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swriter

@swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#331

Because every writer have some emotion and love for his story. So i wanted to know about your wish because it is your story buddy and i did not want to hurt your emotion buddy. If i started it alone then i will feel like cheating some body. So i called for your help. It was only my suggestion dear.if you want then carry on dear.

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Vtui

@Vtui

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Posted: 10 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: swriter
Because every writer have some emotion and love for his story. So i wanted to know about your wish because it is your story buddy and i did not want to hurt your emotion buddy. If i started it alone then i will feel like cheating some body. So i called for your help. It was only my suggestion dear.if you want then carry on dear.

U right Dear, and this one is my first ever SS , so I don't like to leave it incomplete, at the same time, I am caught up with essence of story, I m not too much worried about sort of TRPs. I am writing going by heart, what wud have one be feeling in similar circumstances, what cud have been love between soul-mates beyond life, I m really sorry to brk ur heart and Rameshwari who always pm me , please bear with me this time, next time I won't write a tragedy

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
di waiting for d update

I m writing on it Raksha, wud be done by 2moro, and then I will upload and pm u

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#334

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#335

Sorry guys for giving u this end, now to make u happy , see my fun post. will soon post the link here😉

Edited by Vtui - 10 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#336

Ress pls
Dii update soon

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: avika444
Ress pls
Dii update soon

Done Avika, waiting for comment ...how was the end and how was the story , I mean does this story make any sense??

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#338

Dii its very emotional and heart touching story
From the beginning I somewhere felt that Jo will be his donar
But didn't have the hue about her cancer and the reason behind joining the hospital as nurse
Though it's a sad ending but believe me I really loved the story .
The last para where Jo asks him to care care of her eyes and her last wish I got very emotional .
Tears brimmed in my eyes dii
U have written jo's letter beautifully
So the story still continues in "woh kaun thi "
Thanks for this lovely story and pm dii
Would love to read more from u in future :-) :-)

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#339

Nice and emotional end but i m still confused what does you want to say story still continue 😲 and what about woh kaun thi hey you want to marge both story 😲.
Hey i still confused about " woh kaun thi" and now you gave me more confusion 😡. What is this buddy😲