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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gauriS

interesting update 😊

continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swatiluthra

Awesome ch mrs. Tokas.
Loved jalal care for Jo. But bechari Jo keeps waiting for ja all the time. 😭
Can't wait for the precap to unfold in next ch 😳

Continue soon dear 😛

thanks swati😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abhi786

Interesting chapter.. So for Jalaal it's just a marriage for property and Jo is in a golden cage.. Jo already loves him ?

thanks😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: onaisa

Brilliant chapter loved reading it
Thanx a lot fr d PM
Waiting fr d first joja kiss update sooon plz 😊 ⭐️

thanks onaisa for liking it so far😳😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Lovely update dear ... feel bad for jodha 😭 ... why is jalal so stone hearted ... doesnt he have any feeling for her 😭 ... poor jodha ... btw i thot when jodha wore that saree ... jalal will go gaga seeing her ... but no nothing happened ... hope jalal realizes his mistake ...

pari yaar ... party mein kuch aisa karo ..ki jalal gets jealous ... 😈

btw next update jaldi de do plzz😳

thanks varsha😉
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Posted: 10 years ago



WARNING : This is mature part. Read at your own risk. Kids stay away. I will recommend it for only 18 years and above.


Chapter 4 -Akdha first kiss

He came after taking shower and found himself all alone. He dressed up looking most handsome and hurriedly came down looking Jodha. He saw Jodha sitting on sofa of hall reading some magazine. He took a relief breath.
He went ahead and said- "Let's go Jodha."
Jodha stood up and started walking behind JALAL. Well she was thinking to why his husband is this and what their relationship status is. Well as they got out and headed to car, Jodha heard some sound from under bushes. She kept looking side and walks straight. The sound was very low that she paid attention and JALAL was busy in his car. She was searching for someone looking around bushes and suddenly her br***st bangs on JALAL's back.
JALAL turned around and holds Jodha tightly from waist and said shouting in hurriedly- "Jodha watch out."
He looked at Jodha's eyes which were again staring at him. He took his lips near her face and bends it on right of her neck. He said on her ears jokingly- "Think for some new idea to get into my arms from next time. By the way I don't mind you carrying in my arms."
He gave a smirk saying this, Jodha said scarily- "JALAL I think there is someone under that bushes."
JALAL replied placing her traces behind her ears -"Must be some cats or dog Jodha. We are getting late come sit on car."
Jodha struggled to come out from JALAL and succeeded in it. She holded his blazer tightly under her hand and pointed towards bushes- "JALAL I swear, I heard the noise. How come you not heard it?"
JALAL holds her through waist and pulled her near him. He said looking into Jodha's eyes- "Jodha I had not paid attention, must be some rat either. Jodha relax and let's go, we are getting late."
Saying this JALAL sat on driver seat and Jodha sat next to him but her eyes were constant on bushes. Suddenly he felt a warm hand on her back.
She saw turning her face little behind. JALAL said- "Jodha your dori was lose but now I tightened it."
Jodha was shy at JALAL's action. They left for a venue.
JALAL was constantly looking at her wife whose lips were giving him signal to kiss her.
He stopped the car in middle to give way to other car which was travelling behind him.
Don't know but JALAL tension was raising. Something clicked him and he closed the window of car taking Jodha to a shock. She turned around on JALAL side finding him approaching towards her. His lusty eyes were speaking volumes. His cute and yet evil face were leaning towards her. He was giving his body weight on her. She was leaning behind but JALAL caught her by putting his hand on his bare waist and back. He holds her and bends towards her so low and near that his warm breathing was touching her neck. Her heart was pacing fast which can be heard by JALAL. He gave a sexy smirk seeing her reaction. She placed her hand around his neck to get support. They were sharing deep eye lock.

The song in bg plays😳😳

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai



The tension between their hormones was increasing. JALAL took his lips near to her lips and started licking her lipstick from his tongue. He tightly but softly travelled his tongue around her lips rising her women hood in Jodha. He licked his lower lips making it free from lipstick.

Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaau Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai



Jodha took a step back seeing JALAL's action but liking it. JALAL then continued licking her upper lips making it free from lipstick.

Jodha was breathing harshly. After this JALAL placed his head on Jodha head and closed his eyes. Jodha too closed her eyes and their warm breath was touching each other bare skin. They were attached in passionate journey to love each other. But this was not end of desire, he started moving his fingers on her bare back like he is playing piano. She bends her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes. It was almost a hug. JALAL distanced Jodha for a while and removed his blazer throwing it behind the seat.

Then he pulled her near him and placed a passionate and starving kiss on Jodha's lips. He explored her lips like a greedy. He loved taste of her lips.

tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaau Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan


In course he became so hungry that he pushed Jodha towards him and started kissing it more passionately exploring her tongue. He swallowed her mouth water too in course. His tongue was stick with her tongue. At first Jodha don't know to answer and react but later she joined him in his passion.

Yeh Pal Hai Apna To Is Pal Ko Jee Le
Sholon Ki Tarha Zarah jal Ke Jee Le
Pal Jhapakte Kho Na Jana


She too started giving equal answer to him and started tasting him. They tasted each other sweet, sour with full heartedly. Their passionate side continued until both got exhausted.

JALAL very forcefully allowed himself to break the kiss to breathe. He was totally exhausted. He loosened his tie and opened button of his shirt for getting breathe. He leaned himself on seat. Jodha too was exhausted and she leaned on chair looking at JALAL who was equally breathing so heavily. JALAL looked at him and saw Jodha looking at him with full desire. She was not fulfilled with this much or says her desire was aroused.

She went ahead and holded his hand and helped him to travel and settled on side of her hips. She went ahead and kissed him with more passion and desire this time.

Chuke Karlo Yakin Na Jane pal yeh Paaye Kahan
Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan



She explored his tongue and played with it like same as JALAL played. She holds him through back and crunched his shirt with full desire.

Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai
Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai
Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin
Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan


Their passion was increasing and they were playing with each other's mouth. In course her saree also dropped from her shoulder making her body to get stick with each other. JALAL was playing with her dori all this while kissing making it apart from each other.

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan


Their dress was all messed in their passionate kiss.

After few minute they broke the kiss for shortage of breathe. They get very exhausted and leaned on their side of seat. They were breathing heavily and more heavily from last time.

He looked at Jodha and said still breathing heavily - "Jodha lets go back home, I don't think we are in position to go to party now."
Jodha was breathing so heavily that even not manage to say anything and just nodded her head to yes.
JALAL turned around and drove back to mansion. He took her in his arms and headed to mansion. She placed her down without taking his eyes from her he bangs the door. Dai maa opened the door and JALAL took Jodha in his arms and took her straight to room ignoring all totally. JALAL placed Jodha on bed and said - "Jodha get yourself comfortable. I need to finish my work."
She shockingly saw at JALAL who went out of the room. This is not what she was expecting but after such a passionate ride she was surprise JALAL to leave her like this. She got up and selected a white short, silk, sleeveless night gown for herself. She headed to change the dress.
He went to other room from where bushes were clearly. He was observing the bushes were clearly seen. He got a call suddenly to come out of his dreams. He picked up the call finding Adi asking about his where about. JALAL replied- "Adi tell them I am not feeling well and so cannot make it out."
Adi asked- "Are you ok JALAL?"
JALAL said- "Adi seems someone was spying us today. Don't know why I felt it but I think someone was spying our car when we were coming. Even Jodha felt someone around our house when we were coming but I ignored her but then in the middle of the way I saw some black car coming behind us. Somehow I managed to divert Jodha's suspecting attention. I don't know whether Jodha made me to think like this and I started suspecting car or else that car must be going in its own way and I thought too much."
Adi replied- "JALAL I think you taken a back after bhabhiji's words and started suspecting. Anyways don't think much and go to sleep. I will handle here everything. Good night."
He cut the call and placed it on table. He took a long breath and stare a dajalal night one last time before turning back. When he turned back he was taken to surprise seeing Jodha standing there. Her eyes was fuming, he went ahead and hold her from her shoulders and asked - "Jodha is there everything ok."
Jodha removed his hand making JALAL go stunned. She said angrily- "So you kissed me to divert my mind. Mr. Jalaluddin Mohammad, this was your real intention."
JALAL placed his caring hand on her shoulder and replied- "Jodha, the kiss was all of the sudden. I cannot get you out of my mind the moment I saw your bare back."
Jodha replied removing his hand harshly- "You lied to me JALAL. You all did to divert my attention and then you can bring me back. Aww JALAL you can simply say me that you are scared of other to meet me and so let's go home, no need to arouse my desire and then insult me by placing me alone in the bed."
JALAL caught her shoulder and said angrily-"It was a kiss and don't think so much. By the way while kissing you were having fun."
Jodha was stunned hearing this and she moved back nodding her head to no.
She said - "Fun JALAL, so it was fun for you. From past 2- 3 days I wait like a mad to meet you. Before leaving my home, whole way I was thinking about you. First I want you to come with me but you didn't, I forget that, then I expected you to be airport but you were not there, then I atleast thought you must be preparing for some party or decoration for my welcome but you still was not there, then I waited till late for you to arrive and see me but you didn't came. Whole day I roam like a ghost in your mansion and I cannot even get your sign of arrival early. I knew you care for me and I appreciate that but time. JALAL can't you spend even few minute with me. I thought you will spend a great time with me making up to miss form couple of days and night but you came here and lost in your thought. You can also discuss this all with me too. You think I kissed you for fun, great JALAL you are truly a heartbreaker what I heard about you but ignored it."
She turned around going to her room when she was stopped by JALAL's hand. He pulled her and banged her hardly on wall. She moaned in pain which shattered JALAL's heart. He blocked her way and said - "Jodha I don't mean to say that. It just got slipped. Please Jodha listen, yes I diverted your mind and I don't know why I selected to kiss you for diversion. It was not that fun but I think I just loved kissing you. You are good to respond me. Nor I want to insult you but I cannot go ahead like this. I mean you are my childhood friend and I do not want you to fulfil my lusty desire. I don't know how I got diverted and gave up the kiss to you but I never want you to hurt by anything and even by my lust. Yes Jodha you heard no wrong about me, I am a heartbreaker but I understand that you are my responsibility but this sudden marriage not clicking my head. I don't know but I cannot relate myself to this marriage. How can I so soon? I mean I am a guy who changes his girlfriends after every 5-6 months and never bother to fall in love. Before this I never shared any house with girl like you. I never slept with any girl before this, I am just a time pass guy who used to keep girlfriend to show off, that set. Jodha you are different from all who waited and wants to be with me not for show off but genuinely and that's truly attended by my heart and so I like you being around me. But..."
Before she continue Jodha harshly removed his protective hands, she looked at him and aww how much she wants to share her feelings with him but he had left no choice but be silent at this moment.
Jodha stared him with big eyes and JALAL left her way to go out. Before leaving she turned around saying one last thing for a day loudly and clearly- "You may think that it was lust but I don't think so it was lust. It is more to the lust. The lust cannot increase your thirst for the person after one go but this we both know that this kiss only arouse our desire to love each other."
Saying this she left the room giving JALAL a shock.

Precap - Akdha's second kiss😆

hope you like this sensual update🥱

Edited by --Mrs.Tokas-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chappy loved it update ur other ffs too
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update😊
their relationship status must be: its complicated 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update mrs. Tokas . Me blushing again 😳 . So passionate . Loved their first ever talk together, loved how ja is scared to hurt his childhood friend, but still at the same time likes her company. and thank god that he told her all his thinking , rather than keeping it to himself, like typically 😆 . Vaise ur Jo is no less than him, she's making him crazy about her 😆

Continue soon dear n thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: marshi

Awesome chappy loved it update ur other ffs too

thanks marshi but which one😃

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