20~NOT just a passionate affair~ 62 (2 pt) One day... another year!

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rs_fun2

@rs_fun2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hey Lashy... This epilogue was just superb... I don't have any words just a Badawala 🤗 for you...
JA and Jo's closeness and their hubby-wife talks were great.., I was smiling the entire time i was reading... The way they feel that they now "officially" belong to each other was expressed flawlessly and it was great to see Jo almost back to her usual self physically...
The way Ja supported her when her hand was twitching and how he encouraged her to start working was so touching...

I cannot write long comments but I have loved this FF and a part of me is sad that it has come to an end or might I say a new beginning,... I am glad I found it after u had written 58 chapters cos the wait after that for each chapter was so taxing I am glad I didn't have to do it 57 times before :)

I don't need to say how good a writer u are again..

And I will miss ur writing but I am hoping that it will be "phir milte hai magar ek chote se break ke baad"

All the best for your upcoming new arrival and will stay in touch thru this forum...

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...jaskaran...

@...jaskaran...

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Heyy!!!!!! The epilogue was superb!!!!👏 i just can't explain why im feeling sadd😭😭😭... i dont want this to end...bcoz its the only ff... which give me goosebumps at every chappy whether it is sad or happy...😳😳😳..mischevious or funny ... i dont want it to finish 😭😭... plss give us more chapters... which i know is not possible😆😆😆 but as this story has finished in such a beautiful way... .. im stunned by ur writing😊... the morning and the less SR shown... their first morning... oh my godd😉😉😉 it was so sweett😳😳😳... and wanted to see the mischevious gang in their first morning teasing them...😆... im happy that now jodha is almost good...and proffessional... and this JALAL is my favourite😃😃😃... i cant express in words...how much this story is beautiful...just a simple concept and still manage to make a place in our heart...this is the real writing... i love u lashy dii... i know u now must think that ur free from updates... but can u plsss update a OS...on any topic.. as i have read ur OS.. they all r beautiful... but i want one os... plss write it when u r free... plsss... OR may be u can start a short story plsss😊

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

lashy, I am resing for both now. Will read it once I am done with the entrance tomorrow😳

Cheers🤗

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wow...It was so sweet, wonderful and out of the world Lashy di...🤗

You made my day...Loved it...❤️ the whole chapter...and all the words of praise might be short...

When we have come here...to a new beginning (I wouldn't call it an end)...still want to ask can't we have more chapters...😭. ok I know..I know...I have read the notes from you but it's been one year...and I am so addicted to them that I don't want to let go...

Love you Di for taking us through this wonderful journey...😃 I am gonna miss NJAPA but you have already given us so many wonderful moments to cherish...😳

See you around in forum Di...Love you...🤗

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sp108

@sp108

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awww

A beautiful story of a beautiful journey shared by a beautiful couple!

You have done a marvellous job with NJAPA...Loved the epilogue...brought me peace and brought completeness to the story...I had a smile plastered on my face start to finish 😊

May God bless you! Take care and keep writing 🤗

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SUGANYA.S

@Suganya.S

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Offo ... How difficult it is , to get some leisure time from this office chamchas these days !!!! 😭😡🥱

Atlast i saw the thread , Yayyy 🥳

Will read it n comment later my chella akka lashy di 🤗❤️

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_akdha.forever_

@_akdha.forever_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

still cant get over the fact ki this story is completed😭😭

i know i joined late to IF but i'm glad..otherwise i woluld have missed such an wonderful story.😊

The epilogue was beautiful...the fact that they have married...awww😳😳 and they are going to seychelles (well,i had to look up in google to know what this word was😆then i understood its their honeymoon destination😉)

Soo our old jodha is back...😊wooo...

jalal has his loyal fans at singh's house😆no wonder why!!!

renu married and pregnant too😃what a news😆

this epilogue was a bundle of joy and surprises

it's me,that she kisses

and now jodha does this very now and then...really...😳so wondeerrrfuuul..that jalal's every wish is coming true😉not to mention that jodha's too😆

the way u made comparison between their first night on that fateful day and their first night after marriage...that was superb...😛

the way jalal adores the mangalsutra she is wearing...😳

the way jodha again makes the painting of jalal and robbie...👏

the way they perform their mini ritual of sindoor-dan...

and the list will go on...but u wrote them so perfectly...thats why they call u writer-e-khas...not even a tad bit wrong...u r reallyyy my favorite when it comes to modern jalal and jodha...

🤗love you

though this story is over😔 but please give us this saubhagya of reading your story even after this..😎its a dil se request to you❤️dont break my heart naa😭🥺

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

res..😳
this is not enough di 😭
romance hangover😉
so jalal wants to take shower with jodha☺️☺️
as i know di it is last chappy..can u give more..😭
2nd honeymoon 😉😭😭any chance...??😭
remember last year aaj hi k din we had got JJ BT scene
look at jalal how desperate n passionate he is for jodha
i wanted no still i want to see JJ BT in NJAPA 😛like jalal want☺️☺️
but...alas😭😭

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SUGANYA.S

@Suganya.S

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Ufff diii , just wow i must say ... Altogether out of world and i m still reading it numerous time to get the feel of such a cute n marvellous 1st day after marriage 👏