6~*NOT just a passionate affair ~*Pt 45 -Wake up Jalal!

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sara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Our jia & jehaan are on the way sara 😎

😳😳 bday on 27 sep 😃

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..
P.S I made a mistake 🤣

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sara

@SARA4444

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Now give me one good reason ...why we shouldnt taana marofy tahni ...🤣 ...

we can give a novel on ... why SHOULD we taana marofy tahni 🤣... but shouldn't taana marofy on taani ... this thing does not even go together 🤣

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Hey girls have any of you been stalked before.. I mean not really as bad as this.. but anonymous calls and all... one of my friends has... thankfully, the guy gave up after a while though...

Edited by lashy - 11 years ago

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sara

@SARA4444

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: lashy
Hey girls have any of you been stalked before.. I mean not really as bad as this.. but anonymous calls and all... one of my friends has... thankfully, the guy gave up after a while though...

naahi.. i was never stalked...it must have been scary to get stalked 🤔

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PBDcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: lashy
Hey girls have any of you been stalked before.. I mean not really as bad as this.. but anonymous calls and all... one of my friends has... thankfully, the guy gave up after a while though...

I used to get calls from unknown caller when I was in school on landline ... & then in college ... this one unknown guy used to follow me & thankfully i never had mobile at that time ... & he stalked me for 6 months ... he had good knowledge about me & my family ... but he wasnt that harmful ... yes but one day when I was in panjim for an inter collegiate competition I had seen him their also ... & in one of the party he had come & tried to befriend me ... which I had ignored & one day he even tried to offer me lift from college to home ... I had refused him politely ... I even remember that guys name Asif ...

he was damn handsome & was a law student ... but but but ... my instincts & my mom's nature made me stay out of all this mess ...

he was a good guy ... tried to persuade me for almost a year & then poor guy gave up on me 🤣

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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divyavm

@divyavm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Loved part 44 writer-e-khaas 🤗

- Loved how you make Jalal's pain so raw and real ... You make us live his emotions!

- Loved Jodha's reflection and surprising trust in Renu being able to get Jalal out of his pain ...It was a very interesting detail

- Loved how you had Jodha open up to us on why she did what she did

- Loved how she was finally at peace with her choices which was critical for her to fight for what she wants in life and How Jalal's words had convinced her of that

- Loved how you described Jodha's yearning for Jalal

And there you have it , a mini-take 5! 😆 I am in a take 5 mood today. 😆

But the suspicious me is suspicious about the following:

- Why did Jodha have to tell anyone about her plan? Why wasn't it a self-talk? Will it leak?

- Why is this professor suddenly in the picture? Why did she have to tell her plan in his house?

- Will Rishabh be threatened by the stalker and why is Rishabh not seedha saadha? 😆 I will never foget that one.

Don't trust you at all Lashy! 😉😆 But love your writing! 😊

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: divyavm
Loved part 44 writer-e-khaas 🤗
- Loved how you make Jalal's pain so raw and real ... You make us live his emotions!
- Loved Jodha's reflection and surprising trust in Renu being able to get Jalal out of his pain ...It was a very interesting detail
- Loved how you had Jodha open up to us on why she did what she did
- Loved how she was finally at peace with her choices which was critical for her to fight for what she wants in life and How Jalal's words had convinced her of that
- Loved how you described Jodha's yearning for Jalal

And there you have it , a mini-take 5! 😆 I am in a take 5 mood today. 😆

But the suspicious me is suspicious about the following:
- Why did Jodha have to tell anyone about her plan? Why wasn't it a self-talk? Will it leak?
- Why is this professor suddenly in the picture? Why did she have to tell her plan in his house?
- Will Rishabh be threatened by the stalker and why is Rishabh not seedha saadha? 😆 I will never foget that one.

Don't trust you at all Lashy! 😉😆 But love your writing! 😊