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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: onaisa
Fantastic chapter ...nyc 1
thanx fr d PM

thanks😛

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Waaooow lovely chapter as usual ... !!! 🤗 waise thanks for the PM ... lekin chota chapter tha 😭 !! koi baat nahi ... but when will jalal come to knw about the dancer (jodha) 😉

thanks varsha i can't do anything aisha has written it. i'll say her to write long as her ff fans are saying for long update😉😉

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: swatiluthra
Awesome ch dear. Par yeh kya kar diya, mere sapno par pani dal diya tumne. I thought jalal will know the reality , par yahan toh tum Neh cvs ki jagah leh li hai 😆, pura scene dream bana diya. 😆 .
I swear I was getting so excited in the beginning, but when jodha woke up, I also woke up from my dreamland 😆 .
But seriously it was a lovely ch .
N thanks for pm mrs. Tokas 😊 n continue soon, aur plz aab koi aur dream mat dekhna , varna I ll end up pulling all my hair from my head, 😆

thanks swati😆😆

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: sana1996
Awesome chapter
Update soon 😊

thnaks sana😃

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.GreekPrincess.

@.GreekPrincess.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

awesome chappy
interesting precap😉
update soon plz
thanx for pm pal

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Christy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

I really like your story a lot. pleaseee pm me the next part

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: anabella
I really like your story a lot. pleaseee pm me the next part

i 've not written it , till then plz read my other ffs

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4103962

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4111769

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4109839

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4097204

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Mrs. pari rajat tokas

@Mallika-E-Tokas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

So here the chapter 7

plz read it and do comment

chapter 7

chapter 7!!
jalal takes the payal from benazir and rushes towards jodha's hojra...he has hundreds things running in his mind...how does jodha begum know her??...is jodha begum itself that girl??? jodha is near the tulsi plant praying...she opens her eyes and wathces jalal walking towards her...she sees the payal in his hands...she freaks out...she looks at her foor...she realizes that one of her payal is missing
she remembers the time when she ran out of jalal's room and in the process lost her payal there...she calls out moti...she aks her to remove her payal on the right foot...moti"magar kyun jodha ni sundar payal hai" jodha" moti hum jo kehte hai woh karo..shehenshah ke aane se pehele isse utaro...jaldi karo!!!!"
moti"jodha baat kya hai aap itni pareshan kyun lag rahi hai???? aap hojre mein chaliye!!" jodha" moti hum tumhe sab baad mein batayege baas yeh payal nikalo" moti bends down and takes out her payal ...it gets stuck to jodha lehenga...moti"jodha yeh toh nikal nahi raha"
jodha"moti kuch bhi karo...shehenshah yaha aa rahe hai..!!"
moti"ha ha nikal rahe hai"
jodha"jaldi moti jaldi!!!!"
moti takes out the payal and hides it in her pallu...jalal comes there...he says takliya!!
jodha"pranam shehenshah"
jalal nods...
jodha gives him the prasad of her pooja...jalal eats it and says"jodha begum aap yeh payal pehechanti hai???"
jodha stares at the payal and says "nahi shehenshah" jalal says" par hume yeh payal aapki lagti hai"
jodha"nahi shehenshah...haa humare paas yaisi bohot sari payal hai par yeh humari nahi hai"
jalal" kya aap uss aurat ko janti hai jo kal raat diwaan-e-khaas mein aayi thi??"
jodha "nahi shehenshah"
jalal"theek hai...yeh payal sach mein aapki nahi hai??? kyunki hume yaad hai aamijaan ne aapko yaisi bohot saari payal toofe mein di thi"
jodha"di toh thi magar shayad hume kissi daasi ko uphar ke naam par diya hoga...aur ussne shayad us aurat ko be diya hoga"
jalal"theek hai jodha begum chalte hai"
jalal walks away and thinks she is hiding something from me!!
jodha comes back to her hojra moti"jodha aap ko humari sogan...sach sach batayiye baat kya hai"
jodha sighs"moti kal jo diwaan-e-khaas mein nach rahi thi naa..." moti"ha jodha hum uss aurat ke baare mein aapko kal bata rahe the naa...phir aap sow gayi" jodha"moti woh hum the"
moti is stunned..."kya??? woh aap thi???"
"haa moti woh hum the...shehenshah ne kaha tha ki benazir se zyada khubsurat aur koi nahi toh humne unhe galat saabit karne ke liye yeh sab kiya"
moti is still suprised...jodha tells her the rest of the story...how she dressed up..and she ran..everything!!
moti was stunned!!
she ends the story by saying"aab shehenshah ke paas meri payal hai"
jodha looks down...moti says"aap chinta mat kijiye jodha hum yeh baat kisi ko nahi batayenge!"
jodha smiles at her...
jodha hears some vase falling down..she gets up...she tells moti"moti kisne humari baat to nahi sun li"
moti convinces her that no one is there...
rahim walks out of jodha's hojra and runs towards his room...
jalal"aare kanhe kanha,,,kaha jaa rahe hai aap????"
rahim does salaam..and says" hume aamijaan ko ek zaroori baat batani hai"
jalal"aap woh baat hume bhi bata sakt hai"
rahim"woh choti ammijaan hai naa...

next chapter: jalal walks into jodha's hojra secretively!!