~TORN APART~ ch 23 * updated!* 17/7 - Page 49

Originally posted by: savindi.db

😭 oh what to do na.ok then update sooon...actualy can't wait more time.. 😭

Originally posted by: Divya879

huh why dear?😕

Originally posted by: savindi.db

😊 im sry i could not reply yesterday..actualy im sooo exited about your story..it is a greate stry..you r a good writter..ook..update soon as u can...

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

AWESOME CAPPY...👏

SORRY FOR LATE COMMENT...😛

JALAL AND RAHIM PART WAS NICE...😉

AND FLASHBACK ALSO...😉

UPDATE SOON...😃

Originally posted by: abhi786

Divya wonderful chapter dear 👍🏼 👏 awww thank uuu 😳sorry late reply, no worries dear 😉 at least jalaal got to know that Jo is alive, yep !!😆 someone kidnapped her right on!. Rahim jalaal covo is good. Someone who close to him, who wants to see him suffer is doing this particularly on that day... ooh you're close! Hope Rahim gets a clue. Don't think its Ruku, but she might be helping also hmm you never know 😆, feeling it might be Adham doing it... maybe , maybe not..

Waiting for next update dear

i won't update for a looong time 😆

Originally posted by: Kanchani1375mis

wonderful ch divya thanks 😳even a mysterious ch full of thrill and ya i know that's ur speciality yep you got that right lol 😆while reading ur ch i feel like ab kya hoga ab kya hoga in normal scene haha thats how i hoped you guys would kinda feel 😆 also bcoz ur explaining is horrifying really? lol i told u i was bad at writing 🤣yar like when jalal take rahim into his house sounds scary hahahaha😆😆 na ch is nice and perfectly chained rahim doubt is obvious waiting fr next thanks and lol won't be updating for a looo while😆