~TORN APART~ ch 23 * updated!* 17/7 - Page 18

I want Jodha alive or else!😡😡

amazing... update asap...eager for the nxt part...:))

Originally posted by: Kanchani1375mis

Divya thanks fr the pm and again u leave chapter in suspense OK BT don't do this fr long yaar I always do that🤣 OK chapter is nice bt one thing I want to say that why u show jalal taking shower and eating toast I mean one day ago he has lost his love then what is eating and what is bathing (dont mind ha whatever i feel i tell u) YAR he is still human he needs to eat atleast 🤣 and bathing considering he drank so much he would've stunk pretty bad right??? Since going to the haveli he might as well smell a lil better 🤣 now let me guess perhaps that villain is Sharif dunno????? Still haven't thought of the villain 😆and ha pls complete the ff don't stop writing in between u r good writer especially HUH???😲 woah thanks u r good in making twists and turns my specialty 😆haha and dear update soon next year 😆next

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Originally posted by: akdhaswara

merry christmas di

and awesome update ,do continue soon

merry Christmas to you too baby!!!! Thanks I'll continue next year 😆

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

split it dear who is this new evil😈

t to be honest I haven't thought of the villain yet! 😆 But I do have an idea 😈

Originally posted by: ...jaskaran...

Awesome udpate!!!👏👏👏 But why u always leave like a twist.😆.. Why are you surprised?? 😲 I always do that 😆make them meet soon plsss. Hmmm maybe... Not maybe 😭. and plss u r such a good writer.😊 Aww really thanks . and my good friend.. Muavh 🤗then why u update so lateee. Sorry!!!! ... or kuch zyada hi time lapse nai hote.😆..Lol It just makes the story end faster 😆.chal koi baat nai.. Hehe 😆next update plss ek month ke andar andar de dena.😡.. Yeah yeah .dont always leave a suspense like this😭😭😭Let me see 😆lovve uuu love u more and upadte soon😛😛😛next year 😆

Originally posted by: Paul1234JA

Nest chapter update fast plz

next year is that OKAYi????😲 Sowwy hehe

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

I want Jodha alive or else!😡😡

or else?🤣

Originally posted by: Aditi512

amazing... update asap...eager for the nxt part...:))

really??? Lol thanks! Update! Ummm errrgh... Next year?😆

Originally posted by: prathi025

Hi

Nice update...

awe thank u 😳