TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5) - Page 21

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Ooo superb update loved it...it is truly ice nd fire nd tq for pm

Originally posted by: _akdha.forever_

Ohhh dii who expected amidst of all the sword fight,a kiss was happening what a timing that everyone forgot the sword fight and remembered the kiss😆

>>😆 yes everyone forgot about the fight and started gushing about the kiss...even Jalal and Jodha...😉

It was the most awesome update 👏
>>Thanks Shree...🤗

The way you wrote it was just so mind blowing...thank you for updating..continue soon dii🤗
>>Will try to continue soon dear...😃

Originally posted by: _SJM_

@purple

Will comment later on part 2😳

Originally posted by: renuganesh

Oh..Rasi I like this blue colour text would u plz try to use in max..posts?

Originally posted by: prathi025

Interesting update
>>Thanks Prathi...🤗

Sword fighting session details was marvelous
>>I am glad you liked it...😃

Liplock of jo ja so passionate...so journey of love started with a passionate kiss
>>Yes the journey has started...😉 So what do you think what happens next...😆

Originally posted by: tmaddy

AWWW.. Their first kiss...😳😳😳
>>

loved the way you described their duel ... I was looking forward to how you would describe that --- it was awesome -- I could visualize each and every thing - the way you have written...👏👏
>>Thanks dear...🤗 That means a lot...It took so much time to write that scene...any action scene for that matter requires a lot of efforts...it has to be dynamic, descriptive and at the same time not boring...😆

Please continue...
>>Will continue soon...😳

Originally posted by: harshu27

awsum update
>>Thanks Harshu...🤗 I like your profile pic..it is an awesome Akdha edit...😊

I likd der sword fighting ws really fantastic actuly I ws imagining and remembering d serial whr parijat hd der 1st sword fights
>>😆 I was so tempted to copy that scene from show but...as I already wrote to someone...that magic... which RT and PS created on screen is soo difficult to bring on paper...😳 so I decided to stick to my own way...😃

it ws really gd it ws quiet surprisd 2 c der 1st kiss 😉 bt jodha initially rejectd bt 2nd tme gave in 😉 😆
>>I hope you liked the surprise...😉 😆

bt all in all ws a fantastic write up as usul u jst write it as a professional writer does 😊
>>Thanks again dear...🤗

Originally posted by: neerajanariya

awesome part di thanks for the pm n plz update sooon