AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 5- Chap 18-20 - Page 66

Again a beautiful Piece of work... Waiting for the Mumbai scenes to unfold... Update soon😊

waiting for ur update

Waiting for update...cannot wait long ...😕

pri di update soon!!!
waiting... nd update ur blog story also...

waiting for ur pm...
di don't torture us plz...

Hi PP dear.. sorry for late comment though I read the update on day 1.. 🤗.. Is it only me feeling that your updates are shortening day by day.. or do I have company here.. 😆😆.. I understand your obligations, but keeping in mind our desperation, do write long dear.. 🤗..

Now into actual business.. yaar can he ever stop touching Jo?? 🤣.. everytime he sees her he couldn't help touching her, though he knows how badly she hates his touch.. poor guy.. 😆😆.. and I'm surprised by the will of Jodha, his charm, power, love, touch, nothing effects her.. nothing lets her think of reconciliation.. I wonder what circumstances you are going to create to bring these two together.. 😳😳.. Rico could play cupid, but will he be sufficient to bend his tough mom?? 😆😆 ..

I also love the way you retain the characterization.. anytime Jalal is Jalal 😉.. the emotional side of this arrogant man is a pleasure to read.. ☺️ and you pen it so well.. 👏👏..

Now my wishlist.. make Jodha melt a little and tend to his broken arm.. please please.. ..
Will be waiting to see Ammijaan and Rico in next update.. and UPDATE FAST.. 😡😡

hey pp di😊 update fast 😡 zyada wait nahin karenge 😡😡 jaldi update dena psss and lamba wala tooo😡😡😡😡😡 very busy but still write for us see how desperately we are waiting pls 😭😭 pls update fast😡😡😡😡😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Originally posted by: jodhavani94

hey pp di😊 update fast 😡 zyada wait nahin karenge 😡😡 jaldi update dena psss and lamba wala tooo😡 very busy but still write for us see how desperately we are waiting pls 😭😭 pls update fast😭

aaj Valentine Day ke din toh yeh expression mat do😆 aaj usse baksh do😆

Originally posted by: FAIRYLOVEDESIRE

aaj Valentine Day ke din toh yeh expression mat do😆 aaj usse baksh do😆

ye tum keh rahi ho fairy 😆