Akdha new FF~~Will I ever find love?~~chapter 5 updated on pg 23

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Prachi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan
really nice story.
both chptrs r awesum
really love them.
plz update nxt part soon nd pm me.

Thanks😉

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Prachi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 3

The sun rays fall on the beautiful lady"s eyes...she rubs her eyes...she tries to get up but realizes that Jalal's hand is on her and blushes...for a second she forgets the pain she had to bear because of him...she looks at him and thinks" kaash ye jaagte hue bhi itne maasum hote..." suddenly she comes into her senses and slowly removes his hand...

she goes and takes a bath...she comes out wearing a peacock blue and green lehenga with deep blue blouse and full sleeves and a translucent green dupatta...her long, wet traces were falling behind and some were coming infront and blocking her face...

by this time jalal was awake...he could not believe his eyes...

(click the link to have a view of the lehenga)

he also took a bath and came out...it was time for them to leave for agra...jodha cries a lot during her vidaai and jalal feels a tinge in his heart looking at her crying...

***flashback***

jodha is running and suddenly a she feels a prick

jalal runs and comes there and looks at her feet... there was a needle stuck...he takes it out but sees tears in Jodha"s eyes... he says to her," jodha, jabhi aapko rone ka man kare aap hame yaad kijiyega... aur yaad rakhiyega ki hame aapke aankhon mein aasoo pasand nahi...

jodha then hugs him..

(jodha,whenever you feel to cry, remember me and remember that I hate tears in your eyes..)

***Flashback ends***

they all reach agra...everyone are mesmerized seeing jodha"s beauty and on top of that the lehenga which she is wearing...

adham and shareefuddin give her a dirty look..

jalal slides his hand on her waist...jodha is shocked but can't say anything as there are Jalal's subjects around...everyone else leaving mahamanga and ruqaiyaa chuckle seeing them..

ruqaiyaa fumes

in the night:-

shehenshah...shehenshah ...kanha raksha karna...

precap:- aapki himmat kaise hui...??? speaks an angry jodha...

sorry for the small and bakwaas update

plz do like and comment if you like it

Edited by Prachi0409 - 10 years ago

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aswinpaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Nice chapter continue soon thanks for pm

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aswinpaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Try to update big one and update fast dont take this much time

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

awesome updates dear but pls try to update a long one
jodha unwillingly married with jalal
precap is interesting
continue soon
pm me too

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meera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Superb update dear

plz continue soon

thnks 4 the pm

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rameshwari11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Very nice story and revel the JJ's past makd them together yaar. I the heaing jodha's love is get long time to take. Please post soon.

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Sonali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Lovely update dear...finally u updated after a long time...precap is interesting

Continue soon nd thnks fr the pm

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deepa111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

nice chptr.
ja mesmrized by jo's morning fresh look after the bath.
ja felt hurt seeing jo crying and goes into fb.
jo ja reached agra .
ruks jealous seeing them together.
precap seems interesting.
wonder on whom jo is so much angry.
thnks for pm.

nd update doon nd this time a long one haan...