TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5) - Page 19

Originally posted by: ASHAMANIPAL

Just Amazing Update...please update another chapter soon and do pm me 😳

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Thanks Avika...😃 Hope you stopped blushing now...😉
Will update soon dear...😳

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Rasika😆😆 As for sword fight scene your efforts succeeded👍🏼
but the ice fire kiss which stole all the lime light re😳

@bold

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

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Originally posted by: Rasika29

Yep...you said it...the kiss stole all the lime light...😆
but then it was a trick...😉 to cover up all that is going on...😉
it left everyone dazed along with Jo and Jalal but reality is going to hit soon in next part...

Originally posted by: avika444

ha ha re.can't blush all the time 😆 .update soon pls.want to know what happens after this passionate kiss 😉

Originally posted by: Rasika29

what happens after...😉 writing writing...😃
but if you would read the chapter one more time...😉 you might get the idea...😳

Originally posted by: renuganesh

UNRES...
>>Finally...😆

Just a superb chapter Rasi..I enjoyed reading it..ufff
>>Thanks Renu dear...😃

...u r words r playing... the last para I read it several times...ur an exceptional writer..
>> I am blushing now...☺️
oh...this id the surprise u told...wow..u won r heart with this surprise..
>>Yes...😉 this was the surprise...both of them needed a check to realize how deep they have fallen for each other...😃

it s a quite funny when shivani told to her sister to kill him...
>>It was Immature on Shivani's part of course...but that got Jo to ponder over her feelings..

n the fight..he observed her every steps even her holding of the sword...
>>Our dear Jo is currently on lying spree so Jalal has to observe her to know the truth...😆

the ice n fire superb heading...
>>It is famous metaphor used to show two extremes...I thought it was best suited here...😳

as we all melted like ice in this fire-their 1st kiss..
>>See you too are using the metaphor...😆

that too became a passionate one atlast..both of them drowned in love ...
>>Ahhan the best part...they totally forgot what they were meant to do...or why it started in first place...😳

see still I m short of words to comment..I hardly came out of the dream..
>>😆 still there???

why u pulled me out..
>>Because u had to unres...🤣

I m going back..if ur going to give the chappys like this always means..I m going to stay in akdha land forever without return ticket...
>>😆 Abb I can't give kissing scene in every part na...😲 😉

thnx yaar 4 the update...n I m waiting 4 the nxt 1...update sooon..
>>Will try dear...😃 and thanks for lovely comments...🤗

Originally posted by: renuganesh

What reality dont break my dreams