.:||First Anniversary Of NJAPA ~ A Token Of Gratitude||:. - Page 2

I started of this story late infact I guess the story had reached its 52nd part when I started. I wasn't an active member on the JA forum earlier. I normally came only to see the written update but gave up on that when the storyline went haywire after the Benazir track. I saw this story title - "Not just a passionate love affair" in the most viewed posts - I felt "Interesting title" and I decided to at least read prologue and decide whether I want to continue. And I am so glad I did! I started at night just to read the prologue and ended up reading the first five parts in a go till 1 am (until my husband complained about the light from my tablet). I loved each and every part of it - the storyline, the characters, the content, the language, the suspense, the pace with which the story moved forward - I loved everything about it. I remember writing my first comment and then receiving a friend request immediately from lashy. (FYI -- she was the first one on my buddy listJ) - I told her I am way behind in the story and that I am so tempted to read the current part after she PMed me the link to the update. She asked me not but I have to confess I did read the comments ;) and then again started to read from chapter 1 to get all the clues and puzzle about the stalker rite. That is one of the reason why I caught up with the current part so late. :D. 58 parts later I am so happy to have started it.

Lashy you are an excellent writer and my personal favorite one - not just mine - I would say quite a lot of readers' favorite - I probably don't need to tell you that - you would have already known that by the amount of comments you get. Lolz - you have a separate thread for each update now, not to forget the comments reach page 90 even before you have update the part. I have always found you very expressive. I have already told you that - the way you write the - I can almost visualize the whole scene in my mind. The story line was very apt to the title - it wasn't just a passionate affair - it was way more than that - very mature stuff - the way you handled the relation between Jalal and Jodha, giving it a stalker angle, the initial ragging park, teasing, stalkers abuse and harrassment - something that girls experience a lot than we think - and appropriately included and explained this in your FF. I had bookmarked your threads - I have read the whole story twice and some of the parts even more than that. Now that we are at the end - I am so going to miss your writing. Keep up the good work. And I do hope you would write up another FF or atleast a sequel to this. J