~~FF~~Shah Nama ', The Admired-of-the-World ~ , new update pg 16 - Page 10

Originally posted by: rima4ever

beautiful update

Sara, I don't have words to express how good the ch was. 😊
I felt so sad reading how humayu's condition was n how helpless he felt to c his pregnant begum hungry 😭
N wat a nice monologue u gave in between the story, regarding the arrival of Hindustan emperor. Ur each word in the story feels so real. 😊
Aab toh I can't wait for the king of Hindustan to take birth and relieve his family from the poverty and to rule the entire Hindustan 😛 and also for jodha n his love story to start 😉 😆
Once again awesome ch dear. Continue soon 😊 😛

Originally posted by: swatiluthra

Sara, I don't have words to express how good the ch was. 😊
I felt so sad reading how humayu's condition was n how helpless he felt to c his pregnant begum hungry 😭
N wat a nice monologue u gave in between the story, regarding the arrival of Hindustan emperor. Ur each word in the story feels so real. 😊
Aab toh I can't wait for the king of Hindustan to take birth and relieve his family from the poverty and to rule the entire Hindustan 😛 and also for jodha n his love story to start 😉 😆
Once again awesome ch dear. Continue soon 😊 😛

Sigh of relief sara ... gawd I , myself was so damn worried 😆 ... but god always helps people who strongly have faith & believe in him ... now humayun is in safe hands ... & so are his wives ...

Originally posted by: adianasr

Sara, I am totally enjoying the way u r telling this story - pls continue and dont wait too long to update!!!!

sara, can you make a separate post where u can compile all the chapters together because there can be a beautiful show made on your script which will make a lot of sense and will be interesting! how i wish a show on akbar can be made against ekta's crap!

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Sigh of relief sara... gawd I , myself was so damn worried😆... but god always helps people who strongly have faith & believe in him ... now humayun is in safe hands ... & so are his wives ...

This was indeed a heart touching chapter .. keep up the good work sara🤗

Thanx A lot my dear vershA ... I know yaar abhi Khana pani bhi finish tha
😆 😆 hamey hi much karNA tha apne jalal Aur un k ammi abbu k lye 😃

Originally posted by: mandyg

sara, can you make a separate post where u can compile all the chapters together because there can be a beautiful show made on your script which will make a lot of sense and will be interesting! how i wish a show on akbar can be made against ekta's crap!

ch 6-- Amber politics

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Young army chief of Amer was resting in his room... he was very tired

...tomorrow raja ratan singh and his half brother kunwar karan singh were

going on hunt trip with their respective friends ...

Some months before all the friends of both brothers were friends of amber

princes...and now ratan singh friends were companions of the king, the

maharaj of amber. on the other hand karan singh friends were now only

friends of karan singh ..who was prince only by title ... he was not the son of

king any more

one of their mutal friend was an opportunist sumer singh ... his half younger

brother bhanu singh was childhood friend of Karan singh ... they were from

one of Nobel families of amber , and connected from amber court for

decades...

charul was sister of sumer singh and best childhood friend of ratan singh

sister rajkumari Rathna devi ...she was the most beautiful girl in amer atleast

in eyes of rathna's brothers ... yes u read right... Raja ratan singh and karan

singh both want to marry charul ... and sumer singh knew it very well ... he

was taking his each step very carefully ... making his ways very thoughtfully

now he was one of nearest companion of ratan singh...king made him his

sena pati with in a month of his coronation.

This was very convenient for sumer singh to marry his sister to king and

make his position in royal court strong for forever ... BUT ... that was not

enough for him ...he wants more ... But how ??

He was sitting in his room thinking same ...

When his wife nanda devi came in, but he didn't notice her... She asked him

but obviously he didn't have any thing to tell her so he brushed off her

concern lightly...but his wife had some thing to tell him... a gossip from raj

mehal...

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Early in the morning raja ratan Singh and kunwar Karan Singh departed from

amer to enjoy hunt in near by jungles... Sumer Singh was right beside king...

He was looking very worried and disturbed ... Ratan Singh was noticing his

friend mood since they met today ... ..

. Atlast ratan Singh asked Sumer Singh ...

"Sumer Singh Kay hua hae ... Aaj sawere se hi shant ho ... Swast tay

theek hae na thara..? "

Ratan Singh said mischievously

Sumer was already prepared

" Naahi maharaj ... Swast Tay bharriya hae ...PANN.."

". Pan kia..."

"Maharaj woh ... Thori chinta ka vishay hae ..."

"Hmm"

"Abhi bataoge yah baad Mae"

" Maharaj woh ekant ho tau acha hae,,, "

Ratan Singh didn't say any thing... Sumer Singh knew he played his card

well...

Ratan Singh will not wait too long ...

After reanching hunting site ... daas dasiyan made royal camps ... Atlast

ratan Singh dismissed his other friends ... Only Sumer Singh left...

"Haan ab bata... Kay baat hae"

Ratan Singh asked casually while drinking his wine... "

"maharaj aap kunwar Karan Singh ko apna utter adhikar I ghoshith

kar dain..."

Ratan Singh jumped up

"KAARAN???"

He was staring his friend dangerously

But Sumer Singh was all prepared...

" aap Kay kaka sa kunwar bharmal Singh"

"Kay bakwas karay hae bay"

Ratan Singh felt rug pulled under his feets..

" maharaj ..!! .. kunwar sa koi shdyant rach rahway hain... Isi Karan

manney lagae hai aap ...kunwar Karan Singh nay apna utter adhikari

gushat kar dain ..."

Sumer Singh told him about shaguni visit... He molded the situation that

bharmal staged that whole drama... Sent shaguni to raj mahal with

bhawashivani that raja of amber is becoming father soon ... Raja ratan Singh

mind was in chaos... He was very young didn't have courage to take any

bold step against his uncles ... But he doesn't trust on his half brother either

"PANN ..." ...

" PANN ... Manney Karan Singh par bhi vishvas nahi hae...?"

Ratan Singh looked at his friend inquiringly ... Sumer Singh heart was

dancing in his chest ... The conversation was heading according to his will

" nahi maharaj... Kunwar sa thara adhik sabmaan karat hain...

Aur choki baat tau aye hae maharaj ... Kunwar Karan Singh ko ham

sambhal sakay hae''

..."PANN...!!...

... kunwar bharmal sa sae saudhan rehna adhik atyavashyak (

important) hae..."

At the end of conversation... Sumer Singh , ratan Singh ko sheeshay Mae

utar chuka tha... He was succeeded to convince ratan Singh to declare

Karan Singh as his heir... Sumer Singh played his first card very smoothly

and successfully ... now its time of his next move but after ratan singh

move .. because now this is rattan Singh turn according to his game ...