akdha ss: how can i live without u-EPILOGUE pg85 (16/06/2015) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice teaser..
plz update soon
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Originally posted by: hely

nice teaser..
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😊 sure dr..tks
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😊😊

Originally posted by: savindi.db

😊 thak u soo much for ur compliment dr..its my plesure if u enjoy it..all of urs compliments r gives me a big support..thanks again..i will update soon...

u r welcome dear
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Next update kab milega?

may be today or tomorrow.. 😉
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Originally posted by: savindi.db

may be today or tomorrow.. 😉

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interesting teaser... update soon & do pm
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sory for the mistakes.. PART 3 AFTER 4 DAYS " jodha..plz eat somthing..if u want to takecare of jalal,u must takecare of yourself first."said hamida caressing jodha's head. "no..ammijaan..im fine.."said jodha in low tone looking at unconsious jalal. "no beta..now u take some rest...we will takecare of him ok.."said hamida consoling jodha. "ok..ammijaan.."said jodha.hamida left the room.she got up and bent toward jalal.she kiss his forhead.then her hot tears fell upon his cheek.then she said lovingly and law tone" i will come back..ok.."the she left the room. "what is doctor said abdul?.." "jalal is fine jodha..don't worry..he will recover soon..now u must take some rest..les't go..i will drop u.." "no..abdul..i will go..u must stay with him..ammijaan is alone with him na..i will come in the evening..""ok..then bye.." she gave a faint smile and left from there. HOME(6.45pm) jodha is ready for go to hospital.her eyes caught jalal's photo.she is lost in his thoughts.but suudenly her mobile phone rang and she came out from her thoughts.she look at the screen.it was ammijaan.she quikly answerd the call. "haan ammijaan.." "jodha where are u now?""i..im ready for come to hospital..ammijaan..is everithing ok na?she asked imeadiatly. "yes beta..everthing is right..beta jalal.."after hearing his name she stop breathing for moment.she silently pray for him. "jala..l..is he alright?her voice shaking. "cool down jodha..he is fine..he opened his eyes.."hamida said in happiest tone. "wh..what..he opened his eyes.."tears of happiness filled in her eyes.this is the good news her ever heared.she can't say anything. "haan bete..but he can't stay awake for long time..due to his medicines now he is in deep sleep..beta plz bring his clothes when u come..ok.." "o..ok..ammijaan..I'll bring them..bye.." after cut the call jodha ran to the wardrobe and took some of his clothes.she hug them very thightly. soon she left to the hospital.now she is very impatient to see his face. AFTER 5 DAYS "nothing to worry mrs.jalal..now he is fine more than early...but his hand is fractured..so he want someone's help for his works..most important thing is he must takecare of his hand.." "ok doctor..I'll takecare of everythings.."she said and looked at jalal who is lying on the bed. then doctor said to jalal "mr.jalal..u r vry lucky to have such a caring and loving wife.." after hear this both of husband and wife shared an eyelock. 'ah mr & mrs jalal,now i have to go now..'the doctor said breaking their eyelock.he wished them saying good evening and left the room.jodha and jalal anlone in the room.jodha went closer to jalal and asked "how r u now.." "im feeling well now..thanks for the takecare of me"he said without look at her. "hmm..now u must eat something..ok.."then she made jalal sit on the bed comfotably.after she bting a bowl of soup for him. "i don't hungry.." he said in flat tone and didn't look at her.her heart ached because she felt as he is avoid her.but she controlled herself. "its ok..but u must drink this ok.."she was about to feed him.but he rejected.she look at him lovingly and said "jalal..if u don't eat anything,u will stay here only..because,u must have strength for recover fast..i know,u want go to home soon na..then,drink this.."after saying this she feed him and this time he didn't reject but didn't look at her.after feed,she wiped his mouth carefuly and made him sleep. AFTER FEW DAYS 'jalal how are u..im sorry..i could not come early..because i wasn't in india...im sorry dear..' said a girl while caressing his head.she is a jalal's friend.but for,jalal is not only friend.she don't love jalal.but of cause she love only his money.she is alia. "its ok alia, im fine now.."said jalal.he don't like her behaviour.but he can't do anything.also he felt akward.his heart felt little fear if jodha see this,she will misunderstand him.alia went to more closer to him.she took his hand on her.and said, 'u know..i worried about u soo much..i couldn't even sleep peacefuly..' jalal got angry but he controll his anger.she was about to say something but suddenly the door was open.both of them looked at the door side.jalal saw jodha enter to inside.his fear increased. jodha saw a girl,sitting vry closer to her husband.also, holding his hand.her face turned to pale.this girl is sitting more closer to jalal as his girlfriend.she look at jalal for a moment.how can she see HER JALAL with another girl.but she some how controlled her emotions.she went near to jalal. "jalal..how r u now..where is ammijaan.." "im fine..ammijaan is busy with a phone call"he said.this time he didn't show his anger because alia is there.but he didn't look at her. otherhand alia is confused.'did she said ammijaan,to aunty hamida?may be she is a cosioun of jalal..'she thought.whoever she didn't like her.because she disturbed to firststep of her plan.she got angry.so she asked cofusely and little angry tone 'jalal..who is she..is she don't know any manners..she didn't even knok the door.jodha look at jalal.jalal got angry.because he dont like someone talk HIS JODHA like this.she was about say sorry to alia.but she could not say even one word,jalal inturrput.he said to alia in flat tone, "she is MY WIFE alia..she don't need any permision to come to me.." alia was completly shocked.but she didn't show it.she act as she is surprised and happy that jalal is married.also she apologized for her mistake.but she is fuming inside.because,now her all hopes and plans are failled.she came to here for be closer to jalal.as more than a friend.then she can fulfill her dreams.she can handle jalal's everything. otherhand jodha is very happy because jalal's consern for her.she is looking at him without a blink lovingly.she know he is angry with her.because she have reject him as her husband.but now she have accept him as her husband,as her love,as her life wholeheartedly.he is her everything.also she know he is not angry but it is his punishment for her. jodha sat close to him.she unbuttoned his shirt.both of them shared an eyelock.but jalal broke the eyelock and turned his face toward alia and asked about her family.a little smile formed on the corner of jodha's lips.she know he want to show as he avoid her but he can't do it.how can he avoid HIS JODHA.but he don't ready to forgive her easily. otherhand alia is is fuming inside.she is thinking about something to do for fulfil her wishes. after take off his shirt she went and bring some water with two towels.she sat near him again and wiped his body with a wet towel.with her touch his heart started beat fast as jodha.she very carefuly wiped his body with a dry towel.their boddy touched when jodha made him wear a new shirt.after some time alia left the place.but she didn't lose her hopes. NEXT DAY "mr.jala..ur reports are normal..u r fine now,thaks to mrs.jalal..also u can go home soon..but u must take rest..plz don't joint to busineuss works till u completly fine.." "ok doctor.."said jalal with little worry because he can't joint his business works. "jalal bete..don't worry about business woks..abdul will handle everythings.."said hamida."oh yes..but doctor when can i return to home..?" "oh..even today.."the doctor said with a pleasent smile. jodha is very happy.because she can stay with him evey minute.takingcare of him. see below
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Jodha a dutifull wife...is jodha having any past

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please see above for PART 3(A) PART 3(B)
AT HOME

"i don't want eat anything.."she was about to feed him but he moved her hand with littel anger.then the food fell on the floor."im fine..u don't want to do this.."but she didn't care about what he said.she put her hand on his cheek and forcibly turned his face toward her.then she feed him.after feed she made him get up and helped him to walk toward the balkeny.then she made him sat on the couch comfortably.she also sat near him and satrted reading a magezie."did anyone called me during my coma?" he asked looking away from her."yes..your business partners..""that's it? ..i mean any lawyer?her heart beat stoped for a moment.but she didn't care about his quection because she know he want to punish her.so she simply said looking at the magezine "no.."but jalal was little suprise because he didn't think she will react normaly like this.suddenly his head began to ache.jodha saw he put his hand on his forehead.she got worry.she imeadiatly went closer to hin.she put her hand on his sholder and asked with worry and consern"jalal..what happened..r u ok..?..is ur head ache?..""haan..im fine..its a little headache..""wait..ill massage ur head..""no..u don't want.."he could not say further.she placed his head on her lap and massaged his head carefuly and lovingly looking at him.he felt as he is live in the heaven.no more time he felt deep and peaceful sleep on her lap.she kissed his forehead and continuously caressed his head."u know..u r soo stubborn..but i love it.."she whispered.a sweet smile lit on her lips.


IMOPRTANT-I HAVE UPDATE THIS CHAPTER AS TWO PART.IF U DIDN'T READ PART 3A PLEASE SEE ABOVE

thank u so much for ur feedbacks.I'm very sory i couldn't edit.don't care about mistakes.
Edited by savindi.db - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: prathi025

Nice update

Jodha a dutifull wife...is jodha having any past

tks dr..actually i didnt think write about there past dr..

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