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Is tht Jalal's plan to take jo to his home
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Nice update..jo going to stay in jalal house..interesting..haha..
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awesome chapter buddy now jodha will be living with her hot handsome jalal.
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jo n jay together in a home.,.,.,. it wiil b fun to read ahead,.,. continue soon😊
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wow nice chapter
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Chapter 16 :

The atmosphere in the car is totally depressing right now. None of us spoke since 15 minutes, really awkward. Something's wrong? Wait, why do i worry? Fine, alright if he ain't interested talk to me and think of me as actually a piece of shit then okay, fine.. i'll surely tell him i'm not like all those bimbo girls outside wanting to show off their ugly faces and their over-large stupid asses. I ain't interested. Fine, Jo...that's fine, ignore. Just ignore. Fine. Bullshit on your face Mr Jalal. Bullshit. 'Am i boring you ?' i asked him, totally irritated. He didn't looked at me but just smirked. Ah that smirk. That smirk...it does something to me..making me hot from even the deepest atom of my useless body..ahh..it feels as if desires inside me have arisen. Just shut the f**king bullshit up. A voice inside me poked me on the moment. Fine. Don't answer me, i ain't even worth to be answered? Wow, thanks. Just then i heard a gentle; manly laugh fill the air in the car. I looked beside me and my heart skipped a beat...His smile...The million dollars smile..That heart melting, that Mr.Sexy's smile..Everything inside me seems to find amusement in him now...

'You're completely a matter of amusement, Miss Jodha. There ain't no reason to be bored while i'm around you.' My cheeks turned crimson red. Oh damn it, he's so damn. I mentally flips up the table in my imagination. I'm so excited. His compliments makes the butterflies flutter in my belly. He's so adorable. He's my obsession!? Is it so? His smirk..His sudden Compliments and his smile...Am i addicted to those? Am i obsessed with those? Am i? I can't look at him in the eye right now. I'm just blushing. I'm totally acting like a stupid teenager with overdosed hormones. But i don't care, what's wrong in enjoying this weird and so called new feelings in the very first time? Right..? It ain't a sin, right? Yeah right..Pookie right!

'I told you earlier too. Learn to use to get compliments every time rather than turning all pink, making me to have you right now in the car.' He suddenly stopped driving as he finished his sentence. My heart raced, blood rushing in my ears, oh my god. I'm getting goosebumps. I felt my nipples suddenly get harder and brush against my bra. I want to moan. I want to moan in his mouth. I want to feel his mouth of mine's. I want to have him inside me. I want to feel the pleasure too. He's looking at me with eyes full of lust which is clearly visible. Oh my holy god.! Is he really going to take me right now? In the car? My heart...Oh my god...My poor...helpless heart..

I'm addicted to you, hooked on your love, like a powerful drug.
I can't get enough of you. Lost in your eyes, drawing in blue..
Out of control..What can i do? I'm addicted to you..

I really am addicted to him, his mind-blowing statements and everything about him...I'm addicted. It's bad, it's really bad...I shouldn't be..I can't ...I shouldn't think this. I just can't. He doesn't want me..I'm just another ordinary girl for him. And...what if he do this with every girl..Every girl? The thought only is enough to anger me. I rolled my eyes. Damn it. I need to control. Yeah. Freaking control. After all that's all what guys need. Sex and only Sex. f**k my fabulous life and what the hell am i doing? Just wasting my time fantasizing about someone who can't be mine? I really am Stupid.

Sex..having sex with him for once wouldn't be fabulous? Shut up!

The car finally stopped. Look like we've reached our destination. I looked before me as the gate-keeper opened the huge door and Holy f**k! This is so big..No..Huge...more than huge..It's not a house..It's a palace. It's so big. Holy God! Take meee...It's so big. Like a palace. He live in a very very very big house like this? Oh, a palace i mean. I look at the palace with an awe in my eyes. I never noticed when he took out of the driving seat and opened my door too and now is giving me a helping hand to move out of the car. Is he a prince or what? I mean...such a big house. Oh yeah, he's the CEO of Mughal enterprises. Remember?

I take his hand, ignoring the odd electric spark again and kept on admiring the place. There's a big garden with different kinds of flowers and it look so beautiful and so lively. There's even a bench on it. The gardener is watering the flowers. Wow, there are baby's breath flowers too. Oh my god. They're so cute. Baby's breath is my favorite one.

We entered the house and it was f**king fabulous. Even if i spend my whole life working day and night i can't stand to create such a f**king fabulous house not even the generations after me could. It is so expensive, it tells it by it's look. Everything's fabulous. I'm greeted by a thousands of stairs. Beautiful , yet antique paintings hanging on the wall. Beautiful yeah luxurious rags covering some expensive and tantalizing marble floor. Walls colored beautifully in my combinations. It's a dream...A dream for common people like us to see for once. I actually am seeing this all in real. I look here and there...admiring the whole place...There's a bar also. Oh my god. A bar table..in a house? And Jeez! There are so many of wine bottles placed on it. It's a dream life.

So that now i know a little about him i can bring it into a sentence, 'Mr. Jalal is truly hot, handsome, obsessing, rich, powerful and yet an alpha.' Right? 'Fell yourself at home, sweetheart.' He said out of somewhere.. I looked beside my right and there he is, all smiling at me. I smiled back at him. You're amazing..I mean it.. Yeah. 'Okay so, come..i'll show you your room..' he said while he grabbed my wrist and i unconsciously followed him where ever he was taking me. I'm safe. I know, i just feel the touch. His touch. My body's respond when he touch me. I feel that. I feel it so deeply.

He opens up the room and it opens up into another world. Oh my god. If he were'nt here, i would have jumped higher and higher in excitement but since he's here i gotta control. I don't want him to think of me as someone really stupid. It's crazy. You drive me crazy, baby.'Wow.' I said with a dumb founded expression. 'It's really beautiful Mr..' he cut me off, 'You can call me Jalal.' A kind smile on his lips. Ah. Damn it. Don't do this to me. I hurriedly broke the eye contact we've been holding up for 2-3 minutes. Damn me.

'Come in..' he says as he steps inside; and i followed. The room is really beautiful and perfect and unworthy for someone like me. I'm just.. I mean...Alright damn...I ain't from a poor family..but.. I always wanted to build things like this on my own money..My parents are undoubtedly really rich but i ain't a spoiled kid who'd flatter on and on about how rich their parents are. They money doesn't concern me. We've had thousands of family talks where dad and mom lectured me saying their money is also mine, i know...i appreciate that but you know i am not just an ordinary girl. I have a different mind and different dreams...It's not like that i am so much self-centered but...well, leave it..It ain't the right time..

I'm suddenly pinned to the nearest wall; unexpectedly. What the good hell??? 'Jesus f**king Christ..Where are you lost?' He said aggressively as his hold on my hands tightened and his body pressing against mine. At that time i felt like moaning the pleasure out but i just didn't. What's going on? I closed my eyes and breathed heavily as his nose nuzzled my cheek and then my jawline. Oh my holy god. Oh my f**king heart. Oh god. This is too much. I'm going to faint. Jeez.

'Jal..al..Pl..eas...ee..' I said between my ragged breathing, i kept biting my lower lip again and again, my eyes opening and shutting again and again, my body twisting. My heart beating faster and faster. It just wouldn't stop.. The feels, Ahhh.. I finally moaned. He stopped and looked at me..My eyes opened, our eyes locked. His dark eyes burning in my blue. We got lost away in the moment.. He loosened his grip on my hands and my body and...smirked..?? What the hell? I feel so embarrassed. So f**king embarrassed. I feel like digging a big...a f**king huge hole right now and get myself grounded in it right now...Right..now.. Damn it.

I looked down in embarrassment and pushed him off me. The smirk on his face wouldn't fade away. It's just...urgh! Damn..I'm so stupid..So stupid to moan that loud. I'm an idiot, a f**king asshole and a damn bitch.. Stupid me. It's just so shameful.. Suddenly i heard him say, 'I was going on and going asking you if you liked the room..but you didn't answered..You were lost somewhere else or in someone else?' Is that a query? 'And...i don't like people ignoring me while i'm talking to them.. Aggression in his voice was too clear. I turned back with all my strength. Come on Jo, you can do that...You're strong.

'I'm sorry. It's just..I'm sorry. I'll keep that in mind.' I tried to smile but failed. It's unusual for me..For being around such a hot guy who's the owner of a great leading company and then i'm going to live in his house, and being pinned on the wall by him only..it's so disturbing actually..It's just...weird..? It's just too much for a girl like me who have never had any...such thing..you know what i mean..

'It's okay.. Be comfortable. Come out in 10 minutes for lunch, okay?' he asks, i nodded and therefore, he leaves the room. I quickly closed the door and dang, i let myself fall on the irresistibly comfortable and soft bed. I closed my eyes and let my mind wander about the recent events. 'Ahh..' I sighed. It's fine. its okay, i'll just go ahead and face life in whatever rhythm it wants to take me in. I got up and peeks around the room. The bathroom is too big for a single person and this all reminds me of home. I feel home sick right now. I miss mom and dad. I never had siblings but i really want to have one but unluckily i never did have one and then Moti came in my life, she's like my sister..like really my sister.

Side by side or miles apart sisters will always be connected by the heart. We weren't sisters by birth but we knew from the start, fate brought us together to be sisters by heart, even though we aren't sisters by blood but we are sisters by heart. The room is undoubtedly beautiful and designed in the most beautiful and perfect way. Too much modernized.

The memories of my family and my friends is enough to make me smile even though i have too much in my mind to consider about and too much wandering to be done. But, i must say that i love these random memories that make me smile no matter what's going on in my life right now.

I heard a soft knock on the door, 'Hey..The lunch's ready..' That voice. it do weird things to me. I feel hot, so hot. 'Yeah..' and he comes in. Jeez. He smiled sardonically at my expression. Well, i gotta work with my expressions. I'm too opened and too easy for people to peek through me. Can he read my mind? Of course not.. 'Did i disturbed you?' He asked; looking at me confusedly, 'Of course not.' I smiled. Time to make some correct decisions. 'Lets go?' i asked and he just nodded in the response. 'First you..'He says gently. Oh, what a kind gentle man. 'Thanks.' I said and nodded and then made my way out the room knowing he's at my back, following me. Fine, breathe Jo breathe.. It's fine..Just fine..

'I'll help you find our destination.' He said from my back and once again, without giving me a moment to respond my wrist is in his grip and he's leading me through. God. It's just too much to feel, how can he make me feel so much in just a day? It's unbelievable. I peek a look at his features, broad-shoulders, dark copper colored hairs and intense, bright gray eyes. He's such a good looking man that i think any woman who would be married to him would yet be the luckiest woman in the world. He's undoubtedly really attractive.

'Here..' He says as we reach in a very big and spacious room having a very big dinning table in the middle and a kitchen is been seen too. Whoa. This is beautiful. 'Come..' He says as he took out the seat for me and i sat there, thanking him first..he then takes a seat in front of me...We're both facing each other and our food is already served, i wonder who did that. 'You ordered the food?' I asked in curiosity. I'm such a curious girl. 'No, Mrs. Alex did that..Ahh Mrs.Alex..my cook..' he explained. 'Oh.' I replied.. 'Lets eat..' He said as he picked up his knife and fork. And we started eating.

Silence once again took place between us until i broke it, 'Uh..Mr..' he cut me off, 'Jalal..' He said emphasizing much at his lone word, i got it and continued, 'Jalal...i need to go to work..you know..so..i mean..how would i..?' i'm a bit tensed. 'Don't worry, i'll drive u today and um..other days Matt can drop and pick you up.' He said, 'Matt?' i asked,'Yeah..my own worker..' though he didn't gave away much information. Am i curious? 'Eat.' He ordered, i nodded and started eating again.


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I was working when i saw Surya at my working place, staring and moving towards me. I felt uneasy. I backed up thinking he might stop, but hell no, he didn't stopped. 'Jo, we need to talk..' he said once he was near me.. I looked at him fiercely in the eye and replied, 'But i don't think we really need to talk.'..'Just listen to me once, please.' He plead and tried grabbing my upper arm, but i jerked him away.
We're absolutely grabbing some audience's attention. 'Just don't.' I told him. 'You need to listen..' His voice sort of scared me. I looked at him with eyes wide opened. 'Just, please..once.' He said, his eyes softening. 'No..' I'm stubborn, and once i make up my mind, nothing can make me change my decision.

'I think that's just enough.' Jalal came in, holding my upper arm and jerking me on him, i looked up at in his eyes, and they're cold, and anger clearly visible, 'Just leave..' His voice, full of authority. 'I'm not talking to you..' But before Surya could complete his sentence, Jalal added, 'Get out, before i freaking kick you out.' I've never seen him this angry or mad.

'Jal..al.' I kept my hands on his chest, hoping to calm him down, just as my hand touched his chest or you can say his clothes, he looked down at me and his eyes softening. Surya didn't argued anymore and just left after his glaring session ended.

I jerked my hand away from his chest, 'Um..I-I Ju-st..' but before i could complete i'm grabbed in a tight embrace, embrace which i never have had before, feelings which i never felt before started filling my heart. Jalal's scent filled up my mind. I hugged him back, his chin resting on my shoulder, sending sparks in my body, making my heart r

un faster than usual. 'How many times do i have to tell you to be alerted of such perverts.' There's dominance in his voice, sending shivers down my spine. I didn't replied to it. He then broke the hug and looked at me in the eyes, his grey eyes burning in my blue.. Your optimistic eyes seems like paradise, to someone..like...me.

'Let's get going.' He said and i nodded, i took off my apron and told the manager that i'm leaving since my working hours are finished already. Jalal grabbed my wrist and we're now walking out. I looked at him through the corners of my eyes. He's really handsome. A man who's surely every girl's dream. His nose perfectly straight. His face of an angel...a handsome angel. I chuckled at the thought. His lips...Kissable. 'What's so interesting about my face?' He asked, raising his brows. I realize we're standing in front of his car and his hands are crossed over his chest. 'Uhmm.what?' I looked away immediately. I'm embarrassed; yet again. 'You were staring at me like...' He then chucked and then rubbed his hand on his face, his eyes playful. I bit my lower lip. He's so...admirable.. But, he's such a jock. I can never understand what is he thinking right now while he can clearly read what's going on in my mind.

'Had fun staring ?' He smirked. Oh god. His smirk. It's so so so good. It feels really good. I feel admired. I feel like..wait. Shut up. 'I wasn't staring you.' I lied. 'Oh, is there something written on my face then?' He said as he faked started rubbing his face so that if there's something it would be jerked off. 'Aish..Let's go..' I said as i giggled.

He sometimes acts really childish, like he's really free to talk to me...Am i right? I have a crush on him, yes i do. There's no way i'm denying it.

He drove us away in silence, i took out my ipod from my the pocket of my jeans and played myself some amazing all time favorite songs.

There was a peace drop silence in the car. Jalal concentrating on driving while i was busy looking out the window, taking a look at the eternal; natural beauty.

Soon enough he was parking the car. He helped me hop out of the car; like a gentleman. 'Thanks.' I muttered shyly. His touch sending sparks in my body and i can't help but just feel yet control my inner self.

'Hello, Sir.. The dinner's ready...' A lady with blonde hairs; probably in her forties greeted him. 'Good thing, thanks Aspen.' He said with a warm smile. I smiled at the woman. I guess she's the cook. 'Come.' Jalal says as he held my wrist and drag me inside my room. 'Get fresh in 15 minutes and come out, okay?' He asked bossily.

Whoa? What's the matter with him?

'Yep.' I nodded softly.

He closed the door and i threw myself on the comfortable bed. How i wish i would never have to get off this bed, cuz it's irresistibly comfortable. But then again, i have to follow him or else who knows what would he end up doing?

Yeah, that's it. I'm out before 15 minutes. Not only because i have to follow his orders but because i was dying inside like a teenage girl to see him. Like, okay no offence, but he really do something that makes my inside twist tighter and tighter.

He was sitting by the counter when i reached the living room. He spotted me and the curves of his lips curved upward. 'Come.' He says softly as his hands motioned towards the table, all ready for our dinner.

'Sit beside me..' Was it a order? Didn't seem like. Or was it a plead? Can't really be. But whatever it is, i nodded and sat beside him. The sound of forks hitting the plates and knives cutting their preys soon filled in.

'You never told me about your family, Jalal.' I spoke as i drank some water.

'There's not much to know, i have a happy family. My mom and dad, well both work, have their own kind of business and a younger sister and a younger brother is all i have.' He said as his knife pierced through the chicken, then his fork grabbing onto it and tadd.. in his mouth, there it goes.

I gulped.

He looks so f**king gorgeous.

So young.

'Jodha, eat..' He said snapping me out of my dreamland, i nodded and started eating..

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It's be 2 days since i've been living at his place, things have been going fine, i guess? Anyways, so today I've decided to do some shopping, i need new jeans and tops now. I took a quick shower and got ready with just a little makeup including eye liner, some mascara and a pink lip gloss, and here i am, all ready.

Wait what? I don't have my car... how will i go?

Oh a cab, yeah, a cab can work..

I took out my phone and called for a cab, the cab will be there in a couple of few minutes so i took those times in my advantage and listened to some of my favorite songs. Soon enough, the cab arrived and i was on my way to go to my favorite shopping mall, the one where Moti and I usually hang around.

Talking about Moti makes me miss her so much, i wish she was here.. I mean how long will she take now? Is she fine? I took out my cell from my purse and typed out a message for my only best friend.

"I'm a bit worried for you, how are you? Is everything alright? When will you be back? I miss you a lot, and don't stress yourself, okay? i love you.. xoxo Jo." And i pushed the send button..

'Stop stop..' I yelled at the cab driver, making him stop the car in the middle of the road, just to look at the heart wrecking scene ever more clearly..

There he is, Jalal, sitting inside that coffee shop with a woman and kissing her harder than ever, harder then he have kissed me. Oh my God. Is there any explanation for that? Tears started brimming my eyes, every man is same, huh? Ain't it? I sarcastically rolled my eyes at the back of my head.

There he is, kissing that woman with all his passion. I thought i was the one whom he was interested in after he kissed me in the elevator, but seems like he have other objects of interests as well.

Oh well, it's not like we're in a relationship, right? Then i'm not supposed to be this hurt about it. It's his life, he can do shits with it, who am i to interfere, he can kiss anyone, he can make out with anyone, it shouldn't concern me.. Thoughts like these made me cry harder.

'Ma'am are you okay?' I cab driver asked me as he saw me crying.

Taking out a tissue from my purse i started wiping off my tears and said, 'I guess i am, Mister.' And smiled my kindest smile at him.

Jalaluddin Mohammad, i won't let you rule me again, i won't let you play with me, i am not a f**king dice that you can play with me. 'Let's get going, Mister. ' I regarded to the cab driver and he started the engine.

I won't let my feelings for you come in your and my way again, you can f**k whoever you want, you can boss around them, but not me. I won't let you order me, boss around me. I won't let you be the dominant around me, in totality, i won't let you control and mess with my heart and my feelings anymore. I let out a sarcastic laugh on just the thought of him messing around with me in all those moments that took place between him and me.

You're a mere player Jalal, aren't you?

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Stepping inside the mall i looked around for the newest clothes collection. Someone taps my shoulder, making me turn around and to my surprise it's him. 'Oh hey, Baby girl.' Matt winks up at me, making me giggle a couple of times. 'So, we meet again.' I say smirking and raising up my eyebrows, 'Yes we do.' He winks and takes me in a hug, i hug him back.
'Well, so what can i help you with today?' He says pouting. 'Cute.' I chuckle. 'We don't sell cute, is that even a clothing item?' I laugh at his joke and he pats my head, 'Well Matt, i need some new jeans and crop tops.' I say, 'Well, come.' He says and i followed him.

After like an hour and a half i was finally done with my shopping. After Thanking Matt for helping me around choosing and shopping i paid for my expenses and grabbing the bags in my hands i went out and called for a cab.

A car stopped in front of me and when i looked closely it was Jalal sitting behind, he opened the door and came out. I pretended as if everything's fine. The kiss scene flashed in my mind, pissing me even more off. Liar.

'You came alone?' He asked as he eyed the shopping bags in my hand. I literally refrained myself from rolling my eyes and said, 'I guess so!' And i managed to put up a small smile. His eye brows creased perfectly. 'Okay, come sit inside.' He ordered, who he think is he ? I won't do as he orders me to do.

Upon seeing that i didn't reacted to his order and looks at me questioningly 'I think you didn't hear, so get inside i'll drop you.' Oh no really, there's no need for this formality, i'm not going to get trapped in your gentleman traps anymore so yeah piss off.. 'Thank you so much Jalal, but i don't want to take more favors from you as much as already i am taking but staying in your home.' He looked stunned for a moment until his eyes went dark and he looked fiercely strong. 'Jodha, without arguing just get in the car.' He ordered once again in dangerously low voice.

'Look if you think i'm going to get scared...' He didn't even let me complete my sentence and held my wrist tightly, jerking me in the car. 'Jalal.. the hell, who do you think you are..' I was once again stopped in the middle of my sentence because he closed the car door loudly, making me jump in my seat.

He comes and sits on the other side and instructs the driver to get us home.

The ride to home was awkwardly silent, none of us spoke a word but i felt him stealing angry glances my way and so did i gave him some pissed off stares and i'm quite sure he saw those and is quite aware that i'm pissed off. Serves you right.

Who do you think you are to him that you're showing him that you're piss off and blah blah. Actually why do you even care about what he is doing? Whether he kisses someone or f**k them,isn't that none of your business?

My sub-conscious strikes, well that's a good point made there. Why do i even care? It's not like me and him are a thing.. Then why do i care?

Because you like him.

I groaned at my sub conscious. Like huh? My foot. I rolled my eyes. No i do not like him and i'm quite sure about it..

Oh really? Then why were you burning when you saw him kissing someone in the coffee shop?

I don't know so piss off.

Finally the awkward car ride came to an end as we reached our destination. Without waiting for Jalal to open my door i opened it myself and ran inside, Jalal following me inside, i can hear his foot steps coming nearer and nearer as my heart took up speed and started drumming hard against my chest.

'Jodha stop..' Jalal hissed loudly. My feet automatically stopped, his voice was dangerously commanding. I stood still until he came and stood in front of me. He took a long sigh and murmured something under his breath which i couldn't catch, 'What have gotten into you?' He shouted.

Oh well, i took a step back. He have never been this loud and angry, at least not in these days that i've known him in, it's not like i know him since i opened my eyes.

'I...I..jus..t..' I stuttered hesitantly. I look down at my crossed fingers, okay think something dumb Jodha.. Think something.

Oh you know i am just mad because i was eating pastries and someone hit me and it fell so i was pissed.

Oh really? Wow, that's amazing. My sub-conscious rolled her eyes. It's not a bad idea, i defended myself. Food is always love you know, so it's not a bad gate away chance, aye food, i love pastries though, you know those full chocolate pastries stuffed with chocolate chip cookies? Aye, they're life.

Wait, where am i going with that?

He raised his eyebrows in a questioning expression, 'Have no answer Miss Rajput?' Oh so we're back to being formal, well okay, two can play this game. 'Actually Mr. Mohammad, i think it is sincerely my wish what do i decide to do with my life, it's my wish if i really want to take a ride from you or not, you are no one to force me and i think i'm quite grown up to take decisions for myself.' I said with a proud smirk on my face, tit for tat it is.

Jalal looked shocked for a moment but his shock-ness was immediately replaced with a big smirk on his face, okay really? What was he thinking? 'Honestly you think you're grown up enough to handle yourself? I mean, if i hadn't saved you the other day from your friend, then i guess you might have woke up on his bed the next day.'

Oh really? So now you're showing off.

'To be really honest with you Mr. Mohammad, i really didn't asked you to come and help me, i didn't asked you to be my savior, so whatever you did, you did it by your wish, not because i asked you.' I crossed my arms over my chest now.

He muttered something under his breath again which pissed me off, 'You know what Mr. Mohammad? If you want to say something to me or even curse or swear me, do it on my wish not as a whisper to yourself, i'd really appreciate that, and i'd be very pleased to know what you really think about me and what comments do you pass on me.' I said with a fake smile, the smile reaching my ears.

He chuckled for a moment before saying, 'You honestly want to know what i just said?' He raised his brows again. 'Of course.' I said even without thinking.

'If you were mine Jodha, then you wouldn't have dared to speak all this whatever you spoke, and if you did, i would have spanked you. So, you're lucky you're not.'

Butterflies fluttered in my belly making my stomach clench tightly. Why does his statement look so...intimidating?

'Dominant much, huh?' I smirked.

'Yes, Miss Rajput.' he muttered.

I walked pass him refraining from carrying on the conversation any further. I walked into my room and kept all the shopping bags on my bed, taking out clothes and hanging them in the closet.

Who the f**king hell he think he is? I mean alright, i'm living in his house, but that's not my wish. I honestly couldn't stay here anymore, it's about my self respect. Whoaaa.. Wait there kid, now where does this self respect come from all of a sudden? You know what? You need to shut the f**king hell up before i murder you, i groaned at my sub-conscious. I mean honestly, i am not his servant or anything that i'll follow all his rules. It's my life, i'm an adult, i can do whatever the f**k i want, just like he can kiss whoever he want.. Oh ho sweetie, so it's all about that kiss huh? I thought you said you didn't care, then why do i smell a burning's smell.. Oh really? It's you who's burning, i snapped back at my sub-conscious. Nah sweetie, that's you, you're jealous that he was kissing someone else and not you, you're jealous about that kiss, you're jealous because you like him and don't even try to deny this because you've admitted it yourself that you like him..

I know it's such a boring and time wasting update and even so short, but can't you guys just spare me this time? I promise i'll make the next update worth your time, phuleaseee *puppy eyes* Okay, as you see this thread is about to end in 9 pages, therefore until you guys don't finish this thread i won't post chapter 19😎 I'll post chapter 19 on next thread only, now it's your work to finish this xD And yeah spare me time to create a dhamakedaar update for next time 😉 So, make sure you hit like and comment and if you want to be notified of future updates make sure you add me, love y'all Byee🤪


Edited by MeShu-Holic - 9 years ago

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