14~NOT just a passionate affair~ 55 28th Sep - THE FACE-OFF 2 pts!

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome loved it jo is a not a victim shez a survivor love u

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

i am speechless after your updates

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Deepa

@Deepasub

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

It was a bit scary. But hope it gets better and the stalker is caught.

Waiting for the next update.

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Antara123

@Antara123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

It was amazing... Thanks Samy for the link... It was epic... Next two updates all will be cool. Btw, Jalal's friends irritate me... I mean, he is yelling vrom inside and these ppl are asking if he is fine. what nonsense.. anyways. good one.

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

From my pov ... this was a tough chapter to WRITE for a writer ... & a tough chapter to read , to feel & to go through everything that jodha has gone through , this was that tough for me as a reader ... infact this chapter & the previous one ... both were difficult for me to read ...

& to bring in this effect on the readers ... is not an easy job ... so what I would say is, it's a major achievement by you shradhs ⭐️... to make us feel & go through the torture of jodha ... hatss off to you sweets 👏

as I said I am very much confused as to what to say or write ... i really dont knw ... after knowing the stalker's story ... i really dont knw how to react , what to say , to sympathize with him or get angry & thrash him for his deeds ... i simply dont know ...

but one thing I liked was jodha's fearless befitting statements to knock him off his senses ... though she was almost semi-conscious ... she managed to buy time & stop him for what he was going ahead with ... now that was something worth appreciating this girl ... 👏 .. she didnt give up ... she was thinking ... still thinking of shifting the stalker's mind ...

shez a true fighter , a winner in all sense ... ⭐️

coming to jalal ... I dont have words to applause this gem ... he is a true boyfriend , a man , a friend , a partner & the TRUE soulmate of jodha ... 👏 ... their is NO match or Replacement for Jalal in jodha's life ...

the way he saw the photo of stalker & his wife ...Bingo !!! he got the clue ... must say ..a true sherlock holmes ka beta ...😆👏

& to see jodha in that horrible condition he must have been completely shattered 😭 & even I was shattered 😭 ... lashy I hope she is not dead ... 😭

as I feared ...stalker did hurt jalal ... & that to on a shoulder where he had hurt him earlier ... thatz bad ...

one thing i fail to understand ... how come this 40 year old prof is stronger than jalal to knock him & hurt him so badly ... even after jalal punching him & breaking his nose ... he was still conscious ?? 😕 plus this abdul , meera & renu 😡 ... i literally hated them in this chapter 😡

lastly ... lashy 55th chapter & the stalker is not out ...😭 ... only 5 chapter's left to finish ... & still no happy days of jo & ja ... no romance ... all tension ... how & when will we breathe a sigh of relief ???

if not all my wishes ... i want my one wish to be fulfilled ... wedding ... atleast u can give that right ... & 5 chapter's left i dont see any hope for that as well ... this is too disheartening ... plus the stalker ka story is not finishing ...

I thought u will complete the face off in this chapter 😭 ... but i think u r going to contiue this till next chapter ... kindly do not drag the stalker till the end ... plz a humble request 😭 ...

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

CONGRATS ON THE NEW THREAD SUPERSTAR🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳...

LOVED THIS CHAPTER ...WONDERFUL WRITING AS ALWAYS... IT WAS.FULL ON ACTION, SMARTNESS AND QUICK THINKING😛...LOVED MY GUTSY JO WHO TRIED, TRIED AND TRIED TILL THE LAST MINUTE DESPITE LOSING IT STEADILY DUE TO THE DRUG AND THE FINAL BRUTAL ATTACK😡😡😡😡😡😡😭😭😭...SHE GAVE BACK TO RAMU WITH SOME HARSH AS WELL AS SOUL-SEARCHING WORDS, SHOWED HIM HIS PLACE BY SPITTING ON HIM AND ALSO DECLARING ABOUT HER BEING JALAL'S 'WIFE' AND LOVING HIM ONLY (TOTALLY RILING HIM UP)👏👏👏...THATS MY GIRL AND I AM SO PROUD OF HER...

BUT THE WAY THAT ASS-RAMU REACTED WILDLY WITH JO LITERALLY PAINED ME...THAT WAS TOO HARSH...MAY THE PHYSCO ROT IN HELL😡😡😡...JALAL AND THE POLICE SHOULD NOT LEAVE HIM AT ALL😡😡😡

JALAL'S ENTRY BROUGHT A SMILE TO MY FACE AND I WAS LIKE PLEASE JALAL DO SOMETHING AND THAT TOO QUICKLY😛😭...JALAL TALKED TO RAMU FIRST BUT HIS EYES WERE SCANNING, HE WAS CAUTIOUS, HE WAS CALCULATING AND FINALLY HE HIT THE BULL'S EYE WHEN HE SAW THE INJURIES AND RAMU'S WIFE'S PICTURE...I WAS SO SO RELIEVED THAT HE DEDUCED IT ALL...PROUD OF MY SMART JALAL TO THE 'T'...HERE COMES JODHA'S 'KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOUR' --- HER ONLY MAN ---- HER ONLY JALAL... HER ONLY LOVE...I LOVED THESE THREE LINES (EVERYTHING WAS CLEAR NOW):...

'Where is MY girl?' he emphasized on the my'

'SHE IS NOTTT YOUR GIRL!'

'She is NOTTT YOUR WIFE'

AFTER THIS THE NEXT THING I LIKED WAS THE PUNCH😡...PUNCH😡...PUNCH😡 ...PUNCH😡TO RAMU...JALAL SHOULD HAVE TIED THAT MENTAL😡...BUT I KNOW HE WAS CONCERNED FOR JODHA ---- SHE WAS HIS TOP PRIORITY AND HE MIGHT HAVE FEARED FOR THE WORST WHEN RAMU WAS SMIRKING AND SMILING ...SO IT MADE SENSE THAT HE BROKE HIS NOSE, INJURED HIM AND RAN TO FIND AND SAVE HIS LOVE...

LIGHTS GONE (WHAT A BAD TIMING)...JALAL DASHING TO JODHA ...SEEING HIS BEAUTIFUL GIRL IN THAT CONDITION😭...WOULD HAVE REALLY BROKE HIS HEART...HE TRYING TO WAKE HER UP...CONSTANTLY REMINDING HER ABOUT HOW SHE WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO MEETING HIM AND MAKING UP, HIS FAVORITE DRESS THAT SHE WORE ... WAS ALL SOO TOUCHING😭...JO DESPITE BEING TOTALLY DOWN, FOR A MINUTE CAME BACK TO TOUCH HIM, FEEL HIM, TO KNOW THAT HER MAN HAS COME FOR HER... ...BUT ONLY TO FAINT AGAIN BECAUSE OF THE HEAD INJURY😭😭😭...FINALLY AND THANKFULLY JALAL REALIZED THAT JODHA NEEDED MEDICAL ATTENTION AND PICKED UP HIS GIRL IN HIS ARMS AND REACHED THE LIVING ROOM ONLY TO FIND THAT MANIAC MISSING...I WAS REALLY DREADING NOW...FEARING THE WORST...WHEN HE TRIED TO UNBOLT THE DOOR, REALIZED THAT THE DOOR WOULD NOT OPEN, AS IT HAS BEEN KEYED AND THEN THE ATTACK FROM MENTAL AGAIN...😡😡..OH NO...THAT WAS CRUEL AND BRUTAL😭😭😭...ABDUL PLEASE DO SOMETHING NOW...CALL ABULANCE FAST...JAJO NEED HELP😭😭...

NOW I LIKE MY JALAL ALL THE MORE😳...HE IS UP FOR THE CHALLENGE...HE IS NOT GOING TO BEAT THE BUSH...SHOW YOU CAN BE AS BAD AS IT NEEDS TO YOUR ENEMY JALAL...I KNOW YOU WILL...BEAT THE WHACKO LIKE A THRASH JALAL (DONT KILL HIM...I KNOW YOU WONT)😳...BUT HE NEEDS THAT BEATING ON AN URGENT BASISS😡😡😡...DONT LEAVE HIM😡😡😡...BEAT HIM UP BLACK AND BLUE PLEASE...😡😡😡😡😡😡

Edited by Pals2411 - 11 years ago

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Our Jodha's a true fighter👏

my comment on page 1 was soo stalker oriented😆

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Pals ... so finally u r here 😭 ... i am totally confused with the update ... i want this torture to end ... no more stalker yaar ... i dont know what to say about this update ... all was good but still ...i am not at peace ...😭

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Pallavi

@Pals2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Pals ... so finally u r here 😭 ... i am totally confused with the update ... i want this torture to end ... no more stalker yaar ... i dont know what to say about this update ... all was good but still ...i am not at peace ...😭

THIS CHAPTER WAS A BIT NOT TOO EASY TO DIGEST...EVEN I WAS A BIT SHAKEN...BUT NEXT CHAPTER I AM EXPECTING JALAL TO BEAT RAMU, GET THE KEY FROM HIM, ABDUL COMING WITH AMBULANCE AND MAYBE EVEN POLICE ...SO WE WILL SEE LIGHTNESS AFTER THIS DARKNESS😳...THEN JODHA IN HOSPITAL...INJURED JALAL ALSO BEING TAKEN CARE OFF ...JALAL WORRIED FOR JO...JO'S FAMILY COMING AND KNOWING HOW JALAL ENDANGERED HIS LIFE AND SAVED THEIR DAUGHTER😳...WAIT AND WATCH...I AM HOPEFULLL...NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE GOOD...

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: najma123
It was amazing... Thanks Samy for the link... It was epic... Next two updates all will be cool. Btw, Jalal's friends irritate me... I mean, he is yelling vrom inside and these ppl are asking if he is fine. what nonsense.. anyways. good one.

bwuahahaha 🤣 ... najma , najma , najma 🤣 ... why are u so funny re 🤣 ... i dont knw why i loved ur comment & felt like rofling 🤣🤣