AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 5- Chap 18-20 - Page 14

Awww... Meri Jaan Hai Wo... These lines got me clean bowled. 😳

And Mr. Fussy Jalal, was so nonchalant about his fracture. I laughed while reading it. 😆

Wonderful update. Let them keep coming girl. Next kab milrag?

Arre, bahot ho gaya. Ab Jalal needs his biwi with him. May be she is not going to be all lovey dovey with him yet. But let them be in the same frame.

Btw, I meant to compliment on you on one thing. You know exactly what is going to strike a cord with your readers. Your dialogues are mind blowing. 👏

But when's the next part coming? And one more thing? How many parts have you planned for this wonderful Jalal and Jodha's story? I'd love to know, that you have around 100 odd parts in mind. And we're gonna get many many more lovely updates.. 😊

update soon. I can't stand not having them in the same city...

hi !!!

loved the pattern of ur witing...bt where is chap 19 I m dying to read it

loved the pattern of ur witing...bt where is chap 19 I m dying to read it [/QUOTE

same with me... update soon please

update chap 19 of thred 5...anybody reply me atleast