AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 5- Chap 18-20

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edkv

@edkv

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: avika444
ye tum keh rahi ho fairy 😆

yes😳 am not dat bad after all😆 pp apni pm bhi read kar liya karo, koi itne pyaar se jo likhta hai

Edited by FAIRYLOVEDESIRE - 10 years ago

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#662

Hey di dis was an awesome story i jus read it in one go so plz pm me when u update nxt

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#663

PP🤗🤗🤗

I just loved this update! Because finally Jalal and Jodha met each other!😳

Jalal was in so much tension, that he didn't even take his phone when he went to get her. But she is traumatized by whatever happened

The saddest part here is that even though Jalal's intentions are pure, Jodha is reminded of that very gruesome night again and again when she sees him or he touches her for comfort Jalal cannot be forgiven for whatever he has done but everything is just too painful to read😭

He is obviously damn scared to even leave her alone so he made hthe final decision of taking her to Mumbai, where she can be by his side😳

Jodha was torn between refusal and her son., but ultimately she chose Rico

Now I am expecting things to pick up pace, and to see them living with the child that matters to them the most.😳

Ruqs and Maham ki band bajana please😡

And Jodha ki history after conceiving from the rape 😭

Please update soon maate! Love you loads!🤗🤗 And His Passion bhi kar re!😭 Waiting to read that🤗

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#664

it was heart wrenching chappy
i feel pity n sad esp for jodha😭i will support her not jalal 🤔there is no peace in her life..😭
1stly attack thanks to guards they save her😳
i liked the way jalal cares for jodha very caring hubby😛he left everything n went to kolkata
in that time he was vry worried for jodha n also jodha is his 1st priority😳
when he sees jodha he dint contol his emotions how could he when he saw his love is safe😛a big relief😳 then he hugged her n was feeling happy but jodha is roght in her place she hates him n y not..
i can undstnnd what she feels when jalal is around her how mercilessly he tortured her😡😡😡n now he is expecting dt he will reduce her pain😡😡😡 Naah...!!😡
he snatched rico from jodha n it is his ploy for get to jodha😡 i hate jalal😡
jodha is far away from jalal n he will have to change himself
jalal k liye manzil ko pana abi bohat door hai..jodha will not forget his deeds easily😡he will have to do hard work
precap seems interesting waiting for jodha n rico's reunion😛
plz di update sson dont take long time plz😳
and ur HS is on hangover😆 plz update HS😛

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#665

Pp where r u.update next chap pls

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NimishaBothra90

@NimishaBothra90

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#666

Pls update ur next chappy soon ...
Ur FF is playing on my nerve and mind all d tym, no matter where i m or wat am i doing .

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edkv

@edkv

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: NimishaBothra90
Pls update ur next chappy soon ...
Ur FF is playing on my nerve and mind all d tym, no matter where i m or wat am i doing .

👏👏👏👏👏