akdha ff ek mohabbat aisi bhi(Chapter-16updatedpage-140thread-1closed)

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Hello friend's this is my fresh story hope you like it😊
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This Story about a mighty, ruthless and heartless king who believed that without fear you can not rule over the world. love and affection always make you weak not a great ruler.so he always treated people for slavery and women a toy of pleasure.but a single incident change his view and way of his life forever.


"cut the head,kill the person who who going the against our victory.i want ranthambore...i want ranthambore at any cost...if they are not open the gate then broke the gate.i want the victory on fort of ranthambore "

The roar of jalauddin mohamad had spread all of dewane-a-khas

Index
Chapter 1=page no.2
Chapter 2=page no.5
Chapter 3=page no.10
Chapter 4=page no.15
Chapter 5=page no.22
Chapter 6=page no.31
Chapter 7=page no.34
Chapter 8=page no.39
Chapter 9=page no.44
Chapter10=page no.53
Chapter11=page no.66
Chapter12=page no.83
Chapter13=page no.94
Chapter14=pageno.107
Chapter15=pageno.124
Chapter16=pageno.140
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yipee first to comment awesome start continue soon and do pm me
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nice start 😊 . plz do continue...
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Interesting Concept!!!!!!!Nice start!!!!😉 😉 👏 👏...
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very nice story please update soon can't wait and do pm me dear.
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beautiful start..sounds very interesting😛
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First of all thanks to so much appreciation 😛
and now i give you my First Chapter I hope You like it😃
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Chapter-1

(in a diwane khash all people were a very tense because shansha was not in good mood. he was fuming and disappointed to all his minister and army. after even seven days over but they could not captured the fort of ranthambhore. despite the won the war they could not opened the door of ranthambore-fort.
Jalal->(in higher 😡rage) I will have go to war and own handle this issue.dewane-khash barkhast.after this he had gone to out of court in high rage
in his chamber jalal was full of disappointment and rage. he wanted only fort of ranthambhore anything hardly matter for him. hamida sent rukaiya to compose him.

but she failed to compose him he denied to all things he wanted only ranthambhore fort.

Next day he started his journey to ranthambhore after five days he reached to ranthambhore. After his arrival he saw lost of blood and dead-body of mughal and rajbanshi soldiers. He also saw the closed gate of ranthambore-fort. suddenly he got full of rage and called for sariffuddin for his tent.sariffuddin (in greeted tone) adab shanshah aap yaha aane ki kyu takleef ki ranthambhore ko fatah kane ki khush khabari ke saath main hi khud aane vala tha.

After heard his answer rage of jalal got on peak(but in calmly tune ) when I lose my pride and rubab to all world then you have come to me with this news.( higher voice with full of rage)tell me ranthambhore ka kila abtak humari mutthi mein kyu nahi aaya?uska darvaja abtak band kyu hain? Can you tell about reason?

After listen these questions sariffuddin bent down his eyes and searching the words for reply. Jalal (in calmly tone )ok tomorrow I will represent my army behalf you in this war. so go and do the all arrangement. After listen his order sarffuddin got very angry but his is a shanshah so he do not argue with him so he nodded his head in yes and went out of the tent. jalal's sharp eyes slowly-slowly got up full of anger and desire. other side in ranthambhore fort every person has in caught of fear when they listen this News that jalaluddin muhammad himself coming to fight and they had not more weapons and men to war because all men's had dead or caught by mughal in war.in ranthambhore palace had only women.

Maharani manorma(in fearful tone)-> "kya kahrahe hain aap madhai shingh ji jalaluddin khud ladane aaya hain hum se? after listen this news her entire body trembled with fear but she controlled her emotion.

Madhai shingh(with sad tone)-> "ji rani shahiba saat din tak kile ka dervaja na khul ne per mughal badshah khud ladane aaya hain.

Maharani manorma(in controlled tone)-> "per vo ladenge kis se humare paas na to hathiyar baki rahe hain aur nahi unhe chalane bale purosh.(in little more sad tone)yaha to keval striya hi raha gayi hain kya bo striyon se ladange?

Madhayi shingh(in disgusted tone)-> "maharani sahiba bo mughal hain aur vo unka badshah use stri-purosh se koi matlab nahi hain use bas vijay chahiye kisi bhi kimat per.

Aur rahi baat striyon ki to kyon sa vo unka samman karta hain.vo to uske liye bas... rest of words was melted with his boiled emotions. After listening these word fear of maharani was on peak.

Maharani manorama(after taking deep breath)-> "we have not more choice than "apani asmat ko bachane ke liye hume joha... before she could completed her sentence. a loud voice overheard there.

"hume yudh karana hi hoga" suddenly hear these words they turned to back . they saw a fiery princess stand there with all womens of ranthambhore palace.

Jodha(after come to little near)-> "apani aur ranthambhore ki asamat bachane ke liye hume yudh karna hi hoga"

After listen her words maharani manorama seen her with confusingly.

Madhayi shingh ji(with full of surprise)-> "ye aap kya kaha rahi hain rajkuvari saahiba. Aap yudh ladana chahati hain vo bhi mughal badshah ke saath.aisa kaise ho sakata hain.jab bade-bade rajvanshi yudha un mughalon se nahi jeet paye to aap striya kaise tik payengi vo do pal mein hi aap sab ko dhool mein mila denge.

Maharani manorama(with annoyed tone)-> "jodha tum pagal ho gayi ho ye yudh hain yudh yaha mughalo ke saath hume ladana hain kisi bacche ke saath khelana nahi.(with deeply pain) kabhi shocha hain agar jeevit pakade gaye to humare saath kya hoga jivan to chhodo shanti ki mrityu bhi nahi milagi.then looked to other women

"aur aap sab ek bachhi ki baton mein aa gayi.hum sab ko johar karna hi hoga humare saare yudha ya to mare gaye hain ya bandi bana liye gaye. Ab humare paas aur koi rasta nahi rah gaya.isliye hume... she could not completed her words when jodha speak out in middle (with strong voice)-> "hume yudh karana hi hoga".

After listen it maharani manorama giving her annoyed look .(with deep breath) jodha-> "hum jaante hain ki ye koi

Baccho ke saath khelane jitana aasan nahi hoga hume Hindustan ke sabase saktishaali aur krur shanshaha se bhidna hain.par aap bhol rahi hain maasi ma hum bhi rajvanshi striyan hain.jo apane veeron ki talvaar par pane rakt ka teeka laga kar unhe yudh bhoomi mein bhejati hain.hum vo rajvanshi striyan hain jo paraye purosh ke chhone se pahale dahakti agni mein samajati hain.hume haar kar rona nahi hash kar ladana sikhaya jata hain."jodha hum rajvanshi hain aur ek saccha rajvnshi kabhi haar nahi manta."ye aap ne hi sikhaya tha na maashi ma aur aaj aap apane hi shabdon ko bhol gayi.(with loudly tone) "hum jaante hain ki vo sankhya aur sakti mein hum se adhik hain.par saahas aur vishavas mein nahi.hum utarenge apani janam bhoomi ka karj chukaane Ke liye.hum yudh karenge sansaar ko ye batane ke liye aurat keval gher ko sajaane aur purosh ko prasann karna hi nahi jaanti balki samay aane par yudh bhoomi mein utar kar apane sammaan ke liye ladana bhi jaanti hain.

Hum jaante hain ki mughalo ke saamane hum jaada der tak tik nahi payenge par agar marenge to iss shanti ke saath marenge ki kayaron ki tarah dar kar nahi balki virangnao ki tarah yudh bhoomi mein lada kar mare.hum mughalo ko bata denge ki ravanshi purosh hi nahi rajvanshi striyan bhi kisi se kam nahi hai.

"batayi ye maashi ma kya ab bhi aap dar kar johar karna chahati hain"

Maharani manorama(with proud tone)-> "madhayi shingh ji yudh ki taiyari kijiye mughalone ab tak rajavnshi yudhaon ka shurya dekha hain ab rajvanshi virangnaon ka krudh dekhenge.

Jodha (with high rage)-> "jalaluddin muhammad hum aa rahe hain"

Next day the army of mughals was prepared to attack on ranthambore fort. jalal stood front of his army and looked proudly to his army. After inspection he told in fiery and loud voice "hum sab jaante ki hum ne lagabhag ye jung jeetali hain.par ranthambore ke raja ke mare jane ke baad bhi unhone ranthambore ke kile ka darvaja ab tak nahi khola hain. Aaj humari jung ka maksad na keval kile ka darvaja kholvana hain balki un ko ye batana hain ki mughalon ke saamne koi bhi nahi tik sakata.

Yalgaar ho...with these words jalal given the order for attack. All the mugal army gathered around the ranthambore fort when jalal given the order to blast the fort's gate with cannon then the gate of fort was opened. heard the sound of gate open all mughal army was socked and happy. Suddenly a group of soldiers had came out of the fort for war. after seeing this seen blood of jalal was boiled and his rage coming on peak.


Note-> I hope you all like it plz do the comment and tell me can i go further or not😳😳



Edited by swriter - 10 years ago

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