5~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 43 (1&2) THE GAMES BEGIN - Page 86

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

'No...no...don't give up Jodha...' she tried to regroup herself 'Maybe you can recognize his voice...'

Unfortunately; even those hopes of the lone junior weren't meant to be!

When he dug his face into her hair once again, his ensuing eerily hoarse words seemed to be muffled by his scarf, masking his original voice -

>> So Jodha never heard his original voice, in fact Jalal did going by below lines

'Ar...rrr...rrr...rrgh'

The rascal's yells had finally came out 'undisguised' - an involuntary reaction to the alarming pain abruptly inflicted on his back

'Why do I know that voice?' a few doubts instantly raced past Jalal's mind, while still keeping up with that delirious chase. Intrigued, he made a swift mental note of the stalker's dressing - especially how the elegant footwear was a stark contrast to the 'ruffian' get-up he was otherwise sporting 'I'll find out why I know you...soon...'

Varsha dear, Jalal saw his eyes, heard his voice so he has more chances of identifying him than Jodha..

BTW Lashy this is for you:

Intrigued, he made a swift mental note of the stalker's dressing - especially how the elegant footwear was a stark contrast to the 'ruffian' get-up he was otherwise sporting 'I'll find out why I know you...soon...'

Is that line in blue going to hint Jalal about the stalker in future, else you wouldn't have mentioned it, right?

Lashy -> 😉

Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08

OH my god!!!!! what have u done????😛😛 Changing the track from a crying one to a mysterious one😆😆...

Yes... that's why I'd said ki wait for a few chapters and it'll slowly change.. 😳

its awesome... lovely... i was crying and crying but when i read the half last part.😭😭. i was on cloud 9... after 2 weeks now i will be exited for ur next update... kyonki before that i just knew ki 3 and 4 parts vaste karne se pehle. u will show nothing expect crying begging...

3 and 4 parts waste karna 😲 nahi re.. the story would make no sense if we didn't even see that much of an effort from Jodha's end to take this decision.. now we can totally understand why she's doing what she's done.. but had we not gone through the journey with her.. it'd seem like she took this decision in a haste..

begging se yaad aaya.. oh my jalal... his state seems to be worst than jodha.. becoz he think that his jodha is changed now... and she is not the one who he has loved... how he begged the first and last time...he got hurt.. his tears... really chocked while seeing his state.. never cried even when jodha left jalal in JODHA AKBAR... u r truly an amazing writer...u really made me sobbing while just reading a story... story??? no it seems somewhere is really happening.. nd i wish that it should be a happy ending...

It IS a happy ending dear... 🤗 you cried reading this bit. it's ok dear.. I did too..

i just love the ending track.. i cant stop praising now... after so many tears dried up on my face... i gave a huge smile after its ending... now jodha is going to use the stalker... she has quietly know him.. nd now he is not even sure that he is being used up... nd then he is going to get back jodha jalal... no cry for my jalala... its only few months...

jodha is planning to get back to u..its only for sometime... plss update soon.. now really cant wait... ab no rona dhona... we have got our jodha back...👏

EXACTLY! It'll be a bit sad for Ja.. but we know why she's doing what she's doing.. and similarly, when he does. his reactions will be the same too...🤗 love you so much dear..

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Ohhh pals ... my girl ... hell yeah you are absolutely right 👏...!!! I too feel the same way👍🏼 ... but STILL i feel jalal is sidelined here ... I knw I knw itz for his own safety ... but jodha could have managed to give him some slight hint as to why she is doing this ...without revealing her plans ... she could have shared the video & email with jalal right ... I mean hez devastated yaar ... just cannot see him LIKE THIS 😭 ...

But she wants him to not just look devastated... but be temporarily devastated...

& to make my life more miserable lashy made a statement saying lets see how many plans will work for jodha & how many DONT 😡 ... Ohhh plz I dont want her plans backfiring henceforth ... itz been enuf torture of the stalker from 2nd chapter till 42nd & the stalker has been successful in winning every plot ... so now it should be jodha's turn to turn the stalker's victory into HER's ... 😳

Stalker has not been entirely successful.. his major plan was to make Jodha believe that Jalal is a womanizer and that he's not good.. was to keep Jo away from Ja... but that backfired.. and these two became the strongest of pairs... that's why he's become so desperate now..

Also I dont want jalal to be a mere spectator watching some real life Jhansi ki rani show whoz fighting all alone 🤢

He's not a mere spectator... he's done all his bits till now... tumhe patience naam ki cheez hi nahin hain... 😆

Originally posted by: ashpat

Shraddha, this was a torture for jajo and us too. By the end of both chapters, I was choked with emotions and crying . It was nice to see Jalal being happy and cheerful and u had done superb job with showing his feelings and his anticipation of meeting Jodha. It is another thing that he was welcomed with this cold Jodha. It was heart-rendering to see Jalal yell, cry, talk,beg and try everything to convince Jodha to tell him why she is acting thsi waya nd be back with him. I just wanted to hug him so tightly and I knew Jodha had a reason for it but still I don't know if Jalal will be able to handle heart-break this time like last time even if it is temporarily.

Awww 😭 I understand...

it was emotionally draining for me to read these two chapters. But, you know what gave me hope was the entire paragraph when jodha reveals about her plan to restore her realtionship with jalal and their respect etc. As much as I felt for Jalal, I could relate how helpless Jodha was feeling doing all these and especially when she counts her trade-in.

Yes... she is really flummoxed and surrounded on all sides... and dug up an underground route to come out..

I don't why but whenever I read stalker, the actor who plays sharifuddin in JA pops up. I badly wants to know who thsi stalker is. I thought in last chapter that it must be rishabh and if he is then how will jodha prove jalal is real and better man than rishabh. So, now i feel it's not rishabh unless u want to give us another shock and ruin jodha's plan. One thing for sure I badly wants this stalker to be tortured to death who is playing with my ja and my jo's lives. I understand why jo is doing all these and hiding from Jalal but she assuming that it will be back to normal and will be able to nurse jalal's heart- i don't know about that. I mean ya she could but what if it's too late by then that jalal has moved ahead unless it gets revealed why jodha did all this to jalal and he understands her and forgives her and accepts her.

But Jalal knows ... he knows dear... that she's doing all this cos something drastic has happened.. I posted this reply to nams too - dekh

Awww thanks so much.. Jalal is more pissed off and hurt by Jodha than actually mistaking her intentions.. you don't think he'd guess that if his girl overnight changed so drastically that kuch tho hua hoga.. he does.. but that's why she aimed at his self-respect and tore him down so he stays AWAY.. all he needs is one line, one clue, one insight to know why she did what she did... all she needs is to come running back to him and explain.. and he'll take her back with a smile.. but yes, being the guy he is.. he WILL NOT go running after her after her words 'Man up and deal with it' 😆 these two lovers na.. I tell you.. what a theeka couple! 😎

update soon shraddha.

btw, because we, readers have gone through so much up and downs with jo and ja,😭 we at least deserve chapters consisting Ja-Jo real marrriage, consummation,preganancy and twins .Please, shraddha, fulfill my request,demand or wish whatever u want to consider.😳

Lots of love,🤗

😆 ye twins kahaan se aa tapke ab

Your loyal fan since ur first os and your one of closese frds- Ayesha

LOve you loads loads loads 🤗

Originally posted by: dharmimum

Awesome!! No words to express...the plot is too gud..i really like the way Jodha started her game...Thanks to you for writing such a wonderful FF.

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Hmmm ... Pals ... I soo wish your words to come true 😳 ... ... but dont you think jodha playing alone with fire ...may get burnt in this process ... I still feel ki jalal ka saath hona chahiye ... btw here u r saying jalal will not leave jodha & their lashy is saying since jodha has hurt his ego ... jalal will not go behind her as he is a gentleman ... ho kya raha hai

Btw pals ye dekh ... i found my self a new chashma wala smiley 😆

Originally posted by: lashy

Lashy -> 😉

Originally posted by: shailaja1678

LOVED IT😊

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Actually you know what.. I'm loving this investigation.. 😆

I just came up with a theory behind video shoot while dish washing. This is how it goes:

"The stalker can easily shoot a video as he is some one familiar to that home. I don't wonder if he did that from his mobile camera by standing just before Jalal"

Then my contradiction theory:
"Ok fine, let me assume he shot it before Jalal. But that will turn dangerous to him, if Jodha were to neglect his threat and show this video to Jalal and ask him if somebody was with him at that particular time. So he wouldn't have dared to do it"
🤣

please don't faint Lashy.. 😆

Originally posted by: chembi

Lashy this game seems to be intersting and waiting for your further updates to read how you unfold the story😃.Intially i want to slap jo for her behaviour towards jalal and but i convin'd myself after reading the another part. I understand jo is going to play cat and mouse game and happy to see the clear and confident jodha.

Yes Jo bichaari acting like near-villi now... 😎 but I'm loving it... You know what - I want to see a heroine like this.. warna hamaari Indian serial heroines always are expected to do sacrifices...and to follow mummy papa... ya fir, movie romantic heroines run away from home and build tree houses with hero (like Madhuri did in Dil movie😆)

I wanted my heroine to not do that but to do saazish and make everyone her friend in the end... to become a temporary villi for bigger picture later on.. 😎 I like shrewd people who work for betterment of their and other's lives!

But wht you did to jalal is unacceptable oh god intially how happy he is?Oh no why she gifted that painting to jalal now she knows very well about robbiee and wht robbiee means to jalal.Seriously lashy it's heartwrenching and i weeped alot afer seeing jalal's condition😭.

Yes dear... I wept too.. 😭 my ja...

bad bad lashy 😡 Ja ko kitna rulaayaa.

You mentioned about santama and hb na is there any new flashback conversation between the trio apart from jalal and hb's convo. You are a brilliant writter lashy wow unexpected turn of events at the end and you turned the story in a mys'ous way.Continue soon.🤗

Mystery was always a part of it dear... right from chapter 2.. hope you enjoy it just as much you enjoyed the romance too...🤗