AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 3- Chap 12 (Part 3) - Page 105

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow, I was apprehensive when I was first reading this story and realized how Jalal fell for Jodha. I was intrigued and Digusted at the same time but you are a talented story teller. What a wonderfully written chapter. The details and depth of Jalal's feelings. You are a wonderful writer. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update pp richo soon soon pp pp pp
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bhabya finally returnsšŸ˜†...Go for it buddy...UPDATE PPšŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Btw PP ... ye thread bhi fatafat khatam karde kay ... so that next update ke liye naya thread khol de šŸ˜Ž
hum thread khatam karne mein maahir hai šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
naya thread bana na parega...but isme abhi bhi reply karna baki hai...

waise i am upto something these days
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Bhabya finally returnsšŸ˜†...Go for it buddy...UPDATE PPšŸ˜†


chup kar 😔
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_saumya

PRIYANKA!!!!

I AM REAlly amazed and surprised to see ur ff!!!!!

what an teriffic writer u r !!!!!

my mouth was wide open wen I was reading ur latest updates!!!!

truly speaking!!!
AM SPEECHLESS!!
I DONT HAVE ANY WORD TO DESCRIBE IT!!!

U POTRAYED EVERY EMOTION SOOO WELL!!!!

HATSS OFF!!!!

STANDING OVATION!!!!!

A BIG ROUND OF APPLAUSE!!!!

šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

MAIN KUCH NAHI BIOL PAUNGI!!!!!
I AM TOTALLY DUMBSTRUCK AND WOWE!!
AND I AM STILL IN UR UDATE LAND!!!
šŸ‘


bapre!!! bas meri tariff!!! PP will die with sooo much tariff!!!!
hope i can manage to keep entertaining you like this...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

naya thread bana na parega...but isme abhi bhi reply karna baki hai...


waise i am upto something these days


hawww what r u upto nowadays ... dont tellme your budget thing is not over 😔 ... PP mein tera hi budget hila dungi 😔 ... zyada budget budget mat kar
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Pri I m speechless. I really don't know what to say about this chapter. It was one painful and scary chapter.
U have written Jo's emotions and pains beautifully in word. I felt like crying reading Jo's emotions. She was in so much pain. After going through this torture it won't be hard for her to forgive Jalal it will be impossible for her to forgive. After what he has done to her why would she care if he live or die.
I was cheerleading for Jalal all this time. But today I don't wanna talk about him. What did he think after doing this with her he will say sorry and marry her and try to give her all happiness and she will forget everything 😔 . He does understand he did a mistake but don't understand how much horrible crime it was, He does understand he had hurt her but he don't understand the depth of her pain. I can understand he wanted her in his life, I can understand his obsession but this is just unacceptable.
And the part where u described how she was lying like a corpse was most painful and I was disgusted with Jalal.

hmmm...tu toh Jalal pe bohot gussa hai...waise hona bhi chahiye...kaam hi aisa kiya usne...😔

Thnk God they found Rico. The chapters r incomplete without him.
yap...i was missing him too 😳

And Pri u r a very talented and brilliant writer šŸ‘ . I m telling u apna job chor de and start writing novels u r going to be famous šŸ˜†
wohi soch rahi hoon main...jaan pehchan me koyee publisher hai???šŸ˜†

Pls try to update soon.
Btw I like that line, "Love is selfish " .I think love is both selfish and selfless.
yeh toh Jalal ka love hai...selfish šŸ˜†...mera love toh bas sandy hai 😳

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