Akdha OS: || Do Dil Ek Jaan..|| - Page 10

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Aww...I know. You don't want to show it to anybody😳

Even during my practicals, when I was free, I would write a rough summary for HFL. And a classmate forced me to show it to her😆

wow
very nice os
you write everything so nice
moti teasing jo and ja bought new cloths and jo ready to impress her hubby so nice that parts was
I am speechless
So passionate SR

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Arre.. They were like.. Jalaaal.. Jodhaaa.. unhum ahun... and their not so good winks😉😉

I was like what the hell... andd then I saw my rough copy.. open on the desk.. god.. that was a heart attack for me!😆

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Finally

my comments in blue

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Aww...Anu!🤗 Sammy di!🤗 I just loved it! This was some really fabulous writing from your side! And I feel that this the best that I have seen from you!

You loved it? Aww... Di☺️

The eagerness, and the happiness to be one together! Hayye! It was just too beautiful!

Di.. I can't stop blushing... what have you done to me?☺️

Loved the way Jalal selected his clothes especially to spend time with her. He was taking extra efforts here And Jodha too! 😳

They wanted every bit of it to be perfect...😳

Maham and Ruqaiyya in the dustbin here🤣

Exactly! I didn't even bother writing Maham's astonished and Ruqaiyya's jealous comments here🤣

Aww...it was so romantic when he just lifted her up in his arms!

They went into the tent which Moti had arranged for them. This couple had seen all the ups and downs! Nothing could stop them from being one now!

They are madly, deeply, truly in love with each other...😳☺️

And about the entire SR, it was so beautiful, so tastefully written. I can't stop praising your writing! It has a certain level of sophistication, which you can only acquire with further reading. However, I was amazed and blown away to see the level of maturity in your work! Well done!👏

Di.. don't praise me soo much.. now I am like.. my eyes widen.. my heart beats irreguar..😳 Sammy di!🤗

And baaki sab ka kya bolun, it was way too beautiful! And it was not GM in any way!😳

GM toh I can't even write...😆 not now at least.. aage jaake☺️

And no amount of hugs are enough!🤗

Hug Day!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thanks for this lovely surprise of yours! Please do give some more like this in the future and continue to amaze us!😳😳

It was more kind of a surprise for me... I never even thought of writing SR!☺️ Will try to write some more... if I am able to calm myself.. when I was typing this OS and specially the SR part.. I was like.. my heart was beating soo fast I thought it would come out😆

Best of luck mera chhota packet, bada dhamaka! May you be blessed always!😳

Chhota Packet bada dhamaka!😳Awww🤗

Loads of love

Sammy Di🤗🤗🤗

Love you Sammy didu!❤️🤗🤗🤗

Mere taraf se yeh cake!😳 Enjoy!😳

Cake is sooo delicious.. can't wait to have it in my mouth..

Anu 🤗 . Finally tumhe new story likh di 😊 . N not to forget, I m still blushing 😳 😳 .
Where does ur little brain get all these imaginations from 😆 .
Truly it was sooo sensual and romantic. after a long time, there was no ruks or Maham story in the SS
Keep writing more dear.
Love u ❤️ 😛

Originally posted by: Divya879

anu!!! yrrr that was just mind blowing😳,Aww. thanks Divya di!🤗 it was just perfectly written👏👏Perfect?😲 the title was perfect perfect " do dil ek jaan"I love this line...😳nothing could replace this😳 yrr it was just simply awesome👏👏I'll blush now!. you write sooo damn well the feelings were written the most amazing way any one can write👏That is a hugeee compliment di😲☺️. you are a star my darling ⭐️ , the consumation 😳😳 it was ssoo hot☺️,Akdha...you described it so well.You liked it?😲 my god the dress was just beautiful 😳.Dekha you liked it na.. and my bff Gargi was like.. haan haan thik hain😆 awesome job sweetheart❤️ Thanks Divya di!🤗

Originally posted by: anabella

Thanks for the suprise it was lovely.😊😊