akdha os~They found their life from each others~

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"hmm..perfect.."the young lady murmurd looking at herself from the mirror."this is his favourite colour.."she thought herself.this made her blush heavily.yes,today she dress up for him,according to his taste,her husband.she prepared his favourite dishes.but today is not his birthday or their annyversury.today is the day she is going to accept him as her husband.yes,she didn't accept him as her husband.she didn't respect him.she didn't share a husband and wife relation with him.she did everythig to hurt him.she knew her simple rejection give lot pain to him.but he didn't say anything to her.he always gave her respect as his wife.he didn't hate her.how can he do it.she is his one and only true love.but today everything have change.he have win her heart.now she is waiting for him for the first time of her life.but one thing she didn't know.she didnt knew the reality.the reality is today may be his last day.after today may be she can't see his face again.poor jodha,she is impatiently waiting for him.she want run to his arm,hug him tightly and say how much she loves him.she want to see his reaction when she confess her love for him.she knew he loves her more than anything.she could imagine his happy face after her love confession.this made her cheek completly red due to the shyness.she checked time and said ho herself"he will come now..i can't wait to see him...today i see him after a week..jalal..please.. please..come fast..i can't wait more..."then she sat on the sofa and waited for him.time past its near to 7pm.but he didn't come yet.jodha got worry.he didnt late ever.whenever if he will late he inform jodha about his delay from abdul.as jodha didn't like talk with jalal.also today abdul informed her that jalal will be home at 5 pm.but still he didn't come nor informed about his delay.today,when she needed him the most,he was not there.she felt unknown fear about him.but she refuse it consoling herself saying"he will come soon..may be he is busy with somework...that's why he didn't inform about his delay.."and she took a long breath and checked the time again.then she desided to call him.she called him many times but his mobile was switched off.then she tried to abdul but he didn't answered.her fear increased every passing minute.she silently prayed for jalal's safety.after sometimes her mobile rang and she quickly picked up beacuse it was abdul."hello abdul.."before she could ask anything abdul said 'jodha..just listnet to me carefully..ok..jodha..jala..l'"what happended to jalal..he is ok na.."she asked worriedly.other hand abdul don't know how to tell her about jalal."abdul..why are you silent..is everything ok na..he is fine na.."her voice is shaken.he took a long breath and said'jodha..he has been shot..now he is in ICU..'after heared that her breath stopped.she stood there like a statue.she didn't hear anything.her cheek completly wet with tears.dropplets of sweat skidding from her forehead."My jalal.."she whispered.'jodha..jodha..can u hear me..jodha..'he didn't get any reply from her so he cut the call and again dialed her number.jodha woke up with sound of mobile.then she answered the call and asked crying and bitween sobs"is he ok na..where..is he now.."'we can't say anything jodha..he badly injured...he is in city hospital..'abdul worridly said."noo..nothing to happened him.."she shout at him between her sob.then she immediatly ran to her car.she drove hurridly her vehicle crying."no..he is fine..he is fine..nothing happend to him..nothing happend to my jalal.."she murmured continuously.soon she reached to the hospital.she ran like mad into hospital and she saw abdul standing near the door of icu.she ran to there and asked about jalal while sobbing.'jodha..controll yourself..he will be fine...'said abdul consoling her.but he knew that today may be his best friend's last day.this made his eyes wet with tears.jodha wanted to see jalal.but she couldnt do that beacuse he is with an operation.she sat a chair and cried covering her face from her hand.after somethimes a doctor came out from the room.abdul could read his facial expressions.he knew what he is going to say.jodha saw the doctor and ran toward him and asked crying."doctor..my husband is safe na..he is fine na.."the doctor looked at jodha for sometime and said'i think this is mrs.mohammed..'then jodha nodded her head.the doctor took a long breath and said 'mrs.mohammed..I'm very sorry..we did our best to save mr.mohammed..but 'he couldn't say anything jodha intturupt"noo...nothing to happend him..tell me..he is fine na.."she shout at him.'mrs.mohammed..im very sorry..now he is in unconcious state..we gave him some medicince..if they didnt work we cant save his life..im sorry..'"doctor..please doctor..please save him..please save his life doctor..do anything to save his life..please doctor..please..please.."she begged him crying folding her hands and she was about to fall from her knees but abdul held her by her sholders.'mrs.mohammed..we did our best..we cant promise about his life..but dont lose your hopes..'saying this doctor left from there making jodha lifeless.jodha slowly entered the room.she saw jalal lying on the bed unconsiously.breathing with support of a ventilator.she went near him and looked at the monitoring equipment which is showing his heart and pulse rate.his heart rate is low.then she looked at him and caressed his head.then she lovingly called him.but her voice is shaken."jalal..open your eyes.."then she kissed his forhead.caressed his cheek and said"jalal..look..today..i wore your favourite colour..please look at me.."she sat near him.she weakly smile at him and said"my stubborn husband..wake up..you know..today i have prepared your favourite dishes..i know how much u like pasta..that's why i cooked them..only for you.."she took his hand on her and kissed it and caressed it.and said"don't u show me my gift ha..""you know..i have to say something to you..i didn't say this to anyone before..I LOVE YOU SOO MUCH JALAL...please open ur eyes.."she couldnt hold her pain anymore.she cried her heart out hugging his hand.then she felt movement of his fingers.she looked at him and saw he is trying to open his eyes.she immediatly called to the doctor.then she again looked at him.she saw his eyes half opened and he is looking at her.she wealy smiled with him and kissed his hand.the beep of the monitoring equipment made her look at it.she could see his heart rate slowly stopped.her breath stopped with it."noo...he can't do this to me..he cant leave me.."saying this she consoled herself and cried.then doctor entered the room and checked jalal."doctor..he opened his eyes..he looked at me..please doctor do something.."after checked him the doctor worriedly looke at jodha.he shaked his head to say'he is no more'.jodha's eyes widened.she looked at jalal."we tried our best ma'm.but,he is no...'he couldn't say futher."noo..he is fine..my jalal is fine..don't say sinful words like this to my jalal..understood..go from here.."she shout at him and went to jalal.doctors undersood her situasion and left from there."jalal..please look at me..say to these stupids that..you are fine..i know..you love me more than anything..so..you can't leave me..then..please..look at me..say something jalal..don't do this to me..you can't hurt me...but why..you do this to me..."she said cring hugging him tightly.abdul came there and tried to console her but she didn't pay any attention to him.she continuously cried her heart out hugging jalal.she kissed his forhead.abdul again tried to talk her but jodha stopped him."no abdul..your friend is fine..he will be fine..he will get up soon..you know na..he loved to tease me..that's why he do this.."and then she angain looked at jalal and said"but..this isn't a joke jalal..please open your eyes.."then she again caressed his hair continuously pleading him to open his eyes.abdul couldn't do anything.his eyes also wet with tears.the man who was with him from his childhood,who shared everything with him,today went a long journey alone.without him.he cried silently leaning against to the wall.please see below...
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Savi.23 thumbnail
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his mischievouse smile,his signature smirk everything flashed on her mind.she felt her heart is near to burst.she sobbed hugging him very tightly.whenever she hug him always was careful about his bullet wound on his upper chest.
"d..don't you want to t..tease me...ha..why d..dont you say anything..ha..."she said bitween her sob.then again the beep of the monitoring equipment made her look at it immediatly.she could saw his heart is start to beat again.she felt as she got her life again to her body.she smiled widely bitween her tears.she immediatly looked at him.she could see his eyes slowly open.she cupped his face.she couldn't touch his face properly because mask of ventilator. she caressed his head.then asked
"jalal..are you ok na..see..how much i worried..i was afraid of you..i knnew..you never leave me.."
hearing this abdul looked at them and saw jalal has opened his eyes.he felt immence joy and ran toward them.
"see..abdul..i told you that my jalal will wake up..see...he woke up..he is fine..ur friend is fine.."she said while crying to happiness.she laughed through her tears.
abdul wiped his happy tears and called to doctors.immediatly doctors came and checked jalal.all were surprise because last time when they checked him there was no live of his body.but now he is alive.he is out of danger.a one doctor looked at jodha and said
"see..your husband is fine now..actualy we can't belive this mrs.mohemmed..this is a miracle..now he is out of danger..now you must tackcare of him.."ater give the medical instruction he assured jodha and abdul and left from there.due to the weakness jalal fell to a deep sleep.jodha sat near him lovingly looking at him caressing his hair.abdul went to jalal's home for bring some clothes.jodha affectionatly gazed at him with immence love in her eyes.but her tears are not stopped yet.she can't see him like this.afterall he is her life.her everything.without him she will not anymore.she silently thanked to her god for save her love's life.for save her life.she can't hide her feelings from him anymore.she want to tell him that how much she love him,that he is her life and everything.she waited till he open his eyes.
after sometime,jalal slowly opened his eyes.he felt the pain of his wound.recalled every thing happened few hours ago.he unterstand that he have fight with his life and death.he slowly looked around and he saw jodha sit near his bed.she didn't knew that jalal woke up because she is busy with preparing his medicine.he could see fresh tears of her eyes.he can't see her tears.never.he worriedly called her.
"jodha.."hearing his voice she immediatly looked at him and what she saw,he is looking at her.she couldn't hold her emotions anymore.she rush to him and hugged him very tightly and carefuly.she cried her heartout hugging him tightly.he consoled her caressing her hair.
"shh..jodha..don't cry..see..I'm fine..plz ..don't cry jodha.."but she didn't stop.she tight the hug more with immence love.
"shh jo...hey..don't worry..I'll not trouble u.."saying this he chuckeled a bit.then she broke the hug and lovingly looked into is eyes.she hardly kissed on his forehead.then she placed her forehead on his and cupped his face.
"i love you jalal..."she whispered.he couldn't belive his ears.his heart filed with immence joy.finaly he could hear those words from her.he wanted to hug her tightly.carry her in his arm.his eyes were moist with happy tears.he kissed on her forehead and whispered
"i love you too jodha..more than anything.."she wiped his tears and whispered
"i know it jaan.."then she again hugged him very tightly and said
"i don't let you go anywhere..without me.."he smile at her and said
"I'll never go anywhere without you..you know,why I'm breathing now.."she broke the hug and looked into his eyes again.then he said
"because i found the reason to live..its only you.."hearing this her eyes wet with happy tears and she hugged him again.they hugged very tightly with immece love.they found their life from each others.

~The end ~


hi all..I'm again with a new os..i hope you will like it.first i must say that I'm not a writter.so,im very sorry for the mistakes.please leave your comments and likes.and thank you soo much for all of your supports..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res! will read it tomorrow!:D
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superb OS...😊
write more😉
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Lovely os savindi
Very emotional 😭
But with happy ending 😃
Keep writing
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome... latterly am crying dear...
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Lovely, heart touching os.
Keep writing dear..
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awesome.. super .. you made me cry in joy
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Originally posted by: ...rio...

Awesme.. Os.. Lovd it..

thank u dr..
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Originally posted by: ...rio...

Update more and more

ok..I'll update more..😊

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