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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was midday the sun which was shining bright a while ago vanished to reveal black clouds signaling something bad was about to happen. The palace which was filled with sounds of birds chirping, people sings and talking was not fill with sounds of thunder ,people crying mourning there loss .it was not just the people that were crying but the skies as well .crying for the one who just lost her world her reason to live.

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a couple of hours after jalal announced his wedding to atifa shocking everyone .jodha who had enough of this and left for her chamber while everyone else were busy trying to make jalal change his decision. But what no one noticed was atfia who was no longer there. When all of a sudden screams of horror filled the palace bringing everything to a standstill. Those were the screams of a mother for her unborn children those painful heartbreaking screams will never be forgotten for years to come. everyone rushed to the sounds of the screaming as they knew that it was jodha's screams which lead them to a room with huge doors but the doors were locked and the screams stopped.it took the guards a good couple minutes to open the door but when the doors finally open to reveal four men holding down a semi-conscious jodha who was still begging and pleading for them to not harm her precious angels but it was too late. None of those demons listened to mother's pleas as the beat her with a wooden log repeatedly. The guards ran in and take the men who attacked jodha and those who were holding moti and reva away. those demons knew that they mission was successful and left the room with huge smirks on their faces .everyone just stood there with tears running down their faces as there on the bed laid jodha in a pool of blood and in the corner of the room moti and reva sat tied and gagged with tears in the eyes and the feeling of hopelessness. jalal screamed for the hakim which brought everyone out of there shock . They rushed forward to help jodha who was unconscious and free reva and moti .after a few minutes the hakim declared what everyone already knew the future waris of the Mughal Empire were died.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Jalal could not believe that the one person he did so much to protect fell prey to those demons and he knew who did this and was not going to let those people get away. He will make sure they pay for harming his babies, his love .he was just about to leave when he heard his mother scream she is awake .jalal rushed towards jodha sitting next to her, she just hugged him and broke down. She only repeated one thing over and over again they killed my babies. This broke everyone in the room. They all just cried and hugged each other. Their hearts went out to the young mother who lost her angels .she told him how she begged but they did not listen. When she lifted her face from his chest she had to know if they caught those men. When Jalal just nodded she lifted her heard of his chest she wiped her tears and closed her eyes and prayed that god to give the strength. she was no doubt she was in pain but she still work up ignoring everyone's pleas for her to rest but the only time she could rest was once those demons paid.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really fabulous👏... so touching nd heart-wrenching🥺... poor jo😭😭... pleading nd begging 4 d babies but 2 no avail... really wanna know abt dose devils😡 nd how jalal punishes dem😛... nd also d role of atifa😈 ... pls update soon😉 nd pm me if possible😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz do continue it was awesome plzplz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dodoneha

its really fabulous👏... so touching nd heart-wrenching🥺... poor jo😭😭... pleading nd begging 4 d babies but 2 no avail... really wanna know abt dose devils😡 nd how jalal punishes dem😛... nd also d role of atifa😈 ... pls update soon😉 nd pm me if possible😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mindblowing👏👏
awesome blossom👏👏
plz do contiue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its awsom.. plz continue soon
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Ohhh poor jodha
plss cont soon and dent frgt to pm me

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