5~*NOT just a passionate affair~*Pt 43 (1&2) THE GAMES BEGIN - Page 85

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SARA4444


. saaf saaf kehdo na time hai but u r lazy😉😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

You know one thing struck me... all of you remembered Jalal's end sem exams... but no one remembered that bichaari jo ki bhi 2nd sem exams aa rahi hai? 🤔

Hmmm...you're right actually. Jodha's pain is no less, infact she's suffering more. She has to manage so many things - her family, exams, Rishabh, the stalker & most importantly Jalal. But in this chapter Jalal's pain is highlighted more. Actually, Jodha knows what she's gonna do next, how she'll handle the situation. But Jalal is clueless abt everything, abt what's going on in her mind. He waited. He had the trust in her that she'll manage the things at home so he gave her time. He stopped going to the college for her. But what did he get? I m not blaming Jo, she's the star.⭐️ But if we think from Jalal's view point, his love of life has just left him. He's all alone now & that's painful. But that was my immediate reaction. My heart was crying for Jalal then but now when I think with a cool mind I can understand Jodha's pain. She must be feeling double hurt by hurting Jalal😭 & whatever she's doing is for Jalal's life.
@ Lrya - it's September exam time dear... exactly a year since the story started... end of his college life and her stepping into year 2😳
@ Neha... that is the thing... it IS a risk... it IS a gamble... what are the other choices she has?
Running away from home is not something they both believe in... jab Jalal ki life (sach mein) danger mein hai, she just does not want to take ANY MORE risk!😭 Even telling Jalal the truth now, is a risk!
As for what he'd do... she trusts Jalal implicitly... that's why she's taken such a big step... if he does something silly, then it makes it all a waste... then he's not worth all this struggle she's going through... but she trusts he wouldn't do something so drastic... but that's why she loves him so much na...

Yup...she had no other option & I m proud of her that she chose to fight back rather than accepting this injustice in the name of fate. And now I agree she did right by not telling this to Jalal. Bas, I just don't want Jalal to pretend to be with another girl to get the truth out from Jodha.🤔 Lets see what happens. Waise, I have full faith in your Jalal too.😳
I'm going to return to all the beautiful comments -one by one - tomorrow.. knackered after my zumba class!🤗


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Edited by AbHer_neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Loved ur comment dear ...👏👏

Thanks Versha🤗


@bold - even we fear the same neha ... what if the plans dosent go according to jodha ... & to top that we also dont want jodha discussing her plans with meera & payal as we all know that meera is with abdul & payal is with maan ... so her plans can anytime be known to these two & if any of these two are the stalker

Yup, Jodha should not reveal anything to any of her friends even if they are girls.🤔

then its really not feasible for jodha to bark her plan to her close friends ... closest people only backstab you , because they know your weakness 😡& this is the a hardcore reality ...

That's the bitter truth. Even I've experienced such thing in real life.


It would have been better if jodha would have taken a promise from jalal & taken him under her confidence to work out this plan ... because she being alone in this game is also dangerous ...

Earlier I also thought that she should tell Jalal everything but now I think she did right. First, Jalal wouldn't be ready to suspect his friend & secondly he couldn't have hidden the truth from them by acting heart-broken. I know Jo's playing alone is also dangerous but I do have a feeling that soon Jalal will come to know this.😃

I understand her motive to keep jalal safe ...but still breaking poor boy's heart such brutally was something which ached my heart 😭 ... anyways lets sit back & enjoyy the ride as mentioned by lashy

@Red - That's the second best thing we can do other than predicting.😆



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Edited by AbHer_neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ Sam

Thanks Lash. Thanks a ton.. 🤗
I too had tears in my eyes again this time. Reading about Jalal's pain. How it's struck him again. It's difficult yaar.
🤗

And yeah. I'm better. Trying to be better, I should say.

Btw, about why Jo hasn't gone this fake fight route. Is it because she's not trusting any of Jalal's group? Is it because she think Payal or Meera will blurt something out to the psycho?
something alone those lines...

And kuch reveal nahi karti ho.. Bas vague se comments deti ho.. Office me kaam karen ya stalker ke baare me soche yaar? Jaldi jaldi writ karo na Lash, my good girl.. pullleeejjj..🤗
😆 office mein you think about stalker.. somehow.. difficult to believe re..

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

The only thing Jodha doesn't know is who the stalker is. But I want Jalal to be a part of her game, poor chap is feeling left out of the challenge.😆

a short while... and then he'll be back too.. don't worry 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AntaresVega

His agony! Her struggle! In her calculated plan, if anything goes amiss, it would be the end.
Exactly its a do-or-die game!
But Jalal being such a clever man will somehow figure out what Nancy Drew Jodha is doing and he'll perhaps help her out in some underhand way without her knowing. What an anti-climax! Let this happen.
Anti-climax? 😲 why?
😃😆 And god forbid, I hope Jalal doesn't disappear totally from her life in the coming few excruciating days ( or maybe months).
But that is what Jodha has planned for na.. to shift stalker's nazren away from Jalal.. to keep him away from her for months... that's why she carefully chose the right kinda words that would hurt him
Sorry to ask Lashy, but which month are we in the story right now? 😳
They're in September a couple of weeks away from their 4th sem and 2nd sem exams each.. end of year.. Embarrassed

Originally posted by: ---jais---

It's awesome update lashy i do not know but i love this update alot. Waise ek kahavat hai ' sabr ka phal meetha hota hai'. Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki lambe intezar ke baad lashy ne dono part ka update ek hi sath kar diye.Thanks lashy for that.
It's one chapter only... but I just couldn't cut down on the words.. or the emos wouldn't come out properly... hence it became 2 part update just like the consummation chapter! thanks so much jai Embarrassed
Coming to the update i do not know how would you make jodha mentally prepare like this that she said such word to jalal. It was very heartbreaking word. Jalal was totally shattered from jodha word. How will jodha heal the wound of jalal ?
all jalal needs is a hint of why Jodha is doing what she is.. you think he doesn't understand his girl.. he knows she's deliberately saying all this na... he's more hurt about why she's keeping something from him rather than her words itself since he knows those words of hers are NOT REALLY HERS!
Jodha is playing a very big gamble. She is taking risk of her love. And she is so sure of jalal love whatever will happened jalal always love him. But i loved the statement of jodha regarding her bhaiya and that chuha rishabh.
Yeah... omg.. when I read your words I mistakenly read it as 'cute' rishabh.. and then had to re-read it 😆 everyone seems to have liked that part Embarrassed
And now she willbe in relief that jalal life is safe and i hope now stalker willbe behind on chuha rishabh. I loved to watch their duel .
🤗
And for jalal my heart is only crying for him. Hey bhagwan koi to use sambhal lo.
Thanks for pm me.
Jalal.. ham sab milke usko sambhaakte hain!😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
@lashy di
By next time will
Jalal be a part of her plan?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

(But what was the use of the painting lashy... ultimately it broke into pieces just like jalal's heart 😭 ... i wanted to see a smile on jalal's face & not painful tears 😭 ... poor chap has lost so much since childhood ... he had so much of hopes hung high on jodha ... I knw this is jodha's momentary indiscretional attempts to foil the stalker's plan ... YET a BIG YET lashy 😭 jodha is combating the stalker all alone ... 😭 without any life support 😭👏 ... what should I say now ... where in jalal is 😭)

Yes dear... don't worry a few chapters jaan... and things will start taking a slow upward turn...

(ohh plz we dont want jodha giving away her plans to meera or payal ... plz let her keep this to herself & not reveal this to any of her friends ... plz plz I beg you ... I dont trust meera or payal here 😡... as meera is with abdul & payal is with maan so, problem will be created ... 😡 let her work on her own otherwise)
Hmmm don't worry.. wait and watch.. 😛 she's a girl who needs some sort of friend to confide in.. but she also is clever.. wait and watch dear..

Originally posted by: AbHer_neha

Beautiful update Shraddha...just beautiful. I have no words.👏 I was wondering why you gave title to your teaser when you never did that in the past if I m not wrong. And the teaser was so shocking that we all were going mad over it and then suddenly I tried to link the title with the teaser & it came to my mind that the games might be begun by Jodha as she's not a kind of girl who easily gives up. And my guess was correct. But I was just not able to understand why you used the plural form of "game", now I got it. Jodha is planning to play the "games" with each one who is a hurdle between her & Jalal.
Yes you got that one right girl.. 😃
Smart girl! That's why I always admire your Jodha. She's not like today's daily soap heroins who actually never do any act of bravery & even without that they are termed as "Mahaan" by doing some stupid kind of sacrifice. I just love your Jodha who never gives up. She could think all this amidst of all the tensions & her fear for Jalal's life.👏👏👏
Yes.. she is very hatke.. 😎

I m just worried about one thing. Fine, she has planned to play the game with the stalker but life doesn't always move the way you have planned. What if something "unexpected unpleasant" happens...what if one of her plans backfires? And I know you'll add that as a twist. I m not fully relieved now. I m very scared abt Jalal.
True dear... but look at it this way.. without doing anything also she's going to be in major trouble.. her parents/brothers are not listening and kaise bhi karke mangni karvaa dee.. that stalker also rukne ka naam nahin le rahaa.. isme something she needs to do.. some risk she needs to take..
Oh god, he has gone through so much pain & he's all alone now.😭 What will he do now? Hope he doesn't take any step that can create a hurdle in Jodha's way to execute her plan. Waise, sach kahun toh I want Jalal to be a part of her plans...if not the part of it he atleast has a right to know the truth. Poor guy...his end sem. exams are so near & he has to face all this.
I think you already read the explanations as to why Jo has kept Ja temporarily out of her plans.. 🤗

One more thing...so the stalker is officially declared as one of the friends in their group. Rishabh is out of the list now. So its pakka Abdul or Maan. But you can surprise us by making him someone else.
🤗 thanks so much for your comments dearie..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

@lashy di
By next time will
Jalal be a part of her plan?

Wait and watch dear... 🤗 wait and watch... this separation will be a reflection of his character too like it is of hers...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

what if the plans dosent go according to jodha ... & to top that we also dont want jodha discussing her plans with meera & payal as we all know that meera is with abdul & payal is with maan ... so her plans can anytime be known to these two & if any of these two are the stalker then its really not feasible for jodha to bark her plan to her close friends ... closest people only backstab you , because they know your weakness 😡& this is the a hardcore reality ...
It would have been better if jodha would have taken a promise from jalal & taken him under her confidence to work out this plan ... because she being alone in this game is also dangerous ... I understand her motive to keep jalal safe ...but still breaking poor boy's heart such brutally was something which ached my heart 😭 ...
😭 I understand Varsha
anyways lets sit back & enjoyy the ride as mentioned by lashy
Yeah.. 🥳


Originally posted by: hemakeerti

God, again!!
It's always depressing to hear these kind of news Lashy.. time and again these incidents prove how vulnerable a woman is in this world and I damn hate this fact

Yeah.. one of the ladies was pregnant.. and the police were watching too..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---

The Game Begins - I think , a well title .. as per the whole update ( Part 1 & 2 ) So , this is what is a start of a new game .. This is Just as i want this to go , enough of to be threaten by her family , by that stalker , by being feeling that Jalal is not safe & at last that Rishab .. marriage with him ..
🤗 thanks so much dear..

I believed you Shraddha Di , and i knew you won't ever disappoint any of us ! So finally , the game is on the round one and Jodha is the player , and she has many roles in this first round .. - First as a good daughter - she followed what her parents asked her & her father's heath evened and she got a new mobile & a laptop .. Well done for that step ...

Second step as a sister - a good sister - who listened to her brother and promised him she'll not be in any type of contact with Jalal , and what she got in spite was - she got to go back to her college and continue her studies ..

And the third steps as a true lover - Although she broke his Heart , the heart .. which she owns and which she can heal and repair , but his Health's assurity was more important and now Jalal is saved - maybe temporarily or permanently .
BEAUTIFULLY said Mehak.. beautifully said👏

A person should never underestimate the power of a WOMAN because it is a woman who gave birth to you men ! A woman have many roles - a daughter , a mother , a sister , a sister - in - law , a niece and etc ...

Women have got same number of right like men , women are independent now - they work in office , just like men - they do everything men do .. But a man cannot run a house , which only a woman could do ...
Loool... yes women are better at multitasking.. I agree... 👏

So .. Shraddha Di .. i'm totally left speechless with this update .. I just don't know how to express my feelings and there are no more questions left in my mind ! Who've answered all now .. now just time for the stalker to pay back ..
🤗
And thanks for the PM .. it took time for me to read both parts , as i kept reading in a gap - i can't sit at one place permanently .. 😆
I totally understand dear.. and thanks so so so much..love you loads


Originally posted by: hemakeerti



not so close I think Varsha.. more over the ceremony happened between Jodha and Rishabh's family exclusively.. no outsider is involved.. so Maan wouldn't come to know till Jo's family calls them and inform.. had Maan known that, Payal would have known and same with Meera.. 😉

I repeat.. 1. Maan 2.Salim 3.Abdul

😉

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