Forever and always yours 10(part-1) on Pg 68 2.3.17

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Hello, guys I'm back with another Akdha story. So it is my 6th ongoing story. It's going be a modern one. I have been thinking whether to write down or not for almost 2 weeks, but finally I decided to write it down. U have to forgive me for my vocabulary which is going to be not so good. Ok! Enough bakbak here is the prologue:-

Prologue

A young handsome, tall man descended from the stairs of the flight. He is none other Jalalludin Mohammad the best business man in India. He had been travelling from USA to India. He has landed in New Delhi International airport. He says to himself - Phew! This tedious journey ends. I'm back at my country, my home. He stares up at night sky which is beautiful indeed the full moon is out and the sky is clear and there are zillions of stars shining up in the sky. He hurries through the airport security check as he is dying to meet his wifey. He decides to calls his chauffeur, but that is when he checks his watch for the time its 1:30 A.M so he decides not to disturb him as the chauffer's duty demanded him to stay till 11 P.M only. He catches a cab and heads asks the driver to head for the Mohammad Mansion the cab driver thinks that that this young man maybe a servant so he asks him whether he is servant there in the mansion. Jalal seems amused and lies and says yes. After driving for a while they get stuck in the traffic, he could not bear the distance for wifey anymore. He is supposed to be returning from USA tomorrow, but he could not bear the distance from his wifey so he had finished his works earlier and had reached India, but he did not want to tell to his wife as he wanted to surprise her. He kept on assuming her reaction when she will find that he has returned, but he had no clue that he is going to get the biggest shock of his life. After an hour or so he the cab reaches the huge Mohammad Mansion he comes out of the cab. No, sooner the security guard sees' him he comes running to takes his luggage and says- Namaste Sahab. Jalal smiles and greets him. The confused driver asks the security guard why is he calling him sahab The security guards reveals his true identity. The cab driver says- hume shama karna na sahab . Jalal says -koi bat nahi and disappears inside the huge lawn which is in front of the huge Mansion. Jalal decides to ring the bell, but then drops the idea as he did not want to disturb his wifey who is sleeping right now. He digs his hands inside his pant pockets for spare key and finally finds it and unlocks door. He slowly locks it again and tiptoe's to his bedroom and turns on the lights and he is shocked to his core to see his wifey with Adham Khan the employee of his company together in the bed together cuddling in each other's arm. He shouts- You Bitch! Rukaiya get up. Both of them get up with a Jolt. Rukaiya clutches the quilt and Adham Khan jumps out of the bed in his boxers. Even though Jalal is in a very bad mood he had to agree that Adham Khan's boxers sucked at being boxers. Adham leaves the room and Rukaiya...

To be continued...

So, guys how is it. If it is not good. I'll stop writing Plzzz do leave ur suggestions and your valuable cmnt.

Thanks 4 reading

Index

Character sketch- Pg 9

Chapter 1- Pg 9

Chapter 2- Pg 18

Chapter 3- Pg 23

Chapter 4- Pg 25

Chapter 5- Pg 37

Chapter 6- Pg 39

Chapter 7- Pg 45

Chapter 8- Pg 56

Chapter 9- Pg 61

Chapter 10 (part-1) - Pg 68

Edited by ....Anabella... - 8 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue continue soon pm me thanks for pm
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congo dear. 🥳
nice story line Ana.
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Love it Ruks and Adham, made for each other ...time for Jalal to look for Jo😊
Thanks for the new concept, 👏
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perfect couple adham+ruk = adhruk😆
interesting prilogue😛
where is angel i e Jodha
plz continue n update soon pm me
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Congo 4 the new story dear it was interesting do continue soon😊
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Congo songo Ana for your new ff
Nice concept.
continue soon...
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congo for the new story
nice prolouge
cont soon
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Congrats Ana on new story
Prologue very interesting
Plz continue soon n pm me
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Congo fr new story dear ...
Its too interesting
Thnk god u wryt it down
Continue soon nd update ur other stories too
Thnks fr the pm

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