FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 3 (Chap 18 page1 22/01/15) updated - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Deepasub

Finally the update ! A looonnng one. Thanks Jahnavi

On my last errand for the day and then will read it and comment.
😊


were u sarcastic in saying looong Deepa.. 😆
I replied to ur previous comment in thread 2.. here's the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4201731&PID=116386775&#p116386775
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Great update... Loved the Jodha-Badepappa relationship and the cat and mouse game... I think Jalal will realize the lie as her MBA and wedding story don't add up... Maybe he was just taken aback and his reaction was a result of having been caught off guard or he saw thru her lie... Waiting to see how it enfolds... Please keep the updates coming...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now i m updating my cmnt as i knw readers cmnts r imp for writers...i loved the whole larrrggee chappy...love the jodhu-badepapa relation...nd jodha..uff her last nd workous excuse-her marriage nd her thought abt the cllge days-she used to use this xcuse to avoid lovers??? 🤣 omg! THE WHOLE CHAPPY IS MIXED OF VARIOUS EMOTIONS that i loved sooo much...update soon..would u bother to send me a pm???pleaseee?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb n awesome update👏
the punch dialogue is excellent
update soon

Edited by sw123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well first of all...i knw i had resed in previous thread 😆😆...but AGAIN couldn't unres... No xcuses for that ofc this time...i would say...i was just simply being lazy...😛😛
Better i resolved..😃😃..i would potray my views then and there...😉😉
Soo...before coming to the update...heartiest congragulations for new thread di!!🤗🥳🥳! May you make 100's of them!! 😛
Soo...NOW coming to the update...i would jump very first at the E-MAIL mystery!!!.😆😆.. Well as you said...IT WAS TOTALLY PROFESSIONAL!!!..😳😳.. N more astounding to me was it was in the name of raj not jalal.🥱🥱..well...i had subconsciously assumed it to be under HIS name..😆..nevertheless ...its finally revealed..!!!😉😉 The opening convo of jodha and her bade-papa.😳😳...how more hearty it could have become!!!..😳😃..soo as you depicted time and again...u potrayed it again..that some people have their own share of goodness in their destiny... N when it comes to PARENTS and loved ones...jodhu is certainly one of those few!!!!👏👏
COMING TO RAJ...this guy is really admiring!!!😳😳...the way he handled jodha...diplomatically handling her problems to its SOURCE!!!...😆😆.MAGNIFICIENT!!!...am having this insight that this man is unknowingly playing cupid..😉😉..n in future he would continue to do soo!!!😆😆 Wow!! What a great MANAGER he would then turn out to be then!!😉😉
Well...i didn't XACTLY get the main reason for jodhu's nervousness...i mean she was all cool in front of Raj..😎😎..then why not jalal??!!😉😉...ummm...shall i call it THE JALAL EFFECT!!!😉😉
COMING TO JODHA-JALAL CONVO... It was simply amazing!!☺️!...n u know the best part...i found it INFORMALLY FORMAL!!!.☺️❤️..loved..loved your every bit of detail.🤗🤗..right from her palm sweating...to her lowering her eyes.❤️..whilst initially talking to him...till the very end...where jalal..passively nodes n she WALKS OUT!!!!.😳😳..u did a terrific job here!!👏👏...i think...its very easy for two people to argue using inappropiate language...but hell difficult to convey the same emotions by means of FORMAL language!!! N that's where the fun begins!!!😉😉...but i must say u just nailed for that matter!!!⭐️⭐️...i precisely felt THIS at the use of word...MANAGEMENT!!! 😆😆...Lovely bit!!!😳😳...HOW PROFESSIONAL!!!😉😉 Their wits were at there best this time😃😃...esp. Jalal's!!!!😉😳 Loved his negation to EVERY reason of jodha!!! N the best part...he was soo damn causual n cool whilst retaliating!!!😲😲 N his SIGNATURE smirks☺️☺️...ahh...how much JODHA hates them!!!😆😆...ufff...aren't they simply adorable!!!
But...but..but...here comes the twist😉😉...THE FINAL blow...from ms. Audacious!!!.👏👏.. Smart move haan!!! Marriage is a thing no one would deny..😆😆..n she very well knew it!!...Well..but i won't lie...i was sooo soo hoping till the end...that jalal would win this time!!.😛😛...my selfish heart😛😛...can't help.😆😆...well he tried his best though!!!⭐️⭐️...hehe the last "sorry"!!!.🤣🤣..had jalal any idea...how significant that word was for his employee 😳...i felt the chapter ended half way...there's maybe more to it!!!😉😉😉 Waiting EAGERLY for next chapter di!!!!.🤗🤗...can't hold on find out...what would be that DRIVING force pulling jodhu back to regal!!!😉😉
>>> some doubts:
1) di...who was the assis. Manager refering to when she said.. The forty yrs. Old is latoo over jodhu ???!!..am i missing out some1??!!😕😕
2) why did raj exactly lie about the HR thing???!! He would have directly passed on the resignation right???!😲😲!
3) n lastly...Jodhu WANTED jalal to stop her?!!!???😳 ...Does this mean...his APOLOGY along with his insistance to stay...was ENOUGH for her to stop??!!!.😉😉.if that's the case...WE have quite a development here!!😆😆
Thnxx for this lovely chappy di!!! Love u love soo much for this!!! 🤗🤗UDPDATE SOON!!!😳😳
Edited by J2lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti


were u sarcastic in saying looong Deepa.. 😆
I replied to ur previous comment in thread 2.. here's the link

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4201731&PID=116386775&#p116386775


Hey may be a bit ! But it was longer than before 😉 yaar!.

Sorry still have to read. Just came back after the grocery trip. Now dinner than home work( reading PBD).
😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update...
are we going to see a jealous jalal in the next chapters????
thanks for the pm...
update soon...
will be waiting for your pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When is the next update? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
😆Hi Hema... Love U sweet heart for such awesome chapter😛 I loved every bit of it...
U R Jodha and Jalal both are master mind... Tom and Jerry fits perfectly for them...😆
Badepapa and Jodha's conversation really touched my heart... I love how respectfully Jodha took permission before resignation... and His each and every advice really very practical. U know this entire story seems like real... 😊 How Jodha accepted change is really wonderful... I am feeling so proud of Jodha... even after loosing her family... her self confident is not moved even a bit... I loved the best part she didn't react immediately and resign... she wait for the right time... She waited for her success ... I loved her witty act.
Omg... I am so impress with Raj... He is really manipulative... the way he made up rule and lied really commendable... best part he didn't even informed Jalal why Jodha wants to quit... Well done Raj... Yaar I am falling for your Raj😆 How old is he???😆
I loved how you have written Jodha's nervousness ... and Jalal's calmness... No doubt he came to office in few hours but the way he reacted really superb...
Finally Two strong headed... mastermind ... came in front of each other...
I love the way Jalal asked her questions... team money ... long hours... etc... oh god... he is tooo witty... Oh goood... After all this accuses the way he respond as if nothing happen 😲 didn't even apologies... too frustrating...He should have apologize for all this accuses... but he is ego is too big... but Jodha is not less... How quickly she came up with further studies... and Jalal cross questions where what. and everything but he will not admit his mistake... he wants her but at his terms and condition... Gunda... hehhehe😆 he is giving her option leave without pay... 😲 Jalal is really something... I am running out of word... chalak kutil dimag... hehehhe... but Jodha used her last weapon... Getting married... finally Jalal gave up... but I can't wait to know what will happen next... Amazing Hema... Yaar U R wonderful writer... I visualize each scene in my mind... superb...👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BTW... Jo is such a witty smart lady.. Love her.. management management bolkar poora bill faad diya Jalal ke oopar !! 🤣

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