**** A PaiR of eYes ****{{Akdha S Last CHAPTER 8 aug 8 pg 49}} - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mushat


hahahaha
m laughing like gabbar

mai iss ghabbar ki laughing ko kuch nahi tool deti, chinese ki yelling k aage😆😆, abh KUL GURUJI
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jalal is eager to see jo!! Lovely update di :)
I love this story!
continue soon!🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear
want to know jo reaction after she hear jalal's descrption about her.
Eagerly waiting your next update
And Thaannxxx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsome story
love to read more fm u plzz continue soon
cant wait fr d nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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suprb
loved it
update sooon
do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Superb 2nd part
Your narration was too good
plz continue soon rajni😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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shefu, kahan kho gayi dear🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Girls will try to update soon,was a bit lost in plotting😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just for easy manuevering click the following links::

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 4

Chapter 5


CHAPTER 6


CHAPTER 7


:::::::::::::::::::::CHAPTER 3::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::


But woh jodha ko nahi dekh paya tha, ---------who was stunned over his imaginative description of her. She has frozen kuch khush kuch udhaas, and her eyes curious at the same time. Sorry Jodha, she came to senses by Jalal's words, I was just kidding

"Never mind , BTW sir ,I am sure, ur dream friend wud be very beautiful, u love her a lot na. How lucky she is to find an awesome guy like u" Jodha tried to relax the atmosphere, which has gone a bit heavy with Jalal's guilt. Jalal kept quite for some-time. Jodha ne khali cup Jalal k haath se lekur side-stool per rakh diya tha.

Jodha knew how passionate Jalal was about his dream friend. he wud talk about her endlessly in earlier days of their friendship. The way he wud talk about her was so romantic. He wud say, she gives the feeling of that Kshitiz, jisme sun-set ke time khoon k mafik red color bhar jata hai. "She is beyond description. She is so pious that it's hard to find words to xplain her. I wud say she is my soul, I can't find anyother words to describe her presence in my dreams. But still she is imprinted in my mind. I don't have to remember her. I can feel her besides me all the time" Jalal wud confess, at the time he wud look like as he is not to himself. His voice wud become hoarse talking about his dream friend. Surprizingly for last few days, he has stopped talking about her.

Jalal has gone near window. By now, he was familiar with set-up of this big room, which was a little away from hospital main building. As Dr Ambani has described to him. It was on a small hill-top and was a Sanitarium , means for lot of fresh air, quite,cool, and sun-shine . From the wall clock tick-tick, he knew it wud be nearly 8am. Jodha followed her, just trying to be protective of him, but he was at ease moving in room even without support. He knew where is sofa, central table and all other obstacles. This room had becum all the WORLD for jalal from last ten days. Jalal felt the warmth of rising Sun from window, as Jodha withdrew the curtains to let the sun come-in. Cold night k baad usse warm sun bahut acha lug raha tha.

He has not forgotten Jodha's Question.Jodha has reminded him again of his Dream Girl asking about her. He wanted to be honest, at the same time did not want to hurt Jodha's feelings too as unknowingly, every-time he start talking about her to Jodha, he wud loose control over his tongue and wud fell in emotions, and wud rather start saying his feelings towards Jodha, which Jodha may not like."She probably has gone scared off u, she has stopped visiting me in my dreams" He finally managed a witty reply. " Scared-off me, m i a ghost?," Jodha laughed.

"I can't see that, so how do I know" Both had a hearty laugh. They liked each other's company may be sharing pain was lessening their pain. Though Jalal cud not say but Jodha had come his love. Without her, even few moments were hard. Jalal had not lied to Jodha. He was right, as surprisingly the dream girl have vanished from his dreams since he came to Hospital. He now lives more in company of Jodha,(rather DG) wether she is with him, or away for some hrs, he always feel her warm presence, surrounding him.

"Tell me sir, when ur Dream Friend was visiting you, she must have said I love u to u" then how u responded her? You also love her a lot na," Jodha was insisting to talk about the topic, he wanted to avoid.

"I don't know " jalal said "whether I love my DF or not, but definitely I like to talk about her, but so do I like it to talk to you; and No," he added "she never said anything to me vocally. She always carried a lot of expressions ,She wud say thousand words without speaking anything. Uski badi-badi kaali udhass aankhe na jane kaun si puzzle solve karti lagti thi. But now, it seems as she has found voice. The voice who is speaking in u, and when you support me, I can feel her besides me," jalal was surprised at his own words. Why it happened this way, whenever he start speaking to Jodha about his dream girl, he ends up describing jodha. Jodha was luking amazingly at his face. She has gone numb, she cud not speak anything, just kept luking at Jalal's face. Jalal was like as if in spell, without any control over his words. His voice came fully emotional

"Now I can hear her talking, can hear her laughing, though I feel she is sad deep inside. Tum itni udhaas kyun ho, Jodha" suddenly holding her both hands with his both hands, jalal asked JOdha as if he is talking to her in his dream ... CONTD...

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Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Vtui


I was just kidding Shefu, Thanks dear for honouring me with a beautiful THread, I do luv u a lot❤️


di main dr gayi thi jab tum slap ki baat ki...
u r always most welcome...love you too ❤️

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