FF:Registan Ka GULAB THREAD ~ 2 Chapter 10 Updated April 11 page 122 - Page 51

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Posted: 11 years ago
You r truly a gem u know that.Ur writing omg!kitni khubsoorat hoti hai.I loved every bits of it.scene of the day was when hamida caught them running and the dailogues followed.it was so cutee.Ek hi pal Mein ek dusre se mafi mangte hain aur dusre hi pal jung ka maidan."
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously Can't understand where to start from. I have read last three chapters together and I am overwhelmed in a good way. You are really more than wonderful writer. you know when i am reading i don't loose interest for even one second. My eyes stuck on my ipad. your update is better than any book i read. First I got attracted to this story just because of suspense but i forget all about it and now i am all dreamy in this two strong bull headed characters. Such beautiful romantic stories. let me talk about the update.
1. I love how Radha smile seeing Rukaiya's frustrated face.
2. Finally, Maham I was wondering when she is going to wake up.
3. Radha realized she will have to spend night with him and her shocking reaction. beautifully written how Reva and Radha hug. At least she has some one in the palace.
4. Jalal and Radha's conversation, ahhh no words for that. how Jalal shut her up and how she continued arguing. You showing her fear, stubbornness and arrogance at the same time. Ramlila and my Jalal Ravan NO. but i loved it, only Radha is allowed to say that.
5. Reva and Radha talks, you don't miss anything. you write in detail every scene even their expression. Readers really picture what you want them to. Why Jalal didn't question about dress? YOU MISSED IT. I thought after harem ladies taunt Jalal will ask, but you surprise me with lovely shock.
6. Rukaiya chhiii chiii why kissing jalal. please don't show that again and poor Jalal hurt Radha, but he didn't intent to. I shivered while reading that entire part. how u write all this in one update.
7. I felt Radha should have retort more than you have shown. felt she needed to be more tough as per her character. I think she is mellowing towards him. She has already fallen in love with him hard.
8. Radha is here to kill Jalal?😲 While talking she said when time comes I will kill you. Oh no please don't do that. Hope it was only casual talk and you not giving us hint of something very big.
9. Terrace part awesome loved their fight, loved their running behind each other. I thought after hearing Radha's speech Jalal will mellow but as per your habit you don't like to do as per readers thinking and shock us with their another fight and I love how Jalal answered back to Radha. Radha is wrong too.
10. She bit him that badly, my Jalal. No. love their running and then Rahim, Salima, Jodha and Hamida. I don't know how much more i can write. but love Rahim and Radha's bonding. superb dialogues.
11. Radha is giving strong hints to Jalal that she is princess and even Jalal ask her too and finally Jaipur king coming. can't wait for that, how Jalal will react to, I am too excited for that. loved how Jalal feed her and what's up with her food problem. One day Jalal will really send ppl to feed her. fun to read
12. Radha wants him to be devil she never expected when she entered in this place Jalal is this caring and loving. looks like her mission killing Jalal is going to be tough, she can't see his on small wound, poor Radha, she is falling for him. and why Jalal is touching her when ever he get chance? I guess she is liking that part.
13. White bitch Maham eyes on Radha, poor Radha will not survive longer. What is in that letter?😲 Why she is sad?
14. Loved Abdul and his poem best part.
15. Walking out of the harem best part of the chapter. I loved how Jalal stopped and asked for her hand and WALK WITH ME. I have written too much and too long. I am compensating with missed chapters. I will try to comment ever chapter going forward.
thank you.
Edited by JalalLovesJodha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JalalLovesJodha

Seriously Can't understand where to start from. I have read last three chapters together and I am overwhelmed in a good way. You are really more than wonderful writer. you know when i am reading i don't loose interest for even one second. My eyes stuck on my ipad. your update is better than any book i read. First I got attracted to this story just because of suspense but i forget all about it and now i am all dreamy in this two strong bull headed characters. Such beautiful romantic stories. let me talk about the update.
1. I love how Radha smile seeing Rukaiya's frustrated face.
2. Finally, Maham I was wondering when she is going to wake up.
3. Radha realized she will have to spend night with him and her shocking reaction. beautifully written how Reva and Radha hug. At least she has some one in the palace.
4. Jalal and Radha's conversation, ahhh no words for that. how Jalal shut her up and how she continued arguing. You showing her fear, stubbornness and arrogance at the same time. Ramlila and my Jalal Ravan NO. but i loved it, only Radha is allowed to say that.
5. Reva and Radha talks, you don't miss anything. you write in detail every scene even their expression. Readers really picture what you want them to. Why Jalal didn't question about dress? YOU MISSED IT. I thought after harem ladies taunt Jalal will ask, but you surprise me with lovely shock.
6. Rukaiya chhiii chiii why kissing jalal. please don't show that again and poor Jalal hurt Radha, but he didn't intent to. I shivered while reading that entire part. how u write all this in one update.
7. I felt Radha should have retort more than you have shown. felt she needed to be more tough as per her character. I think she is mellowing towards him. She has already fallen in love with him hard.
8. Radha is here to kill Jalal?😲 While talking she said when time comes I will kill you. Oh no please don't do that. Hope it was only casual talk and you not giving us hint of something very big.
9. Terrace part awesome loved their fight, loved their running behind each other. I thought after hearing Radha's speech Jalal will mellow but as per your habit you don't like to do as per readers thinking and shock us with their another fight and I love how Jalal answered back to Radha. Radha is wrong too.
10. She bit him that badly, my Jalal. No. love their running and then Rahim, Salima, Jodha and Hamida. I don't know how much more i can write. but love Rahim and Radha's bonding. superb dialogues.
11. Radha is giving strong hints to Jalal that she is princess and even Jalal ask her too and finally Jaipur king coming. can't wait for that, how Jalal will react to, I am too excited for that. loved how Jalal feed her and what's up with her food problem. One day Jalal will really send ppl to feed her. fun to read
12. Radha wants him to be devil she never expected when she entered in this place Jalal is this caring and loving. looks like her mission killing Jalal is going to be tough, she can't see his on small wound, poor Radha, she is falling for him. and why Jalal is touching her when ever he get chance? I guess she is liking that part.
13. White bitch Maham eyes on Radha, poor Radha will not survive longer. What is in that letter?😲 Why she is sad?
14. Loved Abdul and his poem best part.
15. Walking out of the harem best part of the chapter. I loved how Jalal stopped and asked for her hand and WALK WITH ME. I have written too much and too long. I am compensating with missed chapters. I will try to comment ever chapter going forward.
thank you.

wow... Thank U so much for such a wonderful comment soon I will reply in detail😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nobody is asking for update here😭😭😭😭 kisi ko yeh story pasand nahi😭😭😭 koi baat nahi ab me yeh update nahi karungi... aur mera mind freeze hai is it ke liye 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Bhavi di mere exams chal rahe hai.. Isliye no comment😭Pout

abe tere exam kab tak chalege ...tu bach nahi sakti chutki😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Nobody is asking for update here😭 kisi ko yeh story pasand nahi😭😭😭 koi baat nahi ab me yeh update nahi karungi... aur mera mind freeze hai is it ke liye 🤣

hwww update dedo 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
heheheh... konsa update ... kis chiz ka update...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

heheheh... konsa update ... kis chiz ka update...😆

HATE OR LOVE ka 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-

HATE OR LOVE ka 😡




RKG... DIL KE TUKDE TUKDE KARKE MUSHKURA KAR KEH DIYA "HATE OR LOVE KA UPDATE DO RKG KA NAHI
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini



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RKG... DIL KE TUKDE TUKDE KARKE MUSHKURA KAR KEH DIYA "HATE OR LOVE KA UPDATE DO RKG KA NAHI</font>
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arre aap dono ka dedo..

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