TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5) - Page 18

Originally posted by: swriter

oh my god what a chapter 👏i liked...i liked... and i liked you kill me😳
>>Thanks...😃 I loved your reaction...kill...😆

hurre romance of jodha and jalal finally start and what first kiss
>>I am glad you enjoyed it...😳

.plz update soon because now i am not waiting for long time ok😉
>>Will try to update soon...keep reading and commenting..😊

Originally posted by: avika444

Awesome chapter dear.Jajo sword fighting is superb and then their first kiss.I'm blushing re.pls update soon pls pls pls waiting for next chap

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE...😳

WILL COMMENT SOON...😃

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Rasika🤗
>>Hello Shruthi...🤗

Mind blowing update Rasika ...you nailed it..
>>Thanks...😳

The much awaited sword fight duel was awesome with all the one liners .. U narrated superbly.👏
>>Thanks dear...😃 don't know how many times I wrote and rewrote the sword fight part...It had to be quick, dynamic, full of action and at the same time not boring...

This was relatively intense n captivating with what may happen next. but.fight ended...

leaving jalal more puzzled about jodha😉😆
>>All the characters we would see will be puzzles...they have their own motives and they will act accordingly...😉 interesting part is what happens when they cross each others' paths...

Btw Shivani's dialogue '' go and kill him'' i could n't stop but laugh😆😉
>>it was a stupid of course but Jo here does possess that capability...which Jalal guessed after fighing with her...

And the first kiss😳.. this is what the surprise u mentioned with the teaser...

indeed a pleasant surprise for us😳☺️...
>> 😆 yes...I hope everybody liked the surprise...😉

and the banter that lead to their first kiss was awesome.

And the kiss was a battle between hearts and minds😆😆
>>The attraction...temptation...magnetic pull vs the sense of your duties...human emotions are so complex, aren't they?

Everywhere opposites everywhere war.❤️❤️... who is the ultimate winner??
>>Love maybe...😉

Impatiently waiting for the next update😳p. lz update soon.
>>Will continue soon re...thanks for lovely comment...🤗

Originally posted by: lovejodhaakbar

I definitely gonna read it more than once 😃 iam speechless..
>>Thanks...😃 glad you liked it...

Their pure passion and confusion make their first kiss so passionate ..
>>When you know you can't do it and still can't keep away...😉

thanks for the update dear author..
>>Welcome dear...keep reading and commenting...😃

Originally posted by: Kutty58

They kissed..

Lol.. I know it was a long update... But I can only gush the kiss.. ☺️
>>😆 I knew it very well, that this is what will happen...keep gushing and blushing...😉

Lovely chapter... I like it... Now awaiting the aftermath...

Will Jo reward him with a blush or a slap... 😆
>>😲 why slap? Jo was accomplice to the crime my lord...😆
blush...☺️ pata nahi...I am still thinking about it...😉