you'll feel better " he said forwarding the glass of water to her . " erm.. thank you " she said taking the glass of water from his hand . " hmm... but why was you there in sea shore and that too unconscious ?" he asked Jo with a confused expression . Jo narrated everything to him from the start . " ohh but it was so courageous of you to even try to fight back the threatening waves " he said smiling at her . She smiled back at him and asked " is there no one in this home ?" " It is my private mansion no one is allowed to come here and.. bye see ya in the morning gnsd sleep well and feel home " he said smiling at her and closed the door behind and went to another room and made himself comfortable in the bed . When he closed his eyes too it was her who was in front of him ... In front of his very eyes . " What is happening to me ? why am I seeing her in front of my eyes ? yaa khuda " Then he thought about her ... the way she smiled at him ... the way she talked to him ... even tough she don't know who he is . Jo' condition was no less than his ... He was her life guard who saved her . They both didn't knew when sleep took over them and the dozed off thinking about each other .

NEXT MORN:

Both woke up and took a bath . Jalal bought clothes for her (ab

don't ask me when ) . Jo went to see what Jalal wa doing . He was doing

namaz which was his daily routine . after completing namaz , he looked

up and rised his hand and said " yaa allah yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai ?

what did this girl do to me that I'm always thinking about her ?
"
unknown to the fact that there was someone in the room hearing all this

. " what?? He too is feeling the same ? " she thought and smiled while

he continued " why should I think about her ? maybe she's beautiful?

Hot ? but I've met a lot of girls who are beautiful and hot before too ...

. But not like her... she's cute , beautiful, hot , sexy ... Aww all in one !

I don't know how heavenly it'll feel to be in her arms " Jalal said

dreamingly . By now Jo went crimson red " ahem ahem ..*coughing*"

she coughed intentionally to inform him that she was there in his room

. " OMG! Did she hear everything ? and why am I thinking that she is

blushing " his thoughts were disturbed by Jo as she kissed on his cheek

and ran out of the room . " am I dreaming ? " he asked himself touching

his right cheek where she kissed . Jalal ran behind Jo and caught her in

his arms . " did you just feel the same as me so you did what you did ?

" he asked her. "umm.. what did I do ? " Jo asked acting innocent . "

what you just did moments ago " Jalal said . " ugh.. sry I don't

remember doing anything " she said biting her tongue . Jalal know

understood her plot and said " aww... how pity that you don't

remember what you did ... but no problem I'll remain ya by doing what

you did but not in cheek " with a smirk and looked at her oft , smooth

lips and crushed his lips with her's . they were kissing till they were out

of breath . Both looked at each other and thought that they were made

for each other from the start

so this is it guys i know it was full of bakwas😆 but sweety now ur happy na ?😃don't u dare forget to like n cmnt as it was bcoz of u only 😛i wrote... n i didn't get any idea fa jealousy but if something strikes i'll write oka ?😆

Hit likes and leave ur worthy cmnts

Regards ,
queen of craziness aka harini😆😳😃
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harini1482002 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i still didn't even PM but u came😆ur super fast sweetu😆😃unres v jaldi se kr baby 😆
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mindblowing os dear not at all bakwass is as u said it's bakwass os .
update more n more os dear.:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I found it
I found it
Yaayyy but m not d 2 olso 😭
But koi na
Wait lemme RES!! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
Congrats harini...
Nice OS...
Thanks yrr...
Edited by ....Shefa.... - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harini1482002

i still didn't even PM but u came😆ur super fast sweetu😆😃unres v jaldi se kr baby😆

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🤣hahaha...actualy i can't belive it baby..ok..will unres asap ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my god wht an update yaar awsome
love to read more nd more fm u plzzz continue soon dear
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Originally posted by: sirat15

mindblowing os dear not at all bakwass is as u said it's bakwass os .
update more n more os dear.:)

thnkew so much ... sure I'll try😃
harini1482002 thumbnail
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read soon 😆
harini1482002 thumbnail
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Originally posted by: ISHIKArocks

I found it
I found it
Yaayyy but m not d 2 olso 😭
But koi na
Wait lemme RES!! 😆

u bad grl😆😆unres kr

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