TH# 1 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH1 to CH3)

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
One more marvellous update Rasika👏
>>Thanks Shruthi...🤗

Sorry for the late comment🥱
>>And I am sorry for replying late...😃 was busy in ofc first and then was on vacation...😊

Now the story has moved to amer and agra as well,, this track is going ,, very interesting.
>>Yes...Amer and Agra introduced again...I am glad that you are finding it interesting..😳

Jalal's offer of truce has turned their rivalry into friendship mode... really loved this part..
Sultan's recovery brought them closer.. . will he play cupid in this newly found relationship.???
>>😛 new found friendship between Jo-Ja...😳 Let us see where it takes them..

Jodha now an honourable enemy to jalal... hmm jodha wondering '' was he a friend or a foe''
hope soon .. jodha nd jalal understand each others feelings..
>>Soon...😉 a twist is waiting for everyone...😉😆

Thank you for updating regularly.
>>Thanks for your comment dear...🤗

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.
lovely

Thanks Swara...😃

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: hemakeerti
Hey Rasika dear..
>>Hello Hema Di...🤗

I said I'd not read Kingdom of dreams, but your narration made me so tempting that I couldn't sleep without reading it.. I liked that novel..
>> 😆 oh you too read it...it is good novel I told you...me too kept it down only after I finished reading it...😳

but I'm loving the modifications you are doing.. I'm curious to see how you are going to mold it to Mughals and Ameris..
>>Actually I am glad that many people have read the novel...so that everyone knows what is in novel and what is my own story...😳

interesting narration dear.. please keep it going and update soon..
>>Thanks...will try to update soon...😃

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

Teaser for Chapter 4: Part 1

"Jodha, you and your sisters may be as different as the sun and the moon, but the same blood flows through your hearts. You need them, as they need you...Protect them always..."

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"You know the rules, Motibai" She said as she concluded their meeting "If someone catches you...either one of you should be dead."

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"Well, I have already seen how good you are at using daggers though" Jalal added his smirk growing mischievous. "Do you know the first rule of sword fighting?"

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A second later she ducked instinctively a blade passed inches away from her right ear. And her warrior reflexes kicked in.

A back flip and she was standing right behind her attacker.

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Here is teaser for Chapter 4 Part 1...😃
Guessing game starts now...😉 would love to know your views and predictions...😳
Disclaimer: PMs not sent for teaser...😆

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abhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Rasika another wonderful chapter a dilemma between JJ about friend or foe especially for JO.

Atleast BM got the news that JO & Shivani are in hostage of Mugals. While Jaimal is ready for attack Jalaal, but Raj Singh has atleast a plan to get close to JO in commoner dress and get them out..

BM thinking so right no demands from Mugals ? Does Jalaal know the captivates are Ameri princess or not ? Atleast he is send out letter to Shahansha & also to Jalaal..

Now waiting to see will Raj singh get closer to JO or Jalaal will capture him also ? Waiting to see what Jalaal plan is ?

Jo plan is working very well, she is observing very well & also trying to fool him, but Jalaal got the clue that JO is back to work 😉 and instead of angry Jalaal is fascinated & enjoying the game 😆

Shariff conveyed to Shahensha that Ameri daughters are captivates of Jalaal , as Shahansha doubt why didn't Jalaal informed him ? But he knows there will be some reason to it and good answer to Shariff to stop spying Jalaal 👏

"There will no longer be any restrictions on your visits with your sister except at night,"

What Jalaal plan is ? why he is conveying her that he is trust her now ? Poor JO can't know what to say, as she has to escape from this trap for the sake of Ameer and now she accepted his friendship without saying any thanks 👍🏼

Jalaal is falling deeply for JO seeing her smile & beauty and he knows that he knows it himself,

Err...I wanted to thank you for taking care of Sultan."
but it's surprising he thanked JO knowing she truly wished for Sultan recovery...

"Looks like for the first time you are saying thank you to someone." Jodha chided him. 😉

"I must say Princess, you have made it to my list of honorable enemies." 😃

JO mimicking with conveying Thanks, both laughing is so wonderfully wirtten...JO is in dilemma on Jalaal who behaves sometime as Foe and sometime as friend with her 😎

Rasika wonderful update usual now BM & Shahansha curious to know alaal plan & on keeping Ameri daughters in his capture..🤗

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Teaser updated...

PMs not sent...😊

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Krina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#697

wow Rashika

nice teaser 👏

plz update soon.😊

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Rasika29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: hely
wow rasika what a wonderful chappy😛
u have written so beautifully👏
Esp JJ's part😉

>>Thanks Hely...🤗

if jalal is smart n cunning then jodha is also brilliant n shrewd😳
both r trying to friendly with each other for their own purpose😆
>>Yes for their own purpose...😉

i can see side effects of their new bonding😉
jalal dont know but i feel he was smitten by jodha..he was keenly observe her
jodha was affecting to jalal now he is trying n wanted to see her that too closely..☺️
>>Quite obvious...they both are impressed with each other...but they will not accept it easily...😳

what a que ans game they were playing😆i liked jalal's que abt jodha's proud😆
so jodha will try to escape from his clutches😕what if jalal catches her again..??
>>You will see dear...wait and watch...😊

but as i know jodha will try and now jodha is confused n thinking he is friend or foe..??
thanks for this wonderful chappy loved it..
excited for next chappy update ASAP😳
>>Updated teaser already... will try to update chapter soon...😳