AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 4 - Chap 17(11 Oct) - Page 4

Kudos to ur writing skills dear.. love u to the core for the super duper lovely emotional update.. Continue soon & do pm...

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

pals shock laga na???

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

hey priyanka... I am speechless... U R wonderful writer... publish your book I will be the first one to buy... Seriously every time I read new chapter U surprise me with your easy expression of each emotions... I was really worried for this chapter... and also curious at the same time , I knew U will write it beautifully... U have done it... Most difficult ugly part of the story you have written in your simple wording. Yaar sach me SPEECHLESS... I felt every emotion of both them.

thanks dear...🤗

itni tariff mat karo...otherwise main ghamandi ho jayungi...😆

No doubt I hate your control freak kamina... harami... whatever... fu***king bas***d Jalal... I felt both of his emotions through your wonderful writing... his strong desire make her his... and his vulnerability ... fear of loosing her... he didn't wanted hurt her...

Only I part I didn't like when he did it twice... I thought he did this to make her his... He thought this is how she will comply to be with him... but then why again? Once was enough... but he couldn't control himself and did it again... that is pathetic... that was lust...

Hmm...actually it was mixed feeling on his part...jallad khud hi confuse tha

I am really looking forward to read this story further... how she will develop love for this rapist...

that's a part am really scared about🥱

I am very sure U will really do great... and also it's been 5 years... they have kid... so may be... Waiting curiously..😃.👏👏👏

pata nehi in dono ka kya hoga😆

Originally posted by: spvd

part 12 (3)
awesome dear...
poor Jodha...
what Jalal is unforgivable...
how could he do that to her?
and Rico is safe...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: Pals2411

AISA PYARA SHOCK BAAR BAAR LENE KE LIYE TAYYAR HU😳

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Whaaattt 😲 ... YOU ... PPip the busy girl gave an update 😲...OHHH MYYY GOOODDD 😲 ... i mean seriously ... am I dreaming 😲 ...somebody pinch me hard ... & harder ... 😲😲

Okay now I faint ...