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Hi Akdha fans First of all I know that you all will be very angry as I've updated a long time. So please a big sorry and
I Promise I'll updated the next chappy soon not like this one😉😉and second is that

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Happy
Christmas

Faith makes all things possible,
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MERRY CHRISTMAS

New character is introduced Suryabhan Mehra who is Jodha's childhood friend.

Chapter 10: The Night of Danger

Jodha was fully unconscious lying on back seat. JALAL was on front seat leaning on his chair closing eyes. Thinking all around he don't know when he slept but it was still not that late. The rain had stopped and the clouds had vanished. Cool breeze were started and soon it was turning into heavy breeze which was uncontrollable. Seems like all trees were dancing in the tunes and the air were hitting your body strongly. JALAL heard a soft familiar voice from far and he thought it must be Jodha. But he heard it again and this time the voice was coming from near and he heard it clearly.

"Jalal, Jalal."

The voice was soft, gentle and yet playful voice that was hitting his heart through his ears.

He started feeling some soft hand pampering her jaw line. He opened his eyes and saw Side to find no one. Then he looks back and saw Jodha in the situation he never wants to see. He got shocked.

She was draped with blood all around. Her white milky skin was wrapped with blood. The blood was flowing from her head to neck and then from neck to passing through hand and on floor. Her saree had turned blood red colour with her own blood. She was fully in blood and his car too covered with blood.

He started breathing and sweating and suddenly his eyes shook opened in a second of time shouting - "Jodha."

He was breathing heavily and he was sweating. Seems his heart was blocked for second, he turned around to see back and saw Jodha safely lying down. He understood he saw a dream and the tears rolled down from his eyes which had turn to red, his head was shivering and shaking. He understood in minute it was a dream and how they came here and how Jodha lying back. He took a long breath and get out of car for fresh air. He admired rain had stopped and the cold breeze were not heavily passing but gently passing by yet not so gentle but not one he saw in dream. He placed his hand one hand on his waist and then shook his hair with other hand. He want to get out from this place at once, he got scared.

He turned around opened the car and check Jodha's b***** which was going up and down. He took relief. He gently removed her from there and in his arms. He shouted for Jodha to come in sense but all vain- "JODHA WAKE UP. JODHA FOR GOD SAKE COME TO YOUR SENSE." He never ever wished anything before this so badly than this. The place was cutting him from inside. He somewhere felt danger in this place, no way he want to stay back here after what he saw.

JALAL started walking from there and hoping he get some lift or place to stay back for a night. He was almost crying and still shouting for Jodha - "Jodha please wake up. Please. O God help. Help me mom. Help me dad."

He was walking by carrying her. Suddenly in between Jodha moaned for a second. His eyes relieved and he looked at Jodha with desire that she will wake up - "Jodha ya Jodha come to sense. See you are with your JALAL. Jodha please I need you to come to sense."

Her state was killing him. He was quite far from mansion and Jodha unconscious, his phone has no network and even car stopped and latest his dream all was enough to scare him.

He was helplessly walking from that place carrying Jodha. When sudden in between he felt someone walking behind him. The air was carrying someone's smell with JALAL. He was scared, he never smelled so nice before this. It was like hypnotic smell for him. He was getting dizzy with feeling. His arms were losing the hold and grip. He was getting drugged with the smell and place. He can feel someone around them and want to go to that someone as early as he can.

He was losing his sense and grip when he heard Jodha's groaning voice in his ears. She said crunching his shirt- "My JALAL."

JALAL immediately came to sense the voice was small to his ear but enough to give him confident, power and come to his sense.

JALAL hold s grip with confidence, he can't lose it. He hold Jodha tightly and started walking remembering his mom's words -

"Jalal my son the person should never give up so easily. Ya you can fail in life but accept the failure and goes on working in things. You are our son and promise me you will not lose so easily."

JALAL with loud - "I will not lose it mom."

He was still feeling dizzy but he never loses. He shakes his head and start walking without thinking of smell or walk.

The road was empty and he cannot find any lift but he now admired that after certain distance from place the smell and feeling got disappeared. He thought that he made a mistake by coming here, he never came here for long days. His shoulders were paining now and now he is forcing to put lot of strength for carrying Jodha.

He looked at Jodha and nodded his hand playfully for her child like wife and crazy talks and behaviour.

He remembered her propose but it is not right time to think. He heard a voice of car from behind he turned around while car was near and he shouted "Lift" softly but sound enough for a person to hear.

The car stopped little further and the person who was sitting in driver seat saw JALAL and gave an evilest smirk.

He walked to the car and leaned down to window. It was dark and cannot see the face properly and the person also not faced towards him yet.

JALAL spoke hurriedly - "Actually we went to somewhere and our car had stopped. My wife felt dizzy and we need a lift, please if you can help."

There was no response from other the night was silent and it was noticeable that even breeze stopped passing. One can heard the voice of firefly loudly in silent night. JALAL's heart was pacing fast and his fear was rising. He took as a no ad turned around to walk but he heard a familiar voice from back.

"Hey JALAL"

The person gave sexy smirk and raises his right eyebrow.
JALAL freeze at a moment hearing the voice. It will be last voice he wants to hear in this world at this moment. He went to a deep thought, Suryabhan Mehra- the man with his words and promise. He promised him to be biggest competitor in the chains of hotel and production and yes he proved it. He was soon trying to his hand in making tall and beautiful buildings and house to give him competition in that sector as well. With Suryabhan his relation was never this but he was his and Jodha's childhood friend Surya but as they grow up and started coming in business world their ego and jealousy started clashing. The ego was always there but it never clash this way.

Suryabhan came out of car and said playfully - "Hello JALAL, want to have some ride."

He gave smirk JALAL was fuming. He turned around controlling his anger and stare him till inner. Surya gave most sexy smirk to him for his anger. He saw down towards Jodha in his arms.

Surya put hand like a camera and playful after whistle- "Jalaluddin Mohammad the prince of darkness with innocent fairy Jodha Sharma, what a perfect match."

JALAL fumed in anger only if Jodha was not with him he would have punched his face.

Surya asked laughingly - "Why you were out JALAL in this dangerous night with Jodha. Hmm romance in rains."

JALAL fuming in anger but controlling it he said- "Surya, I mean Suryabhan I was not knowing it was you..."

Surya interrupted before he completes- "Hey we are not surrounded with shutterbugs so you can go ahead to call Surya. Hmm what if you know it would be me."

Surya daring smart attitude was ready to tear JALAL without any mercy on him and his situation.

JALAL knows his intention. He took long breath and answered nothing.
Surya said laughing- "Man you and your famous silence. You had changed a lot in year. Anyways I don't think you will able to carry Jodha back to your mansion. Your mansion is not near and nor even you will get any car or anything so soon after me. Think twice JALAL not for you but you darling wife."

JALAL said stubbornly - "No Thanks I can manage myself." Saying this he turned around.

Surya -"You are not a superhero JALAL. Come I give you lift actually because of your wife I have to show some mercy. After all she is my child hood buddy. Hope I could have said her nice to meet you but hmmm..never mind, may be next time."

JALAL whispered softly - "I will make sure this is last time you meet her."

Surya raised his eye brow as he heard a little part but not whole statement. He gave smirk and said teasingly- "Pardon me."

JALAL took long breath and looked at Jodha. He felt her cold waist that was shivering. He saw her lips that were shivering. She was full wet and cold had reached her body till end. If soon she is not taken to warm place she might get ill. He was helpless for Jodha. Surya was feeling happy inside seeing his biggest competitor helpless standing in front of him.
JALAL said - "Only for Jodha"

Surya said - "Ya sure."

He opened the door of backside and said- "Make Jodha comfortably sit here and we can chat along on front..."

JALAL worriedly said instantly - "No she is not well. I will be with her."

Surya said laughing slightly - "Common no one will eat her."
JALAL stood stubborn in his decision.

Surya said with long breath - "Alright your Jodha, your wish."
He sat on car placing Jodha on chair. He made Jodha leaned on his shoulder. He was shouting inside because of pain in shoulder but not revealed. He stretched his arms around Jodha wrapping her in his protective shield. Surya kept looking at his possessive protective side.

Surya sat on driver seat- "So for you Surya became driver for a night."

JALAL remained silent.

Surya - "O common what is there in your silence, I will be surely bored. I am still feeling like I am alone in car. Hope Jodha would have been in conscious she would have talk to me."

Surya after some time said teasingly - "I sing a song for time pass. Hope you don't mind my sweet voice."

JALAL said in typical ravish style- "I either don't mind you."

Surya - "Aha you spoke but what is this JALAL. I am helping you atleast spare me on my car."

Surya started singing hearing which JALAL put his fist and controlled his anger. He knew he is singing to tease him

The song was

"Duniya mien kitni hai nafratien (How much hate exists in the world!)

phir bhi dilo mien hai chahathe. (Yet, even so, hearts continue to love.)

Mar bhi jaye pyaar wale (Even if lovers should die,)

mit bhi jaye yaar wale (even if they are erased from this earth,)
zinda rehti hai unki mohabbatien." (their love will live on forever...)

(cough cough hope you all get the hint of Arohi, if you see the lines and update and you can enjoy this song.)

JALAL controlled his anger and Surya kept teasing him as witty he can go.

They reached the mansion. He carried Jodha and said turning around to Surya while Surya was standing leaning on car folding his hand.

JALAL said- "Surya tell how can I pay you for your help."

Surya went ahead and first time after long kept his hand on his shoulder- "Hmm one thing you can do, never let Jodha come between our fight. Our relation is like lay man term for her so never let her come between us."

JALAL looked at his hand on his shoulder and back to him -"Good Night Surya."

Surya removed his hand and went back to his car - "Good Night."

The two days is tiring for JALAL and even stressful with all old memories and old relation passing by him. He was thinking from the day he and Jodha went out to till day while walking towards his mansion. His body was crying and his eyes were red. He was thinking the level of passion and aggression they went through. Surely he knows the road ahead is not simple. This was first time he wants to curse him for marrying a girl like Jodha just for his will.
He went inside mansion and saw Dai Maa waiting for them in hall. The things were placed in place and the room was cleaned.

Dai Maa said relieved and worriedly both at same time- "Beta you are back. What happened to Jodha beta."

JALAL said - "Thanks for waiting Dai Maa and making rooms clean. I will take her care and you can sleep in some room for a night. I am hell tired Dai Maa and I am heading to the room."

Saying this he carried her to bed room placed her in bed and went to have shower because he was tired and not even freshen up from two days.

He went had a good long shower wear his red black night suit. He came now and saw Jodha, he brings towel. He locked the room and closed the window and put curtains. He took long breath.

He went ahead and made Jodha sit back and remove her saree and throw it to floor and he can see her milky white skin who was shivering in pearls of water. The water in her waist was making way to flow her thighs. He removed her petticoat shivering and blouse. He undresses her totally. He looked at Jodha and remembered her confession. He dried her body with towel with shiver. Though he not looked at her and looked at other side while drying her sensitive parts. The chill of shiver running down to his spine the moment her touches her sensitive parts. He dried her body and hair totally making all traces of water goes away. His hand was shivering and his eyes were filled with tears. He wrapped her in towel immediately he dried her and sat their holding controlling his manly desire. He took long breath and carried her in his arms and placed her is sofa. He placed her saree and other clothes to washroom and removed his white cotton shirt from cupboard for her. It will be easy for him to make her wear shirt. He changed bed sheet which were wet till now and made her seat on sofa and then make her wore shirt and carried back to bed. She placed her in bed and covers her with blanket. He saw innocent face of her. He saw her face and whole world stopped for him for moment. He caressed her hair and saw her still shivering.

He went to kitchen and brings hot oil for her.

He took her hand in his hand and caressed it. He took hot oil and started massaging it for giving her some warm. He massaged her both palms of hand and then went to massage her foot. He gave her foot massage for giving a warm to run in her body.

He lit firewood which was in corner of her room to make room warmer for Jodha.

Then he removed his top and went himself inside blanket. He placed Jodha carefully leaning his body and placed her head leaned on his bare chest making his chest pillow for a night. He wrapped her tightly for giving her warm.

He leaned his head on pillow and took long breath. He kept looking at innocent girl on his protective shield and remembered her confession while she was in deep sleep. It was mid night and he was tired. He too went to sleep.

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Precap Jalal's jealousy reached its peak😆😆

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