OS Akdha Valentine's ❤️

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Hey guys this is my first OS and my first piece of whatever this is😆, so please accept my stupidity and my mistakes😆.Since Valentine's Day is coming,we all know its the most romantic day of the year😉.With that note all the Fifty Shades of Grey fans i know u all can't wait for Friday 😆me to cant wait 😉 but we need to have patience😛 however am looking forward for valentine so that why i wrote this so hope you guys like it😃

"jaan where are you"shout jalal coming down the stairs looking for jodha
jodha however ignore him because she was mad at him because he didn't even give her a rose,a kiss, a hug nothing and it was valentines day.Since he get up all he was studying was office.
"jodha where are you"yelled jalal while walking towards the kitchen where he spot his beautiful elegant,captivating wife with her hair in a bun a wresting eggs(guys i never cook in my life so have to idea what goes on but watching tv i saw this😆 )"jodha"he called she didn't take him on'he called her again still no replied,so when he realize she not taking him on he started to walk towards her,when jalal reached by her and was about to hug her from the back she immediately turn and avoid his hug and walked over to the fridge.
"what is wrong with here today,1st she was not taking me one and now she avoided my hug"thought jalal,his thought was broken when he heard jodha
"jalal breakfast is ready you can go and sit by dining table"said jodha with a flat voice.Jalal just couldn't get what was going on so he just went and sit.
After breakfast he tried talking to her but she made up excuses and cut their conversation so he decided to leave for office without forcing a conversation."i am going will see you this evening"said jalal leaving.Jodha however was mad,sad,broken thinking he forget it was valentine's day and didn't do nothing for her.
Around 5:00pm in the evening she heard the door bell ring,she got happy thinking "i'm sure that jalal he must have remembered its valentine's day so he came home early to surprise me" said jodha walking towards the door,but so her disappointment it was not jalal it was a deliver boy with a big box"hi, mrs.mohammed?""haan thats me""well this parcel is for you ma'ma,can you just sign here for me please"said the deliver boy,to which jodha sign and collect her big box of surprise.
"what is in this box"wonder jodha,so she began to open it the 1st thing she saw was a hot red dress with sliver necking and a sliver banning by the waist of the dress>it was beautiful
next she saw she beautiful strip weigh front heels with a red bottom>it was captivating
next she a set of beautiful ruby diamond
she awestruck by what she saw a whole dinner kit,until a red paper caught her eyes,when she open it and read it "DEAR MY JAAN HOPE YOU LIKE MY GIFT I WILL LIKE YOU TO GET READY BY 7:30PM AND BY DRIVER WILL PICK YOU UP UR JAAN JALAL" with a winkky face at the end,this made jodha blush completely then she thought"so he bought all this to pacify me"thought jodha but also thought he remember its valentines so he plan something for her and with that she went and get dress.
7:30pm the door bell ring and the beauty queen open the door looking elegant as ever beautiful that she can turn a beast into beauty with her one touch as they say to hot to touch.Here the driver is awestruck and completely forget she is his boss and was just drooling until she click her fingers in front of him and bringing him back to reality"ma ma'am am so..rry the veh..icle is ready"stammer the driver,jodha giggle at the driver and walk towards the car.

20-30 minutes later they arrive at a garden decorate with red deep lights, candles, balloons and a pathway with rose petals leading to a white tent.The driver open the door for jodha and she walked along the the pathway with rose petals as soon as she enter the tent she was awestruck shock and happy.The tent was the most romantic thing she ever see, the whole tent was decorated with red and white balloons,the roofing had heart hanging,the table was decorated romantically,the tent was deep and romantic,it had candle lit all around the tent,it had a big light setting above the table saying "HAPPY VALENTINE'S MY JAAN AND I LOVE U",all of this bring tears into jodha eyes while she walk towards the table and pick up the rose bouquet a smell it until she felt a hand circle around her waist"so u were mad with me thinking i forget valentine's and did not give you anything"said jalal while kissing he shoulder sliding his hand up her stomach touching her bosom which send shivers through jodha body to which she moan."jalaal"said jodha turning around and hug him tight while jalal to respond to hug they were in each other embrace for over 5mintues until jodha broke the hug and look up in his eyes saying"i thought u will forget the most romantic day of the year""ohh my jaan how can i forget the most romantic day of the when i have a hot amazing wife like you"said jalal with a wink which made jodha blush while jalal was sliding his hands up and down her bare back, she could not help her self no more, so she made the first move and kiss him passion which kind of shock jalal but he came to his senses and kiss back with more passion while they were kissing his hands continue sliding up her bare back and since it cut deep in the back it was giving easy access to her butt so he slide his hands inside her dress and started feel her butt to which she moan,he took out one of his out her dress and slide it up her back to her neck so he can unhook the pin which was holding up the necking of the dress so it can give access to her neck,he broke the kiss and began to kiss and bite her on her neck to which jodha moan and tilt her head back giving him more access,until jalal break their intimate in counter and hug her tight kissing her forehead saying "happy valentine's my love"to which jodha say "same to you and i love you so much"said jodha with are head on his chest"i love you too"said jalal and with that they spend their romantic evening together.



okay guys never read over this os or see if it was making sense so hope you all understand
well on that note>>hope you all enjoyed it 😉

your like and comments will have me really happy so am hoping to get your likes and comments 😃

#with_love_bubbles❤️

am to all my lovely buddy's who i didn't reply to your stories am sorry am really busy with studies and my life but will reply soon
till then love you all🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice post plz continue and keep writing 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sofia 🤗
congraz dear for your first os...
wow...awesome os..
loved it.
but why did you stop here???
do continue plz:):):)
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Tooo...yrr it was awesome bloosom os...u keep writing ...
Love
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sofia Congo on first os...
its a lovely piece of writing...
enjoyed very much while reading...
loved it...
nd continue writing dear!!!
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LOVELY👏
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Sofia congoo on ur first story 🤗
Wow what a valentines story..Lovely☺️
Awesome, keep on writing

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Happy Valentine's Day dear
Fantastic os
So romantic
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Sofia di..i am awestruck...what an OS!my bestest token gift on my valentine's day..wowiee..cute chapter..my valentines r u guys..i love u all..Happy Valentine's Day..love u..write more and more...<3 ..love u a lot
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lovely os dear...pls write more!

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