AkDha FF : TUM JO AAYE..... CHAPTER 4 updated on Page 21

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Hey Amreen,

Awesome update dear👏

I really love the way u describe father-daughter bonding.I feel happy while reading that.

Thanx for such a lovely story.

Jalal is entirely a different person at home and a loving father.

Jo mistook the lady to be Jalal's wife.

I think Jo doesn't love her fiance,which she is yet to realize.

Waiting for the love to blossom b/w our lovely couple.

I think this orphanage thing would bring Jodha and Jiya closer😊

Update next part soon and if possible PM me.

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Nice chapter n update nxt sn n pm me too plz dr

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#143

awsum dr

no problem with hindi

just update soonish

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.khaleesi.

@.khaleesi.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Hello... Thanks everyone...
will come back to u all individually soon...
And For PMs plz buddy me...
Thanx

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Firstly. Thank you for the update Amreen

It's Superb chapter

I love your Jalal. He is so caring father. And he always found some way just to make his cute daughter happy.

Poor Jo. She's misunderstanding with what she saw.

hope her thought will revealed soon

And i think Jo will meet jiya at this orphanage and become friend.

Eagerly waiting for next chapter

Please made it pure english and update frequently.

And please do pm too

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Awesome chapter buddy i like father and daughter bonding.
Hey buddy i want more jodha jalal's moments i want to see their feeling for each other plz update soon don't take long time buddy and plz do the answer our comment.
Plz update soon i m eagerly waiting for it

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Awesome update

jalal and jiya's relationship was vry beautiful

he was taking gr8 care as a single father

jo was such a bubbly girl

waiting for love to blossom between thm

plz continue soon

plz pm me whenever u update

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#148

lovely update dear... jalal was so sweet nd caring father I loved his every move to make his cutie pie smile... poor jalal what d hell this ruks did... good that she is out from his life... kids r so lovely nd sweet. .. MCD part was awesome... ooo nice jodha felt something usual after seeing jalal with other lady... nd loved smile jalal had on his face when she saw him... that part u have described very willl... nw I think jodha will meet jiya hope she come to knw about jalal nd jiya... update next part soon nd do pm me...

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Nice story Amreen...

I read all chappy's in one go..

U write it amazingly.. Loved this ff.

Looking forward to read more.

Continue soon.

Pm me on ur next update.

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lovespari

@lovespari

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#150

hey amreen..
awesome chap dear...loved it.
like ja n armaan bonding...n ther talks n teasing n armaan's drama...oh thank god n u tht armaan n suhaani hv sum feeling bcz aftr previous chap i thought tht may be suhaani will cum btwn ja jo but now i m relif.ohh...so armaan is jo's cousin...intrsting n i hope due to him ja jo relation will tk new turn...
loves jo n her fathr bonding...it was really cutee..lovef thm...luv jo care n concern n her fathrs antics...so sweet n this chote srkr..coln.uncl ki aloo tikki ke plan flop kr diya aur daant bhi padwa dii..hehe...lovely...loved this prt.
wow..jo dream cum true she gt oppurtunity to wrk with ja n she is so happy...n nt only this she impressd ja with hr frst day...n her positive n humble attitude...nice...both r impressd with echothr n admire echothr...nice.
oh..jo is nt liking hearing sweetheart fr sumone frm ja...nice..tht means she also hv sum feeling but nt aware yet.
ja jo n baby prt was really beautyful n the detaling of ja emotion seeing jo with baby was really nice loved it...hope dream of jo loving jiyu cum true...soon...but fr tht ther relation n ther story hv to strt...eagrly waiting fr tht...
thanks fr beautyful updt...amreen loved it.